Harmany Vs. Criminal_909 Vs. Cock Bones

[Hittman]

The Winner Of This Triple Threat Match Gets The Lightweight Title. The Three Of You Must Spit 18-25 Bars Directed Against Your Other Two Finalists. No Special Words Need To Be Used, Just Spit Some Hard Battle Verses. I'll Be Voting On This, I Guess Da Notorious Mack Will Be Aswell. All The Voting Will Be Done On Scores Added Together.

DEADLINE - To Avoid All The Problems With Time Zones You Must Spit Your Verse Within 5 Days From The Time This Post Was Made. After That Then Your Out.

[Cliftone_Santiago_909]

Fuck it, here goes....



I Flow Off Tha Dome/ Killin' Two Birds Wit One Stone/
Like Alchaselzer Got Them Spittin Up Foam/
How You G'd Up Representin' Tahoe?/
How You G'd Up When Your Name Is Cock Bones?/
Your Shit Is Wack, I Tell No Lies/
Doggy Can't See Me Like He Got Sand In His Eyez/
I Stay On Point, Stick To Tha Topic/
This Mut Wilding Out Like He Was Straight up Sikotic/
Tha True Side, Southern Cali, I Repp Til I Die/
No One Can Save Ya, Not Even Allah/
And Harmany, You Can't Harm Anybody/
You Better Off Leaving My Name Out Yo' Mouth And Stick To Dissin' Doggy/
Think Twice On How Much You Want This Belt/
Cuz My FREEstyle Flows Just May COST You Your Health/
A Lesser Life Phorm, You'z A Straight Parasite/
You Got Ballz For Battling Me, But You Spit Like a Femcee, So I Guess That Makes You A Hermaphrodite/
Dont Fuck Around Cuz You Bite/ Teeth Sharp Like A Knife/
Wake Up Tha Next Day With Tooth Marks And Scars/
Your Shit Is Wack! Take You Out Only Using Space Bar/
You Foolz Are Hesitant, Just Waiting For This Ending/
But I'ma Keystyle Criminal With Plenty Battles Pending/

[Entreri117]

Nice drop, Criminal.  Aight...herez mine:

"Cock Bones" needs to keep a single name for more than a week at a time/
"Criminal" needs to slow down before he gets a seizure with that diss rhyme//

Actin like you a convict and a con-artist, but not the person in the battle who's comin the hardest/
Like a military phalanx marching into battle, "Criminal" climbs the ladder to try and reach my stature//

Like Tom Cruise in Cocktail, I'm servin this wanna-be "Criminal" with shots all night long/
Its still the same old song, Criminal tryin to rhyme in a place where he don't belong//

With the assistance of steam, I'm rollin you over, and flatenin you out like an iron/
Smoked up when you've been sizzled and burnt, and now goes off the fire alarm siren//

"Cock Bones", I could spit twenty bars alone on the name changes you make/
Whether its "Doggystylin" or anything else, I'm humiliating you in ya own home state//

I have a tendency to brutally assault my advesaries in the verbal field of lryical war/
This ain't a board game like Risk, what I have in store will leave "Doggy" unconscious on the floor//

None of this I been spitten is bitten, you two must be slippin hard and trippin/
Like a piston, I'm firin at ya'll with enraged fury with a freestyle, you two on some writtens//

For instance, if you compared my shit to theirs, you can see the obvious and viewable significance/
When it comes to diss rhymes, "Criminal" and "Cock" need every killogram and ounce of assistance//

"Criminal" needs to keep my name outta his dental, and hush-hush about his rhymes bein rentals/
"Bones" gets sentimental and gentle when I spit, but I'm not chivilrous, and I've been known to go mental//

Like an abortion, I'm completly murderin "Bones" before he even comes out from the dark/
I'm takin over your turf like a hammer-head shark, proclaimin myself as the absolute monarch//

"909" can call himself a criminal, but I'm the true assailant and fugitive convict/
I'm as swift and rapid as a supersonic, and with my melody I can be called a sonnet//

"Cock" hasn't even made an appearance, but I still enter the battle arena with very potent persaverance/
Both "Criminal" and "Cock" need to fear this, and approach with extreme caution like a lost and tortured spirit//[/b]

[Entreri117]

Aight, so who won this battle?  Cock Bones didn't get his verse in on time...so who's the new Lightweight Champ??

[Hittman]

Yeah, Cock Bones is out. I'll Vote On your other two battles when I can be bothered.

[Entreri117]

Come on now...who the fuck won this?

[Hittman]

Criminal 909 Dropped A Tight Verse With A Fairly Nice Scheme. Straight To The Point Rhymes That Flowed Perfectly Together. Some Of That Shit Was Weak Though, Still Touching On The Basics. I'll Give You A 4/5

Now Too Me Harmany Spat A Tighter Verse. The Flow Wasnt Great And The Lines Didnt Seem To Connect Very Well, But Your Bars Seemed More Complex. Liked The Use Of Vocab. Rating Of 4.3/5

NO TITLE CAN BE GIVEN OUT YET, YOU'LL HAVE TO WAIT FOR DA NOTORIOUS MACK TO VOTE ASWELL.

[Entreri117]

Aight, thanks for the breakdown Logic.

Aeyo Mack...vote man!  Been delayin this battle for long enuff...please vote!

[da_notorious_mack]

sorry bout this yall but here my review

Harmany=Pretty tight shit man,i like ya vocab and you had alright pucnches as well=4.3

Criminal 909 imo this was that bit netter than harmanys,he matched harmany with the punches and vocab,and the flow was better=4.5

[Hittman]

Harmany has the title...

[Entreri117]

Thanks for the breakdown Mack.

Yo Criminal...that was a tight verse you put up.  Props to ya...you were a tough opponent.  I only beat you by a tenth of a point...nice verse homie...