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//ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« on: February 23, 2002, 05:32:27 PM »
15-20 bars
3-0 KO,  of 5-0
crew votes explain,  u basically know tha rules




Please TELL ME why it came to this TIMELOCK//
this be your own personal HELL G cuz for a DIME u suck COCK//
i know it was u that changed my BANNER provided u wit LAUGHTER//
now its time u face my lyrical HAMMER,  this goin be your personal RAPTURE//
your rhymes old like WINE but far from FINE//
at time goes by your skill DECLINES,  cuz your style runs thin like TWINE//
you embarassing tha kings wit those WACK VERSES//
foe dissin me you goin ride in some BLACK HERSES//
so what if i get no VOTES,  big deal if i LOSE//
cuz i know u a bitch ass JOKE,  cuz either way u gettin downed like a alcholic downs BOOZE//
u stupid like GOMA,  i know u CLAIMIN CALIFORNIA//
when u left in A COMA,  dont be BLAMIN,  i tried to WARN YA//
you goin have mad REGRET,  for not givin me my RESPECT//
cuz im always a deep THREAT,  cuz im similar to a free murder SUSPECT//
cuz we both got that same MENTALITY,  i hope u ready to face your FATALITY//
u gettin dissed cuz u practice HOMOSEXUALITY,  and also like
BESTIALITY//

no beef,  its all gravy but i gotta rep c.o.d.e to tha fullest
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #1 on: February 24, 2002, 02:05:46 PM »
timelock u goin drop
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #2 on: February 25, 2002, 11:00:06 AM »
;DTight shit TOM!
Let's  see how TIMELOCK's goin' to reply.

Peace!
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2002, 12:42:12 PM »
r u goin drop an beat me already
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #4 on: February 26, 2002, 05:16:03 AM »
It's open season, when I RIP weak kats like tom, for no reason/
it's immoral, but with my lyrics, I commit treason/
Tom I Rip ur spit wit eez bitch this is just a test run/
i'mma just kick back relax and enjoy ripping u fa fun/
Ur CODE bin de-CODE-ed and what lil' skill ya had my rhyme just Eroded/
I'm da black "C.O.D.E cracker"/
up against this white wannabe rapper/
Ur a joke, u give WCC great laughter/
I know I had them all cracking up when I changed yah banner/
I guess now u think I'm some sort of crazy delinquent hacker/
hahahaha C.O.D.E. = Can Only Dick Eat/
that's what i noticed through yah encryption that's weak/
ya ova in NYC claiming Queens, not knowin' that I'm a King ova here Running Things/
I give u the truth cuz to u it hurts, the gay shit u spit i bury with u in da dirt/
From this battle ring u leave easily beat down, same look on ur face still the frown/
the crowd chants "King Time" cuz once again I leave with my Crown/

"no beef,  its all gravy but i gotta rep" K.I.N.G.S. "to tha fullest"..... ;)

i just edited it a lil' but i won already anyway
 

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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #5 on: February 26, 2002, 05:23:22 AM »
all and all, TimeLock was a little bit more agessive, and had more directed disses. I got to give it to the Son of TIme. Though watch out, 'cause the Locksmith might get ya'.... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #6 on: February 26, 2002, 06:03:37 AM »
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all and all, TimeLock was a little bit more agressive, and had more directed disses. I got to give it to the Son of TIme.
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #7 on: February 26, 2002, 06:06:40 AM »
hmm a bit similar styles, but timelock came with some iller rhymes and punches, though not bad Tom.

Vote - Timelock.
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #8 on: February 26, 2002, 09:21:51 AM »
TOM187UM REVIEW
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Most of your multis were cliche... your wordplay was mediocre at its best points... your vocab was never above average... your piece lacked meaning... basically, a below-average piece... I was a little disappointed because you have a ridiculous amount of potential that is untapped...
OVERALL RATING: 2.8/5 (2.5 is average) - formerly 2.3

TIMELOCK REVIEW
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A very solid piece... but a little disappointing coming from our crew's "franchise player"... it was still good enough to win this battle but... your multis outshone your wordplay and although your vocab was good it was inconsistent... you also seemed to lose your focus in a couple of places...
OVERALL RATING: 3.5/5 (2.5 is average)

VOTE = TimeLock
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #9 on: February 26, 2002, 09:56:59 AM »
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TOM187UM REVIEW
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Most of your multis were cliche.

can u explain this more,  i know what cliche means,  but i dont get what ur talkin bout though
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #10 on: February 26, 2002, 10:12:53 AM »
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can u explain this more,  i know what cliche means,  but i dont get what ur talkin bout though


Sure... by cliche I mean expected and without originality. I know there are other meanings but that's what I meant by it. Here are some examples...

Please TELL ME why it came to this TIMELOCK//
this be your own personal HELL G cuz for a DIME u suck COCK//
- Any multi that includes the word "G" as a syllable in its rhyme is almost guaranteed to come off "cliche". The combination of that and "hell", "dime", and "cock" makes this multi ripe with hip hop cliches. I'm not saying it's always bad to be cliche because sometimes it makes sense. But more often then not (and definitely in this case) it comes off sounding like you were just reaching for words to rhyme with your previous words that would sound "battle like". Also, calling an emcee a cheap whore has been done so many times...

you embarassing tha kings wit those WACK VERSES//
foe dissin me you goin ride in some BLACK HERSES/
- I've heard those exact multis before on several occasions. The idea of killing your opponent is totally cool/understandable in a battle verse byut there are so many more original ways of saying it.

cuz we both got that same MENTALITY,  i hope u ready to face your FATALITY//
u gettin dissed cuz u practice HOMOSEXUALITY,  and also like  
BESTIALITY//
- The first line is pretty good and I felt a strong finish coming then I saw all it was is a "you're gay/weird" diss combined with a "you fuck cows" diss. Not especially original, I'm sure we can both agree.

Actually, those are the only really good examples I can see of cliches in your verse but I still don't think it's good enough to win this battle. I'ma up your rating (good lookin' out for yourself) but this battle was a pretty one-sided affair IMO.
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #11 on: February 26, 2002, 10:20:03 AM »
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i just edited it a lil' but i won already anyway

conceited bastard lol  :P
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #12 on: February 26, 2002, 11:26:56 AM »
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TOM187UM REVIEW
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Most of your multis were cliche... your wordplay was mediocre at its best points... your vocab was never above average... your piece lacked meaning... basically, a below-average piece... I was a little disappointed because you have a ridiculous amount of potential that is untapped...
OVERALL RATING: 2.8/5 (2.5 is average) - formerly 2.3

TIMELOCK REVIEW
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A very solid piece... but a little disappointing coming from our crew's "franchise player"... it was still good enough to win this battle but... your multis outshone your wordplay and although your vocab was good it was inconsistent... you also seemed to lose your focus in a couple of places...
OVERALL RATING: 3.5/5 (2.5 is average)

VOTE = TimeLock


thanx for voting everyone

yeah NoT i did not spit my best i did not feel like spiting to hard cuz i would not have bin worth it it would just be over doing it and i all ready beat tom before so i was not in the mood to over kill him lol

peace love and sooooooul lol
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Re: //ITS ON TIMELOCK (tom187um vs timelock)
« Reply #13 on: February 26, 2002, 11:28:35 AM »
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yeah NoT i did not spit my best i did not feel like spiting to hard cuz i would not have bin worth it it would just be over doing it and i all ready beat tom before so i was not in the mood to over kill him lol


conceited bastard lol  :P
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