Author Topic: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT  (Read 1068 times)

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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #25 on: February 25, 2002, 11:39:05 PM »
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sorry for the inconvinience yall, ima spit soon,  so when KVB n Illicit are done droppin, Melanin will prevail.

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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #26 on: February 26, 2002, 08:36:21 AM »
Ya'll forgot bout me...lol i will be postin'
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #27 on: February 26, 2002, 02:16:59 PM »
Primo finally returns back in action after a long break and his 1000th post..Newbies don't know bout this vet.Creative metaphors ,Ill lyrical dominance..Straight up hip hop  



"C"orny "S"hit "N"ever can "fade" Primo,unlike a "florescent shade" under "black paint"\\
"Micro"scopic rays can't even see the inferiority behind those "small"-minded rhymes that are sick they claim\\
Spawn, you got less chances of winning, than "paralyzed kids" playing "sharades"!\\
You couldnt "blow up spots" if your "freckles" carried "grenades"\\
"Echolocation" could be your major but you still couldn't "bat"tle\\
I leave my 1% of my illness for colateral, your 99 percent wackness and the 1% ill gets takin' away for all that bullshit you babble\\
Is it nessesary to hyphonate every group of words?\\
With a verse that takes 1600 years to observe?\\
My flows "clog arteries" cuz i spit pure "phat"ness\\
My shit hits so hard that Austrailia jumps right off its axis, Grab an Atlas Melbourne is Now at Minneapolis\\
Well,I have an "Eyedea"..I'll go to Melbourne, Minnesota..use you vertebre as a mic and render you backless\\
I'm a Keystyle Dictator, I never "stall in" between lines,and i have more "fidel"ity that "a dolph"in\\
I am "Re-Vaulting",I am jumping up back on top again\\
I punch you "squares" so hard you turn to "parralelagrams"\\
Your "useless" like a vantrilaquist with no speach glands\\
It's "non-sense", Your content makes us believe you sold your contact lense for rent\\
You must be blind,you don't have "Homer's" inner visions for abilitie's to represent\\
I'd rather you call me shit,It is from dehydrated fecal matter that an airbourne disease evolved\\
It makes your internal organs disolve,CSN's now bleedin' there liver from out they balls\\
Most people are intimidated by Maxi's so-called superior lyrical stature\\
He just a younger version of Crocidile Dundee , in a gap-shirt\\
Son, I'll Claw threw your appendix,i'm the human verson of a velocorapter\\
Evaporatin' Skillaztic's orfaces,fracture your vocal chords like porcellin\\
"De"feet" You before the war-begins, Decapatate you below the knees in dig your fuckin' stubs-in to the pavement\\
I got a realistic dummy permently mounted in the cement\\
Now i can practice stabbin' Hypodermic needles threw your head an pump-in endorphins\\
Ya'll got "beef" ? "Utter" my name, You "Cow"words"\\
I returned by bombin'-you-herbs, Primo-Suspect will emmerse\\
I fracture all matter,Splittin' quarks causin' apocalyptic patterns\\
CSN is done! time to take the Elite for the top of the ladder\\



Explinantions..That Eyedea line plays together because Eyedea is a rapper from minnesota.
The Dictator line: Joe STALIN,FIDEL castro ,and ADOLF hitler.are all dictators.The Homer reference refers to Greek Mythology Writer HOMER..He is blind and envisions his storys..

Peace
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #28 on: February 26, 2002, 03:34:46 PM »
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Primo finally returns back in action after a long break and his 1000th post..Newbies don't know bout this vet.Creative metaphors ,Ill lyrical dominance..Straight up hip hop  



"C"orny "S"hit "N"ever can "fade" Primo,unlike a "florescent shade" under "black paint"\\
"Micro"scopic rays can't even see the inferiority behind those "small"-minded rhymes that are sick they claim\\
Spawn, you got less chances of winning, than "paralyzed kids" playing "sharades"!\\
You couldnt "blow up spots" if your "freckles" carried "grenades"\\
"Echolocation" could be your major but you still couldn't "bat"tle\\
I leave my 1% of my illness for colateral, your 99 percent wackness and the 1% ill gets takin' away for all that bullshit you babble\\
Is it nessesary to hyphonate every group of words?\\
With a verse that takes 1600 years to observe?\\
My flows "clog arteries" cuz i spit pure "phat"ness\\
My shit hits so hard that Austrailia jumps right off its axis, Grab an Atlas Melbourne is Now at Minneapolis\\
Well,I have an "Eyedea"..I'll go to Melbourne, Minnesota..use you vertebre as a mic and render you backless\\
I'm a Keystyle Dictator, I never "stall in" between lines,and i have more "fidel"ity that "a dolph"in\\
I am "Re-Vaulting",I am jumping up back on top again\\
I punch you "squares" so hard you turn to "parralelagrams"\\
Your "useless" like a vantrilaquist with no speach glands\\
It's "non-sense", Your content makes us believe you sold your contact lense for rent\\
You must be blind,you don't have "Homer's" inner visions for abilitie's to represent\\
I'd rather you call me shit,It is from dehydrated fecal matter that an airbourne disease evolved\\
It makes your internal organs disolve,CSN's now bleedin' there liver from out they balls\\
Most people are intimidated by Maxi's so-called superior lyrical stature\\
He just a younger version of Crocidile Dundee , in a gap-shirt\\
Son, I'll Claw threw your appendix,i'm the human verson of a velocorapter\\
Evaporatin' Skillaztic's orfaces,fracture your vocal chords like porcellin\\
"De"feet" You before the war-begins, Decapatate you below the knees in dig your fuckin' stubs-in to the pavement\\
I got a realistic dummy permently mounted in the cement\\
Now i can practice stabbin' Hypodermic needles threw your head an pump-in endorphins\\
Ya'll got "beef" ? "Utter" my name, You "Cow"words"\\
I returned by bombin'-you-herbs, Primo-Suspect will emmerse\\
I fracture all matter,Splittin' quarks causin' apocalyptic patterns\\
CSN is done! time to take the Elite for the top of the ladder\\



Explinantions..That Eyedea line plays together because Eyedea is a rapper from minnesota.
The Dictator line: Joe STALIN,FIDEL castro ,and ADOLF hitler.are all dictators.The Homer reference refers to Greek Mythology Writer HOMER..He is blind and envisions his storys..

Peace


damn that shit was off the hook!!!! i really don't think none of the csn could come back after that.....just my opinion
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #29 on: February 27, 2002, 11:12:54 AM »
uppin'
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #30 on: February 27, 2002, 09:46:06 PM »

The way we used to do it...

"Maxi got at me on Msn and told me bout it...lol
I could give a fuck about a battle..but my homies are in here"

I luv my Fam...


The colorless rhymes spitt the color of brown
when the skin tone is 3 shades or less of the crown..
that's bronze skin..color of the original ruler's of Cali
when the Hatesrats spitt's it's like a cheerleader doing the splits
bucknaked at a spanker's rally..lol
hard dick's and open mouth's
stright outta the open gap yall got from this freespitten shroud
20/20 the moniker the change the vision
the Liquid incision that has me seeing double
like gettin' your head splitt twice in a head on collision
with the certified crimson after the white vail get's dipped in
the shade pail become's colored in some red chunk's of hail
of flesh cause the Cannible mc's have a frenzy for stress
it's all or nothin' no less
the choice ain't no longer freedom or death....(Sissies)....lol
kickin' knowledge like a term was served
but after the war is over it's only ya mouth that served
the brain is swerved over the pinched nerve that your whole style is curved
like a spine with scoliosis it's a crooked ordeal
yall lack not only the color the heart the skillz to reveal
take a loss like lost time when the inmates on Wcc appeal
a dictionary a page with your words emerge the real
you can't talk like knowledge is your best bet
we've been here and always will cause it's a conflict
between good and evil and dick's and pussies
after the nutt what comes next...
it's u...
tell the truth you have to invent yall style..
me just spittin' shitt from the heart with an intent since a juvinile
the Croc-I dile 20/20 in tone
see me when It's all said written n' done
it's plain to see simple n' plane
written word's that don't mean shitt when the beats are playin'

yo it's offf the dome 100%...fuck it take it for what it's worth...lol
CsN (Family) style...2oo2

about half of a half of a nutt... ;)
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #31 on: February 27, 2002, 09:51:22 PM »
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The way we used to do it...

"Maxi got at me on Msn and told me bout it...lol
I could give a fuck about a battle..but my homies are in here"

I luv my Fam...


The colorless rhymes spitt the color of brown
when the skin tone is 3 shades or less of the crown..
that's bronze skin..color of the original ruler's of Cali
when the Hatesrats spitt's it's like a cheerleader doing the splits
bucknaked at a spanker's rally..lol
hard dick's and open mouth's
stright outta the open gap yall got from this freespitten shroud
20/20 the moniker the change the vision
the Liquid incision that has me seeing double
like gettin' your head splitt twice in a head on collision
with the certified crimson after the white vail get's dipped in
the shade pail become's colored in some red chunk's of hail
of flesh cause the Cannible mc's have a frenzy for stress
it's all or nothin' no less
the choice ain't no longer freedom or death....(Sissies)....lol
kickin' knowledge like a term was served
but after the war is over it's only ya mouth that served
the brain is swerved over the pinched nerve that your whole style is curved
like a spine with scoliosis it's a crooked ordeal
yall lack not only the color the heart the skillz to reveal
take a loss like lost time when the inmates on Wcc appeal
a dictionary a page with your words emerge the real
you can't talk like knowledge is your best bet
we've been here and always will cause it's a conflict
between good and evil and dick's and pussies
after the nutt what comes next...
it's u...
tell the truth you have to invent yall style..
me just spittin' shitt from the heart with an intent since a juvinile
the Croc-I dile 20/20 in tone
see me when It's all said written n' done
it's plain to see simple n' plane
written word's that don't mean shitt when the beats are playin'

yo it's offf the dome 100%...fuck it take it for what it's worth...lol
CsN (Family) style...2oo2

about half of a half of a nutt... ;)
Hatesrats


Good rhyme... Infinite & Illicit get to postin... I'll drop soon.
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #32 on: February 28, 2002, 03:21:22 AM »
aight finally, long awaited lol

CSN hoes wanna Copy Style Novelty rhymes created by Melanin/
we done killed yall fools Body Piled Cruelty from da chosen kin/
experience shit done changed when initiated in the game/
u lame ass hoes we switch lanes crew 6 deep bringin pain/
mathematically calculate how many hours yall got left to breathe/
we seethe ya fuckin skin with lyrics rough n dope, too tough tah cope/
elope while ya can, fag-clan led by maxi-padz, fuck that sissy who adraid of rats/
weak cats, suck on the mic with saggin pants trying tah be phat/
Skillaztic n Spawn, whats wrong? wannabe hoes with Skills-Lastin til Dawn/
then they be gone, fading like sunshine covered by clowds/
fearin my shouts, Melanin reppin is my daily route, without a doubt/
rather losin with pride than fightin with fagz, movin like tides, slicing ya backs/
conlcusion to our horrible wrath is that we come in packs/
but the difference is the chemistry is mutual but that what yall lack/
cant even spit one line without biting my rhyme/
but then be like "that muthafucka lying, stole my shine" stop crying!/
im sick and tired of yall thinkin ur sick, if the only thing ur good at is lickin yall dicks/
ive proven my point enough, wasnt witty but still fucked u up/
now lets have infinite and KVB rippin ya gut/  

peace, fuck it.
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #33 on: February 28, 2002, 04:53:59 AM »
Yo......No Beef just rhymin.......Naw, Fuck that, take this shit personal......Came from the heart.....I mean this shit!!!!


I'm on proffesional shit, rap pugalist, it's Infinite/
CSN- Your crew is futulists, styles bullshit, useless MC's/
So I'm fuckin you up worse then MS and Myelin Seaths/

You Better duck, Maxi better cover up his mouth piece/
Muzzle up your grill, swallow this Jagged Little Pill/
I'm like a puzzle that's put together 3 dimensional/
From every angle attackin, Maxi's so young that his voice cracks/
One of those younger kids I would laugh at/
At this job downtown I used to work at/
Had me timin' in at mental hospitals cleanin floormats/
And all the narcissists reminded me of that bitch Skillzatic/
So absorbed in himself he suffers from overconfidence/
But this disease is normal in little children/

So I'm gone let it sit and Spit at Spawns for a minute/
It seems like you fell off like Erik Sermon did/
Your rhymes come up shorter then a midget's kid/
Infinite makes heads spin like a globe on a broken axis/

And what Hates_Rats really needs is more practice/
So lost in ignorance Infinite breaks you down like Pragmatics/
Suffer the consequences of your actions/
Primo fathered your style so ya'll are all cleptomaniacs/
Quit stealin his shit, Melanin Styles so righteous got muthafucka's believin in it/
Allah giudeth how he see's it, so I'm brining 360 degrees of that shit called knowledge/
My mentals delve deeper than philosophers with college doctorates/

CSN's a crew of mental misfits, check into a clinic, see a psychologist/
Talk to someone who gives a shit, and get your rough edges polished/
I'm gone, I'm tired of given attention to kids with control drama's.


I'm ghost.....Suck my muthafuckin dick....This is Infinite.....Can't fuck with mines....Go get your own shit!!!!





 

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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #34 on: February 28, 2002, 08:28:32 AM »
Now may we get some voting in here
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #35 on: February 28, 2002, 08:38:37 AM »
^ Hey.. I ain't dropped yet... chill out... don't show disrespect... I'll drop very soon.
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #36 on: February 28, 2002, 09:58:12 AM »
The time has come...


Maxi-Padz:

I'll employ my master PLAN, CREEP, STRIKE and BITE like a snake in the GRASS/
Then stomp on Maxi's ASS like my name was EVERLAST, I got ya CRACK; you the RED-NECK FAG gettin SMA-CKED up and JACKED/
Splatter your MASS, then DASH with sharp Army boots filled with CASH/
KVB's highly CLASSED, made of stainless steel BUILT TO LAST, who wanna MASH? who want their fuckin' heads DE-TACH-ED when CSN bodies fall for my AXE?/
I shed upon my victims my lyrical RASH; Do not TRESPASS, I believe I've expressed myself CLEARLY/
Flexing twin Glocks and Uzis to THOSE who weren't SUPPOSED to FEAR me, yours SINCERELY, CSN be rhyming so MERELY, I'll have to lock you up for misplaced BLASPHEMY/


Spawn:

Who the fuck is this "SPAWN"; claim to be in for a BRAWN, when you be battling like SHAWN?*/
I'll cut out your fucking lungs like the grass on my LAWN, your value's so SMALL; I could probably have ya PAWNED, let you suck my dick all night till the big "MAWN" then I choke ya at DAWN/
Crack up your JAW, take it out, put it ACROSS your main oxygen SOURCE**, now you're bound to be gasping in AWE/
Can't touch the skills shedded from the above PLATEAU, another life LOST, as I choke you with full FORCE/
Till you gulping up sperm from visiting Maxi-PADZ's DRAWERS, your gay ACTI-VI-TIES will never SEIZE or stay CALM, ring the faggot ALARM, you know I see through and expose the FACADE/


SkillsAztic:

Who the fuck is "SkillsAztic", I'm a fuckin' rhyming LUNATIC, known for killing certified gay sex ADDICTS/
That shit's becoming as HABIT, you can't stop me with a crew soft as PLASTIC, y'all faggots' ERRATIC/
I figured your rhymes would be "INTERGALACTIC", well, you can HAVE IT, this cold iron fist will SMASH your ASS into space FRAGMENTS/
I shed lyrical MAGIC, whose effects are DISASTREOUS, y'all get SMACKED like FAKE-ASS Jesse JACKSON, bow down to your MASTER/
Fucking your wife, then I BLAST you, smoke ya up like Fidel CASTRO, KVB will break out and OUTLAST you CSN FAGGOTS/


HatesRats:

Who the fuck is this "Hatesrats", I see that you RAPE-PETS, but muthafucka you still WACK, THREE bullets through EACH of your "KNEE-PADZ" will make a strong negative I-M-PACT/
Paralyze "Hatesrats", so now he can't hit ME back, he can't even RE-ACT/
SAD-TO-SEE your payback chances DRAS-TIC-LY DECREASE, why you fuckin with ME?/
I'll fuckin snipe you from an outside TREE, far BENEATH your REACH, while you sittin inside readin your gay MAGAZINES/
I have not come for PEACE, I came to settle my DEEDS, for THESE THIR-TEEN bullets you will RECIEVE, your bitch ass is WEAK/
So WEAK; you SEE, I have to REVEAL I almost had SYM-PATHY, please BELIEVE I'd hate to SEAL your final DEMISE/
CSN's gay OR-GIES is now HIS-TO-RY, APPEASED the whole TEAM with EASE in one rhyming PIECE, the rhyming BEAST, DEFEAT 'em when I MEET 'em, then choke 'em to death and still BEAT 'em, they were RETREATING before I even got to GREET 'em, end of your SEQUEL, CSN are now DELETED/

R.I.P.

Hoes; whipe your TEARS, don't get your fake lipstick SMEARED; Melanin is HERE, we gon' bring home the gold medal this YEAR/
And any QUEER who would DARE to INTERFERE will get their thoughts CLEARED faster than VOLUNTEERS offered to fuck Britney SPEARS/
We should be FEARED...


And that's about it...


* Shawn Carter a/k/a Jay-Z... I got love for Jay... but even I admit he ain't the tightest when it comes to battles.

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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #37 on: February 28, 2002, 10:03:20 AM »
...Let the Voting Begin....

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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #38 on: February 28, 2002, 10:30:20 AM »
First Thing....Easily The Best Battle To Ever Go Down At WCC. No Wack Bars From Any Of The Cats That Ended Up Spitting. Second Thing Is There Ain't No Beef, And If You Dont Like My Votes Then You'll Have To Come Up With A Strong Reason Before I Delete It. I Guess The Voting Will Be The Same As K.I.N.G.S. Vs. Elite?!

Melanin Deficiant

.:bLaDe:. - Another Dope Verse From You. Some Points With The Flow Wasn't Amazing But You Had Sufficent Vocab And Wordplay To Weigh That Out - 4/5

DeaDSouLjaH - Erm, This Verse Scared Me...Thats How Good It Was. Had Everything A Rhyme Needs...Flowed Perfectly, And Your Personal Disses Were Dope. If I Could Give A Higher Rating Then 5 Out Of 5 I Would, But Unfortuantly - 5/5

Pr1mo - What A Way To Return, This Verse Had A Dope Flow, Wordplay, Punches, And A Couple Of Tight Multis. This Verse Was Tight On The Overall - 4.8/5

Illicit - Your Wordplay Isn't The Best I've Seen, But There Somethings About Your Rhymes That Get Me Hooked Half Way Through. Your Tight, I Think It Must Be Your Flow - 4/5

Infinite59 - Your Vocabulary Was Crazy.....And Your Disses, Mad Personal. You Can Almost Feel The Hate There. I Have Problems Following Your Rhymes At Time But That Can't Take Much Away Because This Verse Came HARD! - 4.3/5

KVB - This Was A Dope Verse, Even On Your Standards. Couple Of Tight Multis And You Have Dope Flows. Not To Many Punches, But I Though This Verse Didn't Needed To Be Flooded In Them. - 4/5

Average = 4.35/5

CSN

Maxi-Padz - You Know How To Diss People...Thats For Sure. Dope Punches, Great Flow And Multis. It Shows Your The Dopest Rhymer On The Board Right Here. Disses Were Top Notch - 4.8/5

SKiLLaZTiC - The Way You Come So Hard And Then Manage To Keep Up An Impressive Flow Is Dope. You Gradually Got Tighter Even If The Verse Wasn't Bogged Down With Multis And Wordplay....It Was Dope. - 4.1/5

Spawn - No Offence Meaned Here, But Your Rhyme Wasn't That Good. The Only Thing In Your Favour Is How Hard You Came. It Had Tight Flow Aswell Though. - 3.6/5

_Hatesrats_ - Only Just Above Average.....Not Meaning To Hate But This Verse Didn't Do Shit For Me. Flow Was Weak At Point And Your Wordplay....Just Aint. - 3.3/5

Average = 3.95/5


[size=8]VOTE - MELANIN DEFICIANT[/size]
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« Reply #39 on: February 28, 2002, 11:02:29 AM »
CSN

Maxi:
Tight rhyme with dope multis and metha's .. not the best flow ive seen.. but well written - 4.7

Skillaztic
OG rhyme witn no multis, but who said i's needed? ... really dope flow, but some punches wasnt agressive enough.. - 4.4

SPAWN
To simplistic rhyme, but still nice punches... - 3.4

Hatesrats:
a lyricly really dope rhyme.... could been flawless if it was ment as a show up rhyme.. but this is a battle.. you got lack of agresivitry and minor punches...  - 4.2


Melanin

Blade
Lack of dominating punches... lack of outstandning multis, but dope wordplay.. pretty good flow even though the bars arent equal - 4.0


Deadsouljah
A Really Dope Rhyme, but way to long bars...ill multis, but couple of weak punches.. some bars dont make sense... 4.7

Primo:
The content is really good with nice punches... but the bars are long from even and most of time dont even rhyme... - 3.8


CeeRide
Nice shit with dope punches.. dope flow.. but still i feels like a big part is missing - 4.0


Infinite
Lyricly a dope rhyme, but couple of weak punches  - 4.2


KVB
WAAAY too long bars.... I'll cut out your fucking lungs like the grass on my LAWN, your value's so SMALL; I could probably have ya PAWNED, let you suck my dick all night till the big "MAWN" then I choke ya at DAWN/ ...the bars aint near to equal dimensions.. but you got really dope multis and punches.... even though you included couple of weak ones, like if you just wanted to fill the rhyme - 4.2


CSN:         4.18
MELANIN:     4.15

Winner: CSN
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #40 on: February 28, 2002, 11:47:35 AM »
3.8 lol...Maybe they don't rhyme in your accent but they do in mine
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« Reply #41 on: February 28, 2002, 11:55:04 AM »
fuck it homie,  at least he voted.  

KEEP IT UP!!!!


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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #42 on: February 28, 2002, 12:02:53 PM »
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3.8 lol...Maybe they don't rhyme in your accent but they do in mine


i guess u're rhyming in italian ....
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #43 on: February 28, 2002, 12:05:40 PM »
whatever i don't care..I aint got shit to prove cuz even my keystyles are hot
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #44 on: February 28, 2002, 12:20:33 PM »
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Maxi
Excelent multis and wordplay as usual... didn't flow as nice as some of your ish though. - 4.4/5 (2.5 is average)

Skillaztic
The flow comes nice and there are some nice punches but you lose your place in a few spots and the lack of multis hurts a lot. - 3.6/5 (2.5 is average)

SPAWN
I agree with I-Bo on this one... you came too simplistic with this piece. There were a few nice punches but it's not very technical. - 2.9/5 (2.5 is average)

Hatesrats
You didn't really come hard enough but it was so technically sound (wordplay, multis, etc.) that you get a good score from this judge. - 3.8 (2.5 is average)


Melanin Deficiant
Blade
Very nice wordplay but not a lot of "smack-that-boy-to-the-floor" punches. You came with very nice multis, but a few seemed a little awkward. - 3.7/5 (2.5 is average)

DeadSouljah
A true classic... this piece came with so much aggression and although a lack o multis hurts you a lot just about everything else is in the 4.5-4.9 range. - 4.0/5 (2.5 is average)

Pr1mo
Not a huge fan of your long bars, but I love your punches. ~
This piece might've left all of CSN on crutches. ~ - 3.8/5 (2.5 is average)

CeeRide
A really nice flow (that's a staple of your pieces) and great multis and wordplay throughout make this the most technically-sound piece on your squad (even outdoing Blade's) it just feels a little short, feels like you still had shit to launch. - 4.3/5 (2.5 is average)

Infinite
You must have the lyricism book in front of you when you write because this is an excellent piece technically. It just felt that you didn't come hard enough in a few places. - 3.9/5 (2.5 is average)

KVB
Your uneven bar length threw me off a couple of times but your wordplay and multis came hot and your punches were solid. - 4.2/5 (2.5 is average)

CSN: 3.675/5
Melanin Deficiant: 3.983/5

VOTE = Melanin Deficiant
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #45 on: February 28, 2002, 12:25:37 PM »
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maxi- you had some dope ass metaphors but unfortunately some of them didn't make NO sense and a lot of them were pretty childish ...3.75/5

skillatic- yo man you came dope as usual, i love your shit cuz you always come hard and personal imo 4.3/5

spawn- you came ok....i liked the hardness but there were a lot of things missing which could've boosted your verse 3/5

hatesrats-learn how to battle you were wayyyyy off subject 2/5


M D

blade- you had a dope verse, some of them were hard and comedy as fuck which was cool, you had couple parts that weren't needed but overall is good 4/5

dead souljah- damn homie like everybody else is saying, you really stepped up in this battle and gave a big help to your team 4.6/5

primo- i made an statment earlier about how none of the CSN could come back from primos verse and i was right...primo brought heat...4.7/5

llict- you came HARD for the most part...had some ill metaphors here and there and overall good...4/5

infinite-oh my GOODNESS!!! this has to be by far your best shit......i've never heard him go off like this before, on a personal hardness level which i love....4.5/5

KVB- you came alright, your shit got boring after a while but overall it wasn't bad 3.5/5



CSN:3.34
MD:4.22






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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #46 on: February 28, 2002, 12:50:08 PM »
_____CSN____


maxi- Nice shit, as always the mutis wer dope, and the puches were good. But the flow was average, overall 4,5/5

skillatic- nice shit, a bit lack of multis, but dope shit anyway, 4/5

spawn- I liked it, ill shit. Not prefect though, but good. 3,9/5

hatesrats- I read it , it was nice, but u had lack of mutli, punches methatphores, even though it was pretty hard. 3,6/5


Mela D

blade- dope shiot blade, incomplete multis whcih borught it down, good flow, and nice punches 4,3/5

dead souljah- Also incomplete mutlis, but very hard punches, and just easy to read.  4.5/5

primo- I like the wordlay of this, dope shit...4.73/5

llict- Tight shit dawg, hardcore. good flow...4,4/5

infinite- Tiight, it was dope, you came out dissin immedialty fromt he start and stayed focused...4.6/5

KVB- yeah pretty cool verse, need to improve though, buut its good 3.97/5



CSN:4
MelaD:4,4




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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #47 on: February 28, 2002, 12:57:05 PM »
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whatever i don't care..I aint got shit to prove cuz even my keystyles are hot


but still you had to diss me???

i dont get it....


and just to prove my point on giving him low points, here are his rhyming ends:

paint - claim
battle - babble
words - observe
dolphin - again
parralelagrams - glands
ovolved - balls ???
stature - gap-shirt
patterns -ladder

i just dont consider them as rhymes....

..but thats just a single guy's opinion
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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #48 on: February 28, 2002, 04:01:36 PM »
Much Props and Respects to everyone who has voted....Naz T, Minority, Not, Logic, I-Bo......I appreciated your reviews and comments....Great Battle.....Solid Reviews

Score 4-1 MELANIN.....KEEP VOTING
 

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Re: CSN vs. MELANIN DEFICIANT
« Reply #49 on: February 28, 2002, 07:47:47 PM »
is it till 5?

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