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Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic
« on: February 25, 2002, 01:42:55 PM »
15-24 bars
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Re: Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic
« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2002, 01:49:20 PM »
with a sickness twisted like a cord around a babies neck/I have never played with a full deck/ Never gave a fuck/ just held onto my luck/ more luck then a cat with nine lives/these next words will give you hives/ why should I feel anything towards you,when you'll kill me if you could/why should I feel anything about murder/maybe I would/if I thought I had a hope of caring/and those thoughts to share/ and then maybe if I was more daring/but there's something that died inside/this something I will always have to hide/playing hide and seek with those you love/hearts twisted like a rubber glove/murder comes and murder goes/where I come from,murder shows..............
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Re: Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic
« Reply #2 on: February 25, 2002, 08:12:13 PM »
You battlin' me is as stupid as your sloppy flow/
Goin toe-to-toe, verses it ya dome and make ya head-implode/
Leavin ya twisted like a car wreck, your damned soul I collect/
rearrange your face, put you in I.C.U., you can call me Gillette--/
--because my verbal commands cut though diamond with the slightest contact/
It's a fact,  like the Titantic hittin a iceberg, Sik's makin an impact/
Your words I refract, send 'em thru ya like a spear, trying to keep ya intestines in tact/
I treat women with respect but this bitch gets none from me/
She asked for it, I'm lyrically desecrating her but it's not my responsibility/
Your life is fuckin' worthless, your flow is like a fat kid with a small head, outta proportion/
Your parents made a mistake birthin' you, they should of saved us trouble and had an abortion/
But they aren't bright like you steppin to this gargantuan/
It won't be long before the rigamortis sets in so go make reservations with Forest Lawn/
My words are hardcore like pr0n while yours is simple like the mentality of a dumb blonde/
Ya gettin RIPPED,  HIT by the contents of this FULL CLIP/
Bodies STIFF on the GROUND, HELL BOUND I'm sick of the BULLSHIT you SPIT/
Your one deminsional while I come at you at different angles/
MANGLE and STRANGLE ya with mah claws, slashin you like a BANGEL/
Eye balls dangle from the socket, K.I.N.G.S. weakness so your a easy target/
Take pictures of your battered body and so you can see the graphic detail enlarge it/
You betta recognize, bringin drama like an abandoned babies cries/
Right between the head, your dead, ya last images seein me wavin' "BYE BYE"/////////////













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Re: Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2002, 08:40:47 PM »
Ruthless yur rhymes are getting better n better. N tha verse u wrote here i liked. but for a "battle" verse, it didnt attack Sikotic at all really. Sikotic had way harder punches.

vote=sikotic

keep at it ruthless
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Re: Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic
« Reply #4 on: February 26, 2002, 10:40:15 AM »
Thanks for the vote so far.

Come on we need more people.
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Re: Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic
« Reply #5 on: February 26, 2002, 10:55:18 AM »
RUTHLESSSOLJAH REVIEW
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Damnit, ruth! What'd I tell you about posting your rhymes in a giant blob like that?! it makes it so much harder to read! For fuck's sake... learn to use the goddamn "Enter" key. LOL... I'm just joking but it would be a lot earier to read if you made a line-break after every bar.

Getting away from your formatting though... this didn't feel like a battle piece, your focus waned in too many places and although you had some nice "make-a-man-stop-and-think" lines it came to inconsistent. Work at your wordplay and your multis...

Q to NoT: GODDAMNIT, MAN! WHY DO YOU SAY THAT IN EVERY BATTLE TO EVERYONE!
A: Because obviously nobody's getting it.
OVERALL RATING: 2.6/5 (2.5 is average)

SIKOTIC REVIEW
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A shortage of multis (especially in the opening) hurts you a bit but you maintained your focus through almost the entire peace and your wordplay was on point! I haven't given a rating over 3.8 to anyone here yet but you take it easily. A very nice piece and in large part an example of what more people should do.
OVERALL RATING: 4.1/5

VOTE = Sikotic
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Re: Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic
« Reply #6 on: February 26, 2002, 03:59:11 PM »
ruthless is steadily improving but...

sikotic took it to another level

vote= sikotic
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Re: Ruthless Soljah verses Sikotic
« Reply #7 on: February 26, 2002, 07:49:49 PM »
Good battle ruthless. Keep at it cause your doing alot better.

Peace
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