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It was a bad day ...
« on: December 06, 2001, 03:57:49 PM »
Stepped into the shower and the hot water was finished/
my blood froze and i said to myself, this is gonna be a bad day, i can feel it/
Walkin on the road, a car drove by and splashed dirt on my new suit/
Then it started raining, and mud filled up my shoes/

Sitting in class, the kid beside me was choking cuz of drug abuse/
To mute it out, i switched to my discman for some tunes/

I rolled up a blunt and sipped on some booze/
my dad found out, gave me a 'few' to leave me heavly abused/
the teacher found out and my parents she accused/
I said 'Fuck you bitch, this iz my personal bruse"/

So i came home late that dark and rainy afternoon/
escaping the boyz in blue, had a fucked up day at school/
switched on the t.v to check the 6 pm news/
cuz my parents told me to, but iz their veiws/
To me iz all bout racism,sex, Jews and abuse/
So i change the fucking channel to watch some cartoons/
But what the fuck?? Its the same fucking thing you fools!/

And in the night i have a long talk with myself/
thinking about what i live for ... when can i truely rest/
Tommorrow is another day, but gimme sumthing to live for i pray/

And you ask me what the fuck is going on ...?
Asshole, you missed the whole point of this song...

peace ...

 -{bLaDe}
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »
Waving My Double Edged Sword, God Sharpened My Blade...
Its Just Me Against The World, And The Evil That He Made...
 

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Re: It was a bad day ...
« Reply #1 on: December 06, 2001, 04:13:02 PM »
tight shit.. good poetry...  I would consider it more poetry then rap...  here's why.   Rap music.. is like superhero type shit... like okay take the song "Brain Damage" by Eminem for example.  He tells the part where he comes back and beats the bully with foriegn tools and stood on his chest with one foot.  That isn't what really happened, but that's what raps all about, facing adversity, and then overcoming creatively... but his song was about real life, and it would have been a poem if he would have finished, the bully beat my ass.. I guess life sucks.....  I don't know.. I'm trippin.. LOL
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 04:00:00 PM by 1034398800 »