Author Topic: FlippDogg vs Onetime ~ Middleweight Tourny~Round 1  (Read 188 times)

ToNe1904

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FlippDogg vs Onetime ~ Middleweight Tourny~Round 1
« on: August 19, 2002, 10:32:12 AM »
Aiight, this is the first round. Ill be judging all these matches, except for Femcee's. Verses must be between 15-25 bars. There are NO exceptions, this rule must be followed...any less then 15, any more then 25...will be DQ'd. No topic on this, just strait up battle spits. Verses due Thursday, the 22nd. Midnight KALI time. This rule must be followed also, NO exceptions...if yur verse is 1 minute late, it will be DQ'd. So dont procrastinate yall. Good luck everybody.
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Doggystylin

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Re: FlippDogg vs Onetime ~ Middleweight Tourny~Rou
« Reply #1 on: August 20, 2002, 11:30:54 AM »
Flipp dogg has been ressurected,be prepared to get chin checked kid/
Cuz im ready to get into your gut and disect it/
Infect you with my rhymes like sex thats unprotected/
Onetime couldnt write a doperhyme if he wrote it on a leaf of marujwana/
I raise up emotions in readers like being at peace in nirvana/
Onetime,like volunteer workers makes no sense (cents)/
No offense but your rhymes get slow while mine get intense/
So get on your fucking knee's and repent/
Tell your homies that theres a lil present doggy just sent/
Lyrical explosion, shaking the earth causin immense waves in the ocean/
Dig deep like a pitbull's sqaure box jaw fresh in your spleen/
Then wipe off my blade and shine it clean/
Rhymes couched in negetive terms/
Onetime you change your rhyme-style like Camelion/
Comon dogg admit your stealin/
I fathered your style so your just one of my children/



 

PakiGangsta

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Re: FlippDogg vs Onetime ~ Middleweight Tourny~Rou
« Reply #2 on: August 22, 2002, 03:03:23 PM »
You think ya winnin this battle nigga,Thats pretty odd,
Like an atheist and pacifist fightin ova god,
Ya swingin rods tryin to touch my style from long distance,
But cant reach my level of illness nigga, For Instance,
I got a bigga blast,You jus spit while I spray,
Plungin 'controllers' to ya 'keyboard' to get some 'wordplay',
I spit percise rhymes, at anytime my lines gon' strike,
Cuz im tight like a Condom you aint put on right...
I spit fire as my rhymes and mind colaborates,
Ya lyriks dont penatrate,They come out then evaporate,
You cant stand the heat when my torch burns like an Arsonists,
Tha 'top-dogs' of ya click dont spit enuff to 'bark-wit-this',
Tryin to touch perfection's not permitted by ya skills,
Battlin me is dangerous like acohol wit X-pills,
A deadly mixture only taken by mistaken ignorance,
Tha type of ignorance you must have for thinkin ya ill as this....
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ToNe1904

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Re: FlippDogg vs Onetime ~ Middleweight Tourny~Rou
« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2002, 05:02:03 AM »
aiight yall, i aint getta chance tah vote on this lass night. So ima do em after work tonight.  

peace
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ToNe1904

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Re: FlippDogg vs Onetime ~ Middleweight Tourny~Rou
« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2002, 10:40:13 PM »
aiight, lets get this started.

Flip, good verse. Real good flow. Sumwhat simple punches, but they attacked pretty hard. Tha shit sounded more like a audio rhyme tho. Overall, u came pretty tight.

Onetime, also a nice verse. Like Flip, u lacked any personals. But u had the more creative of the 2 rhymes. Good metas and wordplay throughout. Good flow and sum good punches. Good shit man.

vote=Onetime
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