Author Topic: Devastation,  jus some shit I wrote  (Read 125 times)


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Devastation,  jus some shit I wrote
« on: February 21, 2002, 05:12:48 AM »
i wrote this last night, it sparked up an idea, for a song hopefully.   rate it if ya can that way I know i can go on pursueing my thought of turning it into something valuable.

my point of view on this game goes beyond money and fame/
strain and pain got me detained, people hate n cheer my name/
heart in chains, im told I'm free, cant see improvement on the streets/
no authority is for real, politicians struggle to heal/
make no effort to help the poor, expect us to be mature/  
this world is insecure, impure too late for cure/        
devastation has occured, simple lyrics to open eyes/
if you fail to comprehend these lines, go back and study my rhymes/
I feel obliged to bring reality or at least a dose of sense/
intense feelings wrote down on paper with pencils sharpened from emotional stress/
battlefields cleared, freed my chest of immense grief in my head/
blessed sending out messages to ignorant youth hope they listen before Im dead/
fed your mind with words uttered by the soul i was givin by god/
lead you blind on a path in this world where you be livin in fraud/
i know god is the man to guide, but while im alive its up to me/
to make a change to the devastation in lifes piled up infamy/

peace, one love
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Re: Devastation,  jus some shit I wrote
« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2002, 05:20:59 AM »
Dope shit homie... keep it up.
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 05:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »


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Re: Devastation,  jus some shit I wrote
« Reply #2 on: February 21, 2002, 06:43:49 AM »
i really really liked this one from had my mind working.. keep postin shit like this homie..
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 05:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »

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