Explicit Vs Illicit aka Ceeride! Votes Needed!

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

Yo Illicit.. aint heard from ya in a while, so im callin ya out ta do battle dawg! hope your down with it! If not then...? i dont know... lol I think this will be a good battle..

Rules: No bar limit, Spit what ya want!

I spit first! lol ... Iight peace -- Tha Muthafuckin Don aka Explicit..!
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Out on tha rampage, too much lyrics overflowin my mind//
Escaped from my steel cage, ready to assasinatem, the illicit shrine// Time to bust, when raps involved, friendships overtakin by lust// The nervous twitch in ya eye// tha speed of those ducks n dives, cant defend// With ya brain popin out of its hive// Thinkin i've improved, a metamorphases has happened// Reign supreme, explicit to tha full, leave time ya to applaud, i won by a fraction// A classic battle between the best, and the better// if i provoke you too much, expect in tha post, a sorry letter// No offence, i rebound your attacks and react with no hesitance, now look who's on the defence// It sure aint me, i inflict a fatal brutality, walkin out this crib// With an itchy trigga finga, and an empty bottle of henecide// What a tradegy// My style, is basic rappin, i send you a present, contained inside an anthrax napkin, with your lilly whit ass askin, why me, why the baddest of the group, why illict// Scarin you outta ya head, with silver bullets missin ya byatch, but penetratin ya daughters head// An invasion of your private property, a set up diversion, your goin down, like a submarine emmersion// Mental state, confuzed, and misused, no need for violence, gut ya till ya screamin, "im gonna co-operate//

Well im spent... I cant be bothered to do no more! lol Your turn! lol Peace -- Tha Muthafuckin Don aka Explicit

['Illicit']

oh shit, im sorry, i got back from florida yesterday, i idnt see this until now. I'ma spit tomorrow man, aight wit u?

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

Aight Man! Im down wit dat!

I'll be waitin

['Illicit']

ya call yaself Explicit bitin my rhymes wit no own genuine//
when im finished flushin ya shitty raps you wont know the status I left-you-in//
work harder for your success or jus dont battle me til you gained it//
cuz i've had it wit wack bitches straining my temper jus to end up slain kid//
stop writin them lovesongs i aint your bitch come on hurt my feelins//
but I doubt you grasping that cuz yo head too fucked up to notice what the deal is//
ima underground hero jus like Eiht, I gets respect wherever I go//
while you be famous as hell but gettin chased off stage like Snoop in san diego//
I speak the truth like beanie siegel when sayin I cant be beat//
or at least not by this mc whose rhymes got the impact of cold heat//
whoever talked you into spittin might as well best talk you out//
IQ of a highschool dropout, gettin the fuck knocked out//
learn the game watch what you say, when u say and who u say it to//
made a mistake by callin me out cuz my response was rather radical//

['Illicit']

yo change the topic title so we can get votes dawg.

oh and no beef  

[ToNe1904]

This shit was pretty close yall. Explicit had tha disadvantage of spittin first. But Illicit didnt really write off his verse. I was feelin Explicits flow alot, as was i feelin Illicit. But in tha end, alhought explicit had a tight verse...he didnt attack enough. Illicit brought more punches, and attacked. Seeing as this is a battle...i gotta give it to tha agressor.

vote=Illicit

good shit yall

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

No beef Ceeride. this is a friendly battle, no need to cause beef with a good homie .. Yo thanx Tone, i appreciate ya vote! Hey after this i will be outta here for a while... im on vacation.... so get those votes comin in.... I gotta go on holiday soon!

Peace to ya al.. especially Ceeride

[Pillow]

both dropped nice shit. i am not feeling expicit style to much, althogh he dropped some nice ass shit, ur on tha rise dogg. but illicit took this battle. i liked his style and his word play, it was tite. the line that i really liked from u illicit was........
"ima underground hero jus like Eiht, I gets respect wherever I go//
while you be famous as hell but gettin chased off stage like Snoop in san diego//"
haha that shit was tite
vote=illicit

peace.....

..::TinMaN::..

[Reef]

Not a bad battle.. Good effort from Explicit.. i think you got a few clever lines in there.. This was my fave,
'A classic battle between the best, and the better'
its a real shame beacuse you coulda made a real dope line after that, but u seemed to fall off. Nevamind.. You seemed to lack originality in some parts.. For example
'anthrax napkin, with your lilly whit ass askin'
That reminds me of the song Square Dance by Eminem.

Overall it was an average verse.. Good try man

Illicit, its been a long time since i last saw ya rhyme, and im glad to say u aint changed. Wordplay was tight, and you got some real clever lines in there like the Snoop one and the highschool dropout one.

Overall illicit dropped a better verse, he was more direct and his punches and attacks hit harder.

Vote: Illicit

['Illicit']

what are the rules explicit?  like how many votes bla blah?

otherwise it woulda been a KO, but this rhyme was definately better than your last one ginst me.  keep it up and have fun on your holidays dawg!

peace

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

Iight ceeride you get this one homie... Nice flow... thanx to all tha peeps that voted, thanx Ceeride for tha good battle.... Adios people!