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DeaDSouLjaH

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!!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« on: March 02, 2002, 04:17:21 AM »
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crew votes allowed..but pls explain 'em

i'll drop if u accept ...

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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2002, 11:17:14 AM »

Ras Kass will bow down to my LYRICAL-COMPLEXITY , lines come crashin down while ToNe's filled with MYSTICAL-PERPLEXITY/
your lines showin no direction like fallin in a PARABOLIC-TRAJECTORY , you jus spittin drunk lines like some ALCOHOLIC-EMCEE/
I'm lyrically an EXTROVERT and shall publically EXECUTE-YOU , leave you n tha K.I.N.G.S as a DESTITUTE-CREW/
Deadsouljah posessin flows faster than KRAYZIE-BONE , rip this guy with a HAZY-"TONE", my words tight like da pussy of SHARON STONE/
do you think your lines can eva seriously TEST-ME ?? before I spit i think itz BEST-you-FLEE/
you perfectly fit the description of a WACK-EMCEE , DeaDsouljah shall neva end this lyrical ATTACK-SPREE/
I SWIFTLY-COMPOSE-VENEMOUS-LINES , ToNe shall be da victim if he thinks he can TRICK ME-n-OPPOSE-my-DEVIOUS-CRIMES/
my lines like da foundation for a WEED-PLANTATION ,undergoing a sudden attack TRANSORMATION which quickly lead u to PROCEED-to-MEDICATION/
battlin DeAdSoUlJaH you jus show PLAIN-HESITATION , your rymes like a cd undergoing STRAINED-ROTATION, you went home to momma and COMPLAINED-CONSTIPATION /
rymin is a game of da SURVIVAL-OF-THE FITTEST  , battlin Deadsouljah you will neva undergo REVIVAL-FROM-this-CONTEST/
My punches hit u hard like I possess a BLACK-BELT , i'll hit u real personal , since long ago my HEART-MELT/
i'm like Don Corleone ,u know how his enemies IS-DEALT , i'll be far more ruthless and make sure when u die da pain IS-FELT/
hittin lines at u wid max speed like MAURICE-GREEN , you're gonna lie on your death bed like some OBESE-""QUEEN""/
your rymes filled with archaic words like it originated from "Nineteen-Oh-FOUR", i guess itz time I show u WCC's exit DOOR/
look at ya computer screen , your lines can be termed as ALMOST-OBSENCE , i'll jus rip u apart and quick FROST-ya-SPLEEN/
to you, "quit rymin is my PIECE-OF-ADVICE!!" ,to make it faster i'll jus brandish my gat and be PRECISE-TWICE/


no...beef aiight...jus spittin..


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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2002, 02:23:45 PM »
good rhyme, nice multies, a lot better than the one u spat vs csn imo

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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #3 on: March 02, 2002, 06:45:40 PM »
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good rhyme, nice multies, a lot better than the one u spat vs csn imo

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Agreed.
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #4 on: March 02, 2002, 08:49:12 PM »
^^bump wherez tone ..
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #5 on: March 03, 2002, 07:44:15 AM »
ToNe1904 Told Me He Hasnt Had Much Time. I'm Sure He'll Respond Though.
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #6 on: March 03, 2002, 08:18:59 AM »
tones a pussy, lolol jk, naw the dogg said he aint in a mood to rhyme or sumtin, but hes sure to pack sum heat

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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #7 on: March 03, 2002, 12:01:41 PM »
aiight mah bad homie. ill respond tahday hopefully. no later then tomorrow for sure tho. i aint read yur verse yet....but damn homie...yur bars are like paragraphz LOL i thought mine were long  :P
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #8 on: March 04, 2002, 10:46:10 AM »
ToNe explodin like Chernoble when I HIT-THA-SCENE, mah "nuclear" lyrikz gotcha linez glowin so yah SPITZ-ARE-GREEN/
Radioactive rhymez, radiation shootz frum mah lipz, im KILLIN-WIT-MY-SPITS, after-effectz felt generationz later so yah grand CHILDREN-ILL-FRUM-THIS/
Sayin "Grandpa! how come i keep droolin, have three eyez, and an INBALANCED-DOME?" n u reply "Sorry kidz, its cus many years ago I was a dumbass n CHALLENGED-TONE"/
U jus anotha "cracked" out MC, wit tha name DEADSOULJAH but yah couldnt be dispersed thru tha hood even if tha FEDS-SOLD-YAH/ *
Wanna step up? U jus ELECTED-FOR-PAIN, foo ima VET-TO-THA-GAME, yah maybe "Most Improved Rhymer" but ima THREAT-TO-YAH-FAME/
Like im Nas n yur Jay-Z i show no RESPECT-FAH-YAH-NAME, diss yah hard, left u DEJECTED-N-SHAMED, youz a real dick"rider" but ToNe jus DISCONNECTED-THA-REINS/
I peeped yah verse, jus like i EXPECTED-YAH-LAME, u could neva "flow" or "think" on mah level if my sickness INJECTED-YAH-VEINS and INFECTED-YAH-BRAIN/
Aim mah strap fah yah skull, call me tha HEAD-MOLDER, fear of death n i can HEAR-IT-IN-YAH/
But youz a clown, couldnt be a real DEADSOULJAH even wit Tupacs SPIRIT-IN-YAH/
"Payin" yah duez by gettin beat by ToNe, n u RECEIVIN-ADVANCES but thiz battle is a joke, no one BELIEVES-IN-YAH-CHANCES/
An MVP rhymer? u couldnt be a "franchise player" if yah name was STEVIE-FRANCIS/ **
Defeat me? Now thas a MIRACLE-YAH-ASKIN cus no way for u stop tha "shotz" frum thiz LYRIKILL-ASSASSIN/
Ima be tha "bully" in yah lunchline, takin "secondz" while u still ASKIN-FAH-FIRSTS/
"Deadsouljah" cant "Rest In Peace" cus ToNez BLASTIN-THA-HEARSE/
This bullshit battle i blessed, made yah rhyme "funky" cus i jus whiped my ASS-WIT-YAH-VERSE/

explainations~
*FBI helped to push crack into the inner cities
**Stevie Francis, a basketball player for tha Rockets. Nickname "Stevie Franchise"

aiight vote yall!

no beef deadsouljah...good shit

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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #9 on: March 04, 2002, 10:49:31 AM »
votes pls ..
nice spit tone
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #10 on: March 04, 2002, 02:04:19 PM »
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Deadsouljah posessin flows faster than KRAYZIE-BONE , rip this guy with a HAZY-"TONE", my words tight like da pussy of SHARON STONE/

Sharon stone is an old ho in my opinon her pussy is loose.
DeadSouljah i've seen better from u... ur shit did not make alot of sense to me

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Radioactive rhymez, radiation shootz frum mah lipz, im KILLIN-WIT-MY-SPITS, after-effectz felt generationz later so yah grand CHILDREN-ILL-FRUM-THIS/
Sayin "Grandpa! how come i keep droolin, have three eyez, and an INBALANCED-DOME?" n u reply "Sorry kidz, its cus many years ago I was a dumbass n CHALLENGED-TONE"/

tone did not spit his best shit but his shit was still tight and made sense to me

my vote = ToNe1904
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #11 on: March 04, 2002, 07:37:29 PM »
thanx for votin timelock ...
mo votes pls
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #12 on: March 04, 2002, 08:52:46 PM »
yo whatup my dawgs, Aight, my review...

I think you both spit some good shit

I think Deadsouljah you came hard again, I mean u usually do,and this time you did that again, nice shit, you multis are still incomplete, but I wont pay too much attention to that, your punches were average, for example : "you just spitting drunk lines like u a drunk emcee" these kind of punches are nice, but not real hard, not much wordplay, but like I said, You came hardcore with a good vocab. So fo real, pretty Ill.

Dead Souljah - 4.2/5

Tone I think you are very good with multis. got the feeling as if you make multis by just thwowin in any word, but I am wrongf, coz your sentences make sense ! lol.
so ill multis,  nice punches. Your flow is average, but you came hard enough to make me forget that, nice wordlay, but D.S's vocab was more sophisticated, overall tight shit.

Tone - 4.4/5

VOTE - TONE
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #13 on: March 04, 2002, 09:44:17 PM »
2-0 keep votin yall!!!!
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Re: !!DEADSOULJAH vs TONE1904!!
« Reply #14 on: March 04, 2002, 11:15:57 PM »
aight....

Imma vote for DeadSoulja, I liked his vocab, tight multis, n consistent flow. Good shit, but not the best ive seen.
My fav lines were:
"your rymes filled with archaic words like it originated from "Nineteen-Oh-FOUR", i guess itz time I show u WCC's exit DOOR/"

Tone came hard and showed a good battle. But I was just feelin DeadSoulja's on this one.
My fav lines were:
"ToNe explodin like Chernoble when I HIT-THA-SCENE, mah "nuclear" lyrikz gotcha linez glowin so yah SPITZ-ARE-GREEN/
Radioactive rhymez, radiation shootz frum mah lipz, im KILLIN-WIT-MY-SPITS, after-effectz felt generationz later so yah grand CHILDREN-ILL-FRUM-THIS/"


Vote=DeadSoulja

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