pure white - peppers on the track

[Nelson Muntz]

well this is a song me and my group made, the beats made by me and i'm the 3rd one to rap tell me what u think


http://www.zshare.net/audio/5208512980186073

[Nelson Muntz]

nothin?

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

cant turn on my speakers right now...ill drop some feedback when i can check it (probably 2morrow).



this goes in the "Elements" section, though.

[Nelson Muntz]

shit ma bad

[Þŕiņçë]

dont like the beat or the hook.... and peppers on the track? u tryin to do smoov-e hot jalipinos?

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Overall, it's not bad...was this done in a studio? it's definitely better than a lotta shit comin out nowadays, has a real raw sound, but still a little amatuerish. The hook reminds me of some ICP/Twizted shit, which is not my style, but I can picture "juggalos" liking this typa shit. Keep workin on it, you're probably the best rapper on the track and your production has a unique sound... you should maybe try fuckin with some solo shit.

[Nelson Muntz]

dont like the beat or the hook.... and peppers on the track? u tryin to do smoov-e hot jalipinos?

why dont you like the beat no synths?

[Fly]

yeah this was done in an apartment while blazing...the track we did with big left of la coka nostra is definatly better...this is 808 fav track of ours...not mine...btw...im second

[Nelson Muntz]

haha word

[Nelson Muntz]

Overall, it's not bad...was this done in a studio? it's definitely better than a lotta shit comin out nowadays, has a real raw sound, but still a little amatuerish. The hook reminds me of some ICP/Twizted shit, which is not my style, but I can picture "juggalos" liking this typa shit. Keep workin on it, you're probably the best rapper on the track and your production has a unique sound... you should maybe try fuckin with some solo shit.

thanks for the feedback Now_I_Know +1