Doggystylin vs. CeeRide

['Illicit']

aight i know u said u'd let me know but I will just go ahead n start the topic.

Yo doggystylin - u should'Ve sticked to quit rhymin/
cuz I've arisin - I'll crack up ya spine 'n/
disgrace you to the fullest - spit lyrical bullets/
blow up ya guts - have u dead in 2 minutes/
theres no limit - to my infatuation with this game/
i bring pain , to any cat that calls out my name/
I'll make u an example, bring it on, you'll get trampled/
strangled in a alley after this ruthless battle/
i'm known for wreckin foolz, turn wives into widows/
need some real competition which i cant shatter like windows/
ya wanna show me whatcha got, go ahead n prove ya point/
if its wack, be prepared to get smoked like a joint/
I flow from my head, n write down what I think/
be concise wit my rhyme send ya ass to the shrink/
twisted ya mind and made your eyes steady blink/
cats step up to me n get swallowed like a drink/
when u step up on da mic, u start spittin like pinochio/
ya rhymez consist of lies, and come out wack just like mono/
you gained your reputation, battlin all these fake ass emcees/
not its time to be a man, get down to business battle me/
discover u aint shit, should neva tried to face tha Cee/
reppin only Melanin and i'll always and forever be/



(i edited it cuz i wanted to add some more bars, it was too short cuz if u spit anecdotes n i leave my shit in 15 bars that be unfair    )

~peaCe~

[Doggystylin]

aight ill spit when i have time....im kinda busy right now. gotta a lot shit to do in school this week but ill spit when i can

['Illicit']

sure, i got tests too, i know what u mean.
in the meantime ima rip that foo ToNe lol  (jus playin homie)

~peaCe~

[ToNe1904]

lol aiight now...ova hea bumpin yo gumz about ToNe huh?! Iz on n Brackin!!  

[Doggystylin]

Aight sorry for the long delay...i was busy and lazy...but i finnaly wrote it today....and since you started it....you make the voting rules

Now whos this? ima just blaze thru this/
Im gonna call CeeRide, Stacy Dash, cuz you're certainly "Clueless"/
You put "Suckin doggytylin's meat" on yur "great things to do" list/
Kid should have joined master p in "foolish"/
Ceeride not knowin what hes fuckin wit/
Bitch not knowin what hit him out with one hit/
So if thats it. am i writin the rest of this for nothin?/
Fuck it im out and im MC huntin or better yet ceeride dumpin/
Fool whats up witht ya boring immature bullshit/
Like gangstar i got a "full clip"/
Of rhymes aka heat,battle me and all u see is defeat/
Nicca.. you goin up against a member of tha elite/
Ceeride gets shoved to the side/
Somone please challange me ,anyone,worldwide/
A "rookie" battlin me on "Veterans" Day/
Here is a display, of how i wreck a fool and leave his body to decay/
Now commense wit ur shit so u can fade away/
Fake nigga, makin u feel like a idiot while I spit this verse/
Disperse these words and end yo' life with a curse/
No need for a doctor or a nurse/ nigga 7th just bring the hearse/
So the graveyard is where ceerides gonna chill/
Yo kid i just showed you and the board whos wack and whos ill/

['Illicit']

well id say lets stick to  5 votes, 3 ko  cuz more would mean more time waitin on votes

peace

[Doggystylin]

so the og voting rules right? 3 votes in a row is a KO...or first to 5?, is that what u mean?

anyways.......VOTE YALL!

[Maestro Minded]

am i allowed to vote??

['Illicit']

yeah anybody can vote, fuck it

[ToNe1904]

ay i gotta get goin, late fah work. but ill vote on thiz shit tahnight. peace

......we need more fukin voterz...

[NEW_MINORITY]

to be honest i wasn't feeling both rhymes and it was just about on the same level




ceeride-came straight to the point....you had some creative lines but a lot of them are fillers 3.3/5


doggystylin-you had good metaphors althought had some wack corny lines and it didn't flow all the way through 3.3/5

its a tie and since i don't believe in ties i give it to ceeride since he started first....

[TimeLock]

i liked these lines i quoted from CeeRide's flow

i'm known for wreckin foolz, turn wives into widows/
need some real competition which i cant shatter like windows/

I flow from my head, n write down what I think/
be concise wit my rhyme send ya ass to the shrink/
twisted ya mind and made your eyes steady blink/
cats step up to me n get swallowed like a drink/
when u step up on da mic, u start spittin like pinochio/
ya rhymez consist of lies, and come out wack just like mono/

discover u aint shit, should neva tried to face tha Cee/
reppin only Melanin and i'll always and forever be/~peaCe~

I think doggy was not trying very hard on some line and he needs to come ill the whole flow and stop pause with weak line inbetween ill ones....u get my vot doggy cuz u had some ill barz among a few weak ones...and also cuz u had a stronger first bar and finishing bar
it's a close one but...
my vote goes to Doggystylin

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

Man, This waz a tie..........

And I agree wit wat Most_hates said above^^

But since Most_Hated voted 4 Ceeride cuz he went first then Ima vote 4 doggystylin b/c he mentioned me in his rhyme..........lol............And some of his lines cracked me up.

[Tecknine]

Doggystylin got this

[ToNe1904]

well, i was feelin tha first half of Cee'z shit fah real. that shit was tight. n i think if tha second half was tha same, ida voted fah him handz down. but for tha overall shit, ima hafta go wit Doggystylin on thiz one. frum top tah bottom his shit was consistent. off tha hook. vote-doggystylin