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ToNe1904

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M-Dogg vs R.E.L. ~ MiddleWeight Tourny ~ Rnd 2
« on: August 24, 2002, 01:26:39 AM »
Ok yall, this is Round 2 and we're starting to narrow it down. Only 4 of u left. So Ima make this one a lil harder, time to prove yurself worthy.  

Rules for Round 2:

~15-25 bars
~Verses Due Tuesday night, tha 27th, midnight...Kali time.
~Also...at least 6 bars in yur verse have to be STRAIT up personal attacks on yur opponent. (any questions on what i mean by personal attacks, then hit me up onna PM or sumthin)




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Re: M-Dogg vs R.E.L. ~ MiddleWeight Tourny ~ Rnd 2
« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2002, 10:04:31 AM »
A ska skater beefs up and wants it with M, kicked down, knocked out, breath your last breath/
Left in a time warp when Nirvana was the shit, Maybe you should be TimeLock 'cause your lost in it/
The muthaphukka that dissed rap, remember, So your real self falls in the woods like timber/
Kid, you know you can't respond to a Hall of Famer, Don't even mention my sister, I might save ya'/
Sccit's little buddy, I beat his ass too, Got you, Sccit and Roccy lined up to rush your crew/
I'm a solder like 'Pac with greatness of Ali, you only half steppin like a chilled off Ini Kamoze/
Rocking Ethernally Lame, like Nas I drop the Ether and you pass out from pain/
In a fight I got so many hits that they call me Dr. Dre, changing my whole attack on the way/
You don't listen to rap so you don't know what I said, Turn off that crap and listen instead of giving Roccy head/
Call me KRS-One 'cause many have bit my Blueprint, and no else can claim Don, though they've tried it/
Call me Cypress Hill 'cause "This is something you can't Understand", only it's punches from a Mexican/
If you can't get hip-hop, try getting this putha, yo asesino tu, y pataleo tu madre en ella panocha/ (I Kill you, and kick you mom in the pussy)
That way no other child can be born, as you the worst thing that ever happened well a shooting of porn/
You switch styles, I can switch languages, This is real simple,  so call me Joe Torre 'cause I keep managing/
So back off 'cause well I'm fucking around on a freestyle, an anthem is born, and the crowd goes wild/

Sample ealier rhyme "I'm a solder like 'Pac with greatness of Ali, you only half steppin like a chilled off Ini Kamoze"
(scratch, scratch scratch)
"I'm a solder like 'Pac with greatness of Ali, you only half steppin like a chilled off Ini Kamoze"
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Re: M-Dogg vs R.E.L. ~ MiddleWeight Tourny ~ Rnd 2
« Reply #2 on: August 26, 2002, 09:13:31 PM »
Even though Pink is ur sister, I would happily dismiss her//
Part of the family??  Only a lesbian could rip her//
Quiker than a "Pink Bow and Arrow" I "drag you down" but u "miss" her//1
More than eating "Del Taco" with horrible "meat" ur "beef" makes me bicker//(Mexican Personal Attack)
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Wat do u get when u mix WCC and D-R-E??
More beef wit logic than there was on tha chronic
I aint "Alanis Morissette" tellin if shits ironic
Im on it...Reported one fat ass bitch and a Fake~Ass~Marty
This aint no party but my rhymes is comin harder than bacardi
But u kno me...im more lethal than "Snoop and a pornstar", "Lyrikal~Obcession"2
But u attract more attention than ur sisters obesity (spl?) and a grl she b caressin
Did I mention?? U failed ur one Ryming~Lesson
Time to enjoy WCCs Keystyling~Detention
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In this shit we got more "risk" and "competition" than "Fear~Factor"
Ur just a little bitch whos mission cant even React~Faster
Im more "rich" w/ mo hoes, jus listen...im tha "Pimp~Macksta"
Ima macksta...not "mack" so u aint gotta call me no "biter"
But ur gonna have to face more "heat" than a "9-11 Fire~Fighter"
"Fuel~Igniter", but theres more "gas to burn" than a summertime "barbeque" lighter  
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Holy shit "Jesus Christ" I bet u gotta b "Catholic"
Causing me to spread more helpful "Jewish" tactics
Ur sis jus a "Pink Towel" but its gonna take a "fruit" to get me to "dry quick"3
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1...Pink supposed to weigh alot...weight drags u down and u miss the target like a bow and arrow
2...Snoop comes w/ lyrics and theres the porstar, obcession
3...Pink is a fag (fruit) color and towels make u dry quick    
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Re: M-Dogg vs R.E.L. ~ MiddleWeight Tourny ~ Rnd 2
« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2002, 05:32:32 AM »
Who you battling, Pink or me. For reals dogg, I said don't mention my sister before you even posted 'cause I know Now_I_Know would ghostwrite a verse dissing my sister. That's why I'm always tired of you damn Sccit Style people. Read my shit above and you'll know how I feel.
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Re: M-Dogg vs R.E.L. ~ MiddleWeight Tourny ~ Rnd 2
« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2002, 09:02:11 AM »
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Who you battling, Pink or me. For reals dogg, I said don't mention my sister before you even posted 'cause I know Now_I_Know would ghostwrite a verse dissing my sister. That's why I'm always tired of you damn Sccit Style people. Read my shit above and you'll know how I feel.



I have no beef w/ u or pink and NIK didnt ghostwrite my shit!!!

I was talking to TONE about personal attacks and he agreed that attacking pink was a personal attack 2 u...

again...I HAVE NO BEEF W/ EITHER ONE OF U 2!!!

it was just a battle verse
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Re: M-Dogg vs R.E.L. ~ MiddleWeight Tourny ~ Rnd 2
« Reply #5 on: August 28, 2002, 12:52:02 AM »
aiight, first off....good job on meetin tha criteria of at least 6 personals each.

now..

M-Dogg: Good strait up attack, classic M-Dogg shit. Good flow, good personals, sum decent metas. Did a good job of stayin focus on yur opponent, very damaging verse. Overall a very good verse.

R.E.L.: U also came wit sum heat. M-Dogg came wit better flow then u, but u had the better wordplay. Also some good personals and decent metas. Sum punches didnt quite connect tho. I DID say, that dissing Pink counts as a personal...however, i DIDNT say it was a good idea. If u were battling Pink, u woulda won for sure...but ida liked to see u attack M a bit more. But regardless, a very strong verse as well.

All in all, pretty close...but ima hafta give my vote to M-Dogg. He jus had the more focused rhyme.

Good battle yall.

vote=M-Dogg....u move on to the finals..
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Re: M-Dogg vs R.E.L. ~ MiddleWeight Tourny ~ Rnd 2
« Reply #6 on: August 31, 2002, 04:23:36 PM »
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Even though Pink is ur sister, I would happily dismiss her//
Part of the family??  Only a lesbian could rip her//
Quiker than a "Pink Bow and Arrow" I "drag you down" but u "miss" her//1
More than eating "Del Taco" with horrible "meat" ur "beef" makes me bicker//(Mexican Personal Attack)
--------
Wat do u get when u mix WCC and D-R-E??
More beef wit logic than there was on tha chronic
I aint "Alanis Morissette" tellin if shits ironic
Im on it...Reported one fat ass bitch and a Fake~Ass~Marty
This aint no party but my rhymes is comin harder than bacardi
But u kno me...im more lethal than "Snoop and a pornstar", "Lyrikal~Obcession"2
But u attract more attention than ur sisters obesity (spl?) and a grl she b caressin
Did I mention?? U failed ur one Ryming~Lesson
Time to enjoy WCCs Keystyling~Detention
-------
In this shit we got more "risk" and "competition" than "Fear~Factor"
Ur just a little bitch whos mission cant even React~Faster
Im more "rich" w/ mo hoes, jus listen...im tha "Pimp~Macksta"
Ima macksta...not "mack" so u aint gotta call me no "biter"
But ur gonna have to face more "heat" than a "9-11 Fire~Fighter"
"Fuel~Igniter", but theres more "gas to burn" than a summertime "barbeque" lighter  
-------
Holy shit "Jesus Christ" I bet u gotta b "Catholic"
Causing me to spread more helpful "Jewish" tactics
Ur sis jus a "Pink Towel" but its gonna take a "fruit" to get me to "dry quick"3
**************************
**************************

1...Pink supposed to weigh alot...weight drags u down and u miss the target like a bow and arrow
2...Snoop comes w/ lyrics and theres the porstar, obcession
3...Pink is a fag (fruit) color and towels make u dry quick    

Your the only faggot here...... I dont play at the keystyle so i dont want to be mention in the Keystyle.... I dont know you.. and i dont want to know you.. plain and simple....
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Re: M-Dogg vs R.E.L. ~ MiddleWeight Tourny ~ Rnd 2
« Reply #7 on: October 19, 2002, 08:29:52 PM »
Who you battling, Pink or me. For reals dogg, I said don't mention my sister before you even posted 'cause I know Now_I_Know would ghostwrite a verse dissing my sister. That's why I'm always tired of you damn Sccit Style people. Read my shit above and you'll know how I feel.


Honestly...u know my style, and I'm a lot better than that...When I keystyle, every word in the bar rhymes... so please dont make false accusations...PeACe