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[Nightmare]

i cant always control my emotions//
sumtins always botherin me//
im like an ocean in away//
very in different colors and waves//
im flowin different everyday//
i cant control the way I behave//
gotz to many problems//
to much shit 4 me//
i have no room to breath//
the only way out is if i hit da weed//
this relaxes me//
after im ripped off my ass//
dares no troubles for me//
my own personal nightmare's comin for me//
it will never die//
now half of the time im high//
i cant lie//
soon enough this shit will make me die//
cant hide from it//
soon it will find me//
then its time 4 me//