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The rhyme I feel is my best.
« on: December 02, 2001, 03:49:32 PM »
To those who remember Ghetto Poetry, here's the continuation.

(Male)
Young boy please believe me
I`d never do anything to harm my family
`Cause while you cry out daddy`s name
I`m in here praying things change
I didn`t do the crime, but momma don`t believe it
She hangs up when I call on the weekend
So I write you this letter and hope she didn`t rip it up
I was just a broke man outta luck
I`m so sorry my oldest child
Responsibilities to make you go wild
So while others will be out there doing bad
You have to stay home and play dad
And don`t think I wanted this
I want to see you grow, what my mother missed
As for now just sit in front of the TV
And watch Bugs Bunny well momma sleeps
It`s a long road ahead, your gonna need your rest
My child, I never wanted to put you in this mess
Soon your grow hard like Daddy did
Before your 16, you`ll have raised 2 kids
Only 5 now and got lives in your hand
You can`t cry no matter how much your sad
So my oldest child please understand
That at 5 years old, you already a man

(Woman)
You were doing good, what went wrong
I guess it’s true you show your true colors after long
Now a single mom, I got to be strong
And you always call with them tired songs
How can you go back to the past?
You swore our family would last
Now everywhere I go people laugh
The kids are a shame to play in the grass
How can you break my heart?
When it was me that trust you from the start
Everyone says you played me for a fool
And ask how I can love someone like you
But you said the words to make my mind eager
You put a ring on my finger and made my heart linger
And now you call because you got a lot to say
You want to see your children and another’s on the way
Don’t try to kiss because I was the one that was dissed
If you come back, don’t cry when you dismissed
Just stop the calling, ‘cause I don’t want a part of you falling
Next time you thing of calling, you better do it well crawling

(Male)
I’m on my hands and knees bagging you please
They found evidence that will get me free
All the happy times that we shared
Girl, you know I’d always be there
(Woman)
I can’t trust you; you treated me wrong
To butter me up, you come with some songs
Say they heart filled, well your heart I spill
Don’t come over, ‘cause my brother wants you killed
(Male)
I told you I ain’t did no crime
You should know, you were my alibi
(Woman)
You say this but you’d never comeback
Just like that child you had in Fairfax
Never visit him after you served in jail
Now you are free, it’s me your going to bail
(Male)
I love you, and I love my kids
And I visited him every weekend
Now ready for a commitment
I love you girl, how could you forget
Baby please believe me on this
I’m ready for a wife, so don’t diss
We stayed by each other this long
And I say this last "tired song"
I’m coming out next week if all goes to plan
And I’m back, the same old dad

(Background voice)
Olague, the evidence was lost; the trail has been placed on hold
(What!!!!!)
Well, make your self at home; you got 15 more years to go
HAHAHAHA
 

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Re: The rhyme I feel is my best.
« Reply #1 on: December 27, 2001, 09:47:11 PM »
This be the trust shit I ever wrote.
And I'm actually recording it as a song.
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Re: The rhyme I feel is my best.
« Reply #2 on: December 27, 2001, 10:56:47 PM »
that IS some real shit dawg....  :-[ had me deliberating for a few minutes....

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Re: The rhyme I feel is my best.
« Reply #3 on: December 27, 2001, 11:52:32 PM »
Damn man, when you recorded that shit, will I be able to listen to it on the internet, 'cause I can't wait. :o
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Re: The rhyme I feel is my best.
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2002, 03:34:53 PM »
It'll be on WC Killaz when I record it.

I want everyone to hear my shit... wait until the summer when I hook up with my producer Tyree D. When I say somethings going to be on and crackin... you better believe it. ;)
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