Author Topic: Got a new rhyme for y'all...  (Read 218 times)

BL7

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Got a new rhyme for y'all...
« on: February 01, 2002, 02:22:03 AM »
Sup y'all, I been gone for awhile. The internet wouldn't work, so I haven't been practicing much, but here's a lil' rhyme anyways...  

I've proved-to-go/
on a lyrical level that's irreducible/
infuse rhymes with un-usual contents/
then constrict 'em to perfection, ending any conflict/
advancing sonically, abnormal lyrics equals hotness/
it'd take a whole lot of effort to stop-this/
when I first started out, I knew I was a user-that's-bound/
to deliver hard shit that bitch niggaz can't maneuver-around/
infusing-my-style/
with uniqueness, if you refuse to battle wit' skill, then you choose-to-go-down/
I got ya scared and whimperin', wishing you could make this evil-stop/
when I keystyle I spit with precision not missin' a single-shot/



Peace out


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BL7

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Re: Got a new rhyme for y'all...
« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2002, 04:49:45 AM »
*Cough**cough*  ;)
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NoT

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Re: Got a new rhyme for y'all...
« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2002, 12:28:04 PM »
Nice piece. No doubt.  I really liked this part:

when I first started out, I knew I was a user-that's-bound/
to deliver hard shit that bitch niggaz can't maneuver-around/
infusing-my-style/  
with uniqueness, if you refuse to battle wit' skill, then you choose-to-go-down/
I got ya scared and whimperin', wishing you could make this evil-stop/
when I keystyle I spit with precision not missin' a single-shot/

Could you vote in my battle with Illicit? Thanks.
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BL7

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Re: Got a new rhyme for y'all...
« Reply #3 on: February 02, 2002, 03:27:44 AM »
Quote
Nice piece. No doubt.  I really liked this part:

when I first started out, I knew I was a user-that's-bound/
to deliver hard shit that bitch niggaz can't maneuver-around/
infusing-my-style/  
with uniqueness, if you refuse to battle wit' skill, then you choose-to-go-down/
I got ya scared and whimperin', wishing you could make this evil-stop/
when I keystyle I spit with precision not missin' a single-shot/

Could you vote in my battle with Illicit? Thanks.



It's been done.  ;)


A little bit of skill, a little thought, and I'm-set/
my style's being perfected, shootin' lyrical darts through ya neck/
take ya head off and throw it on deck/
I'm bringing my best/
deadly consequences for you if ya come incorrect/
rhymes blasting you like a cannon/
even scientific mechanics couldn't understand-this, brutal bandit/
lyrics large like mansions, constantly expandin'/
and you better show some respect when I demand it/
otherwise/
you'll end up dead like them other-guys/
blast your head off right in front of your mother's-eyes/



Man I'm tired. I need some sleep.


 

NoT

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Re: Got a new rhyme for y'all...
« Reply #4 on: February 02, 2002, 03:32:13 AM »
I liked that second piece better than the first... I thought that your first one was a little weak at the beginning but ended strong. The second one was more consistent and had the better "quotable":

rhymes blasting you like cannon/
even scientific mechanics couldn't understand-this, brutal bandit/

Would you mind commenting on one of my verses. Sorry to always ask for shit, but sometimes it's the only way to get certain people to respond to ya shit. I don't know if you're one of those people, but I figured it was worth a try.
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Nick of Time
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Yo, ya 14-carat gold slum computer wizard ~
Tappin' inside my rap page causes blizzards ~
- Ghostface Killah
 

Hittman

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Re: Got a new rhyme for y'all...
« Reply #5 on: February 02, 2002, 03:32:48 AM »
Pretty Good BL7.
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BL7

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Re: Got a new rhyme for y'all...
« Reply #6 on: February 02, 2002, 03:36:38 AM »
Thanks y'all. Damn I spit better verses when I'm damn near sleep.  :P Oh, and yeah, I'll go check some of your rhymes out NoT.
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