song

[bez]

You are my everything by Bez

I love everything about you,
You are my whole world,
I would rather have you than any amount of gold girl,
Cos when you sing and you smile,
It makes me laugh like a child,
And if love was a crime,
Dam I'd have to do time,
Cause you presents is overwhealming,
You beauty so pure,
I will love you til the day I get shown the door,
Get taken from this world and only you I leave behind,
But I take the love along cos that love is inside,
You are my everything,

(Chorus) I can't describe the love I feel,
If you broke my heart it would not heal,
You mean everything to me I want you to always be mine,
You are my everything hun, dam you so fine,

When I see your smile, it lights up my day,
I want that to be infinite and never go away,
I love everything about you your smell so sweet,
I remember that day which we met on the street,
I got your number and you got mine,
Used to get told off by my parents for holdin up the line,
For hours on end we just sit and talk,
Holding hands in the park as we joyfully walk,
My love for you girl is so big I cannot show,
You made me real, stayed true and now I know,
What true love is cos girl I found it in you,
My girl my baby my huni my boo,
Cos your my everything,

(Chorus) I can't describe the love I feel,
If you broke my heart it would not heal,
You mean everything to me I want you to always be mine,
You are my everything hun, dam you so fine,

You my everything girl,
You know I love you,
From day 1 til the end,
You are my everything,

I knew what it was like to be so lonely,
Til I found you girl now you my one and only,
You voice so soothing your hands so tender,
I love to watch you sleep in peace and I wonder,
Has love like this ever been seen before,
The only thing that could seperate us is death or war,
I feel what you feel I try to help you as a man,
Sometimes a cuddle is enough that why I hug you when I can,
Your body's so perfect I love to kiss your stomach,
Reminds me of the good times we have girl I just love it,
I love special days when you I get to treat,
Like Valentine's day, as a couple we are so sweet,
But everyday with you is like a dream to me,
You are my everything girl, why can't you see,
Girl your my everything,

(Chorus) I can't describe the love I feel,
If you broke my heart it would not heal,
You mean everything to me I want you to always be mine,
You are my everything hun, dam you so fine,

(Chorus) I can't describe the love I feel,
If you broke my heart it would not heal,
You mean everything to me I want you to always be mine,
You are my everything hun, dam you so fine,

Ohhhhhhhhh girl your my everything,
Rock on,
Rock on,

['Illicit']

tight shit homie,   get a beat, record it and post it,  it will definately be cool to listen to.

peace, one love

[NoT]

Nice piece, if a little cliche. Don't get me wrong, you've got about as much emotion as someone can cram into text there... but a lot of what you've said has been said before. Like Illicit said, this piece is definitely better-suited to audio.

6.3/10 - Above average (that would be 5/10).

[bez]

thanks phella's!