my FUCKED up life

[Vanessa]

all day i'm busy shooting people in tha head/
doesn't matter who they are, it only matters that their dead/
my momma couldn't raise me so i ended up in jail/
my lovar had no money so my daddy paid my bail/
my sista is a little ho, my brotha is her pimp/
all the homies always teased him caus they thought he was a wimp/
but now all growen up and 26 yrs old/
he's fucked up in his head and that's my mommas fault/
during he pregnancy she used drugs and alcohol/
she was all high up in heaven on my daddys funural/
thought she would lose her pain by drinking liquor and using speed/
in our garden we don't have flowers, we have some mothafucking weed/
now my sista she has aids she's been fucked without any protection/
well this is what it's come to and still it has no affection/
on me i'm just doing what i gotta/
i'm shooting people last night i almost shot my brotha/
he was playing with my knife/
i almost took him from his life/
and still it doesn't scare me that's just my motha fucking LIFE/

V

[Vanessa]

some replies would be nice..

any critics are welcome............

V

[maxi-paddy]

v u know me from the dre forum
thats good
but everyone from their nows ur rap is total opposite from how u know
still thas good
but u dont have to rap gangsta or come across hard to be good.
anyways peace im gonna drop a freestyle now
peace

[maxi-paddy]

v tha wanne be gangsta/
tryin hard to come across as a thugsta/
stop trying so hard to be tough/
everyone knows that ur not rough/
it looks like ur freestylin has got better/
but if u wanna be wanna be gangsta everyone just let her/
but if u try and bust at me/
ill get down on one knee/
pull tha trigga/
then ull just be another dead or crippled nigga/
caus if u fuck with me i wont shoot u in tha head/
ill shoot ur in the back/
make ur back crack/
then laugh about u on my next track/
but v u know ill look out for u/
but u dont have to scream fuck a bitch to be coo/
sometimes people who do that end up lookin tha foo/
but if u wanna trip ill take out ur whole muthafucken crew/
wont stop until i kill u to/
ill sweat u like tha flu/
thats how i am/
if u fuck with me the whole neighbourhood will be hearin..
BLAM BLAM BLAM.

haha v peace out girl

[Vanessa]

why does everyone say that?
i mean... that's just the way i rhyme..
i am no thug and i am no gangsta..
and i certainly don't wanna be!

but that's just the way i rap, and if you think it's crap don't look at it!

V

[maxi-paddy]

u asked for opinionz so dont bitch when u get em yo
anyways
im out peace
maxi-paddy

[Vanessa]

i wasn't bitching!

no beef....

V

[maxi-paddy]

why be worried about beef?
if u rhyme like u do in the dre forum
expect beef

[maxi-paddy]

yo check this shit
its krayzie

maxi-paddy drops shit with originality/
listen to me rhyme gives u spirituality/
im here to lower ur morality/
where i live im a minority/
and rap is off a small majority/
when u hear my voice u bow down to me like im royalty/
once u take in my style ur addicted/
try and get in sorry access restricted/
my shit is refined/
when i come at u im confined/
my talent is held down/
australian industry makes me look like a clown/
but ima hero in my own town/
when i bust a verse out/
niggaz start to clap and shout/
they know what im all about/
maybe ill never blow up like they thought i would/
all my boys said i should/
im not on top of the world im on top of the universe/
so kick back shoot smack and listen to this tight verse/
my styles like a mack truck in reverse/
impossible to stop and makes everything else look much worse/
u say ur the best of the best u lied/
caus u aint on my side/


CHORUS:
so while ur my homie u best get on my side/
im the flagship rapper who is gonna take this industry in my tide/
so u best abide/
everybody nation wide/
and be-on my side/


what yall think
it called ON MY SIDE

[Vanessa]

shit.......

is that what your mad about?

because of the black/white thing..
hell i don't have a race problem....
my own mom is white!

But still, gotta give you some credit, that rhyme was wack!

V

[maxi-paddy]

u sayin i wack?
hold up a sec.
i never had beef wit u
so dont act like a lil bitch like on the dre forum.
i just give u my opinion that u ask for.
n hey yo v remember when u was trying to figure out how to freestyle.
n who tried to help u?
me and a lot of other peepz to.
n who said nothin bout a black/white thang?
i couldnt care if u black or white yo.
fuck it ur seein shit that not thea.
anywayz
im out peace
1

[Vanessa]

now i get it...

this was all a misunderstanding!

you thought... when i said your shit was wack, that i don't like it... but i do like it.

i thought... you were angry because of i made a rhyme about black/white shit...

But serious...... i do remember all the peeps who learned me and are still learning me everything... but why you gotta diss everything i write? I don't want no beef....
you must know that...

V

[maxi-paddy]

u asked for replies
yo
so i thought u wanted to battle
thas all
peace
1

[Vanessa]

now i c, i asked for reactions you gave one, it pissed me of and that is where it all started at, so you i owe you an apology,

i'm sorry....

But wack means idiot... you said it to me to, that my rhymez are wack, so i thought you liked it, but you didn't....

Anyway, why is bdogg mad at me?
what did i do to him?

V

[I drop rhymes]

ight how bout this
the two of u panzie ass wack motha fuckaz stop bitchin like a couple of douchebags an work on yo rhymes... cuz i dont know if u noticed.. both a yall is mad wack.. an i say that because the shit is stank.. u both suck an should never rhyme again