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Now_Im_Not_Banned
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"Mr Gruesome"...rate this from 1-10
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June 26, 2001, 03:40:01 PM »
Everyone, here's a rhyme I did in 3 mins...I just want everyone to rate this from 1-10...I know I'm capable of more, but i want somone to rate my efortless rhymes...
This ain’t no illusion/My Rhymes expand, like infusion/There’s no solution/ I continue cruisin’/Through MC’s, leave them bruisin’/There’s no way that I’m loosin’/The resolution/is revolution/Rhymes that cause confusion/Introducin/Mr. Gruesome/I know I’m mental/but ya’ll still get
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/My rhymes erase your rhymes like a muthafuckin’ pencil/Keep you stored in my utensil/Use you out, like a rental/Ya rhymes are cheap like a Pento/My rhymes are first class like a Benzo/I dare anyone to try to tongue twist this/Bitch, shut the fuck up! Just like Limp Bizkit/Ya rhymes are simplistic/And mine burn yours like steaming liquid/How you gunna try steppin up to somone gifted?/Ya rhymes are ugly enough to get face-lifted...
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So Much Style
Muthafuckin' Don!
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So much style
Re: "Mr Gruesome"...rate this from 1-10
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June 26, 2001, 05:25:06 PM »
8.
it was some of your best, but all rhymes have been used before but it was really good
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So much style back at it again
TheSheriff
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Re: "Mr Gruesome"...rate this from 1-10
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June 27, 2001, 07:38:35 AM »
6-8.
Good, but I felt the rhyme pattern was a bit annoying.
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Top-Dogg2001
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Re: "Mr Gruesome"...rate this from 1-10
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June 27, 2001, 09:40:20 AM »
7 I thought it was hot but after a while it started to go down. I agree with the sherriff about the rhyme pattern. I think you should have changed it up a bit.
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Now_Im_Not_Banned
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Re: "Mr Gruesome"...rate this from 1-10
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June 27, 2001, 10:04:05 AM »
I said it was 3 min rhyme? What can i change in 3 mins?
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Tanjential
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Re: "Mr Gruesome"...rate this from 1-10
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June 27, 2001, 10:06:43 AM »
that was tight (i give it 7) but since it was the same rhyme pattern it gets anooying,you gotta switch up more...peace-Tanjint
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