Author Topic: Stereotype -- Check it.. im lookin for tips.. (Read 153 times)

Reef · « **on:** December 16, 2001, 06:35:45 AM »

Im sick of all these stereotypes//
I'll kick you in tha groin if you believe the damn hype//
All this shit about rappers claim east and west//
But every critic has seemed to overlook//
The professional rappers get pushed aside while all these mainstream fuckers cook //
in the spotlight//
What you got goin for ya?//
Once i touch the game there aint gonna be no one in the limelight//
Matter of fact, the face of the game will change for ever//
Ima keep goin, never stop until i don't have to endeavour//
My ambition to prove to everyone out there that i can do this shit//
To prove that I can destroy you fucked up mosh pit//
Takin out everyone. Makin 'em submit//
Ima fuck y'all quicker than a freestyle hooker//
Fucked up, im endin my life in an electric cooker//
Sick minded, we've only scratched the surface//
Im twisted, even MC hammer cant touch this!//
Like canibus im not gonna go mainstream to diss//
Cool J and Eminem.. Someone is runnin low on the green//
Runnin out of Acid? Get high off caffiene//
The shit i can do to an emcee is unseen//
its not where you are its were your going//
And thats stright to the gutter, you can be arrested for attempted flowin//
Here's a towel so get throwin//
Cuz you oppose me an ima crush you like the chronic///
Leave ya lyin on the floor drowing in your vomit//
Im here to offend and shock, thats the subject and while we're on it//
The Britz are here to stay//
Count down to the day we invade on the alphanumeric display!//
3...2...1...
Im like a marksman without a gun//
Fuckin up canibus just for a lil fun//
Go lyrically shootin up for no real reason//
Dont be suprised if you see me get hung for treason//
In theory i should be in a straight jacket//

Tips and ideaz for a chorus would be appreciated.

'Illicit' · « **Reply #1 on:** December 16, 2001, 06:41:53 AM »

well I liked a few parts, other than that, I'd either split it up or add another verse cuz one single verse aint enough man. it'd be like a few ice-t joints where hes just talkin for 5 mins without a break.
i dunno bout a chorus cuz i dont really see what its about, Stereotype? well explain it, but overall it should sound cool wit a phat ass beat, but ya need two or three verses.

~peaCe~

Reef · « **Reply #2 on:** December 16, 2001, 06:52:43 AM »

iight... I'll try and split it up and add another verse or something. The basic outline is me being told that white kids cant like rap beacuse its black music.. Seriously pissed me off..

'Illicit' · « **Reply #3 on:** December 16, 2001, 07:02:52 AM »

i wouldnt trip off that issue man, no use. not everybodies like that, for example the peeps on this board , in my opinion, show you love regardless (if u got skillz) so it dont matter.

well you see the problem is, i got some shit written, but i dont have good ideas for chorus's myself so i am breakin myself to get sumthin crackin myself. but i'ma think about yours but dont wait lol

~peaCe~

maxi-padz · « **Reply #4 on:** December 16, 2001, 10:36:18 AM »

i think the african americans of america lol@that statement didn make sense
yeah well the minorities of america i think are getting angry because they basically invented that shit and put it on the map.. and white ppl are taking over..
i feel its not a race isue its more of a jealousy type thing.. u know...
but nice rhyme man feelen the subject.. i hate stereotypen.. theres a lot done on this forum... but yo keep spitten man i aint seen much from u.. keep blessing the board...
~1~