Author Topic: The Don Vs. R...E...L /LightWeight Title\ (Read 283 times)

.:R-E-L:. · « **on:** July 26, 2002, 03:14:22 PM »

i noticed u had the lightweight title.....

i wanted 2 step up for it.....

1)First to 5
2)3-0(KO)
3)Max. 20 bars

Get ur Verse in ASAP

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #1 on:** July 29, 2002, 09:29:31 AM »

Iight... You can have a shot... Seeing as you are offerin me out, i say you spit first, as im kinda busy, so as soon as you have spit i will spit.. iight homie!

Peace tha don

.:R-E-L:. · « **Reply #2 on:** July 31, 2002, 09:13:34 AM »

Call me "Don Corleone" or just better yet, Tha "Godfather"//
Just boring, I store u away in my "cabinet" just like a "larder"//
Im "scoring", call me "Brazil", Ur "Germany", u cant "defend it" so call a charter//
Im so "hot", u cant put me out wit water, im "sunburnt" worse than a desert-sun scorcher//
Or "finer" than a new-born son's "nurser" (nurse) but "fiercer" than an "abusive-dad"//
My rhymes are more elusive than u'll ever have, dont com here with that weaker-cheap-shit//
Just call me the "grim-reaper" or just "bleap-it"//
Lemme stick it on, "Parental Advisory Explicit Content" cuz ima "throat-splitter" that "curses"//
I have Exceptional-Ability-Im Illicit-And On It plus i gloat-over-killers w/ extreme surges//
I have the urges to be the "Undertaker" and "sell" u ur own caskit//
Ur name is "Michael Jackson", the "Child-Molester", and like ur small dick, it fits it//
Believe it and fray all the ends cuz ur shit has to many errors, to many mistakes//
Ur rhymes are lighter than feathers, but i finish u quikly like a "fat ass" eating "steaks"//

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #3 on:** July 31, 2002, 12:12:53 PM »

Your receiving my lyrical blows at a high ~ velocity ~
Impacting on your manufactured style, causing pure ~ intoxicty ~
Without hesitation remove your profile of ~ existence ~
Cause you to short circuit quicker than a wire overloadin with ~ resistance ~
Fuckin maintain, the limelight, not quick enough to ~ steel it ~
Refrain from pure annihalation, breeze through, what you take, i ~ retreive it ~
Style is non-corrosive, like mistakin an acid for an ~ alkali ~
I rebound your lyrics with enough venom, to cause a chemical reaction an ~ nuetralise ~
Wishing you could switch ~ brains ~, i overtake you at full throttle, you'd better not ~ switch lanes ~
Clean up your style, i'll pin point your errors an give an ~ evaluation ~
Coz im tha don, so high up, your lyrics loose co-ordination, and reflect in to different ~ directions ~
Direct attacking, leavin you no ammo to offend wit, wouldnt of made it easier to win, even under the name of ~ illicit ~
Leavin the scene, with people astonished at my brutal ass whippin, causin people to ~ commemorate ~
Expect no less from tha wannabe ~ illicit ~ when your style is so low in offense, it cant ~ fluctuate ~
Infectious with harmless ~ curses ~ you got more chance of offendin me with ya profile pic, than with ya 2 second ~ verses ~
Your shit scared of my reply, your havin to fight for ~ survival ~ your as harmless as Princess Diana, ~ dead on arrival ~

VOTES NEEDED, AND WOULD BE APPREICIATED!

.:R-E-L:. · « **Reply #4 on:** July 31, 2002, 12:15:30 PM »

votes r needed

.:R-E-L:. · « **Reply #5 on:** July 31, 2002, 04:56:44 PM »

CMON...this is fo a title....

VOTES!!

Now_Im_Not_Banned · « **Reply #6 on:** July 31, 2002, 06:14:43 PM »

I gotta give an honest vote...I give R-E-L a loss and The Don a victory...Both were real dope with a lot of punch's but the rhyme structure's dont seem too good...

bLaDe · « **Reply #7 on:** July 31, 2002, 06:16:21 PM »

Yeah this was close, but i think Don got this one, his rhyme was more complex n 'advanced' than RELs, n it flowed better, peace

vote - don

-{bLaDe}

M Dogg™ · « **Reply #8 on:** July 31, 2002, 06:22:01 PM »

Three vets vote, tight. It's a K.O., the champ got this one. Hope to see both though elevate to heavyweight status soon.

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #9 on:** August 01, 2002, 07:46:55 AM »

Thanx for votin guys, i am grateful.. welll REL a 3-0 K0 unlucky man.... well i will be waitin on my next challenge!

Peace ya'll

Tha Don

Political Gangsta · « **Reply #10 on:** August 01, 2002, 09:55:17 PM »

I vote for the Don... Not because I have beef, tension, or strife with R.E.L., not because I have favoritism, bias, or friendship with Don... but because Don's verse was the product of a highly literal and imaginative mind, and because Don's verse provided us with a more schooled and thought out rhyme scheme.

Vote= Don

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #11 on:** August 02, 2002, 12:18:07 AM »

Thanx people... so now its 4-0... lol... well nice battling... who's up for it next?

Peace -- Tha Don

Doggystylin · « **Reply #12 on:** August 02, 2002, 12:56:40 AM »

lol yall weeeaaak like 7 days

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #13 on:** August 02, 2002, 01:15:21 AM »

7 days?

.:R-E-L:. · « **Reply #14 on:** August 02, 2002, 05:54:22 AM »

Quote

7 days?

it was a metaphor, lol

good battle

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