Author Topic: short quik verse  (Read 126 times)

westsiderider323

  • Guest
short quik verse
« on: April 10, 2009, 08:03:10 PM »
(first one on dubcnn)

Steady freestyle while im ready meanwhile I’ll drop a heavy green pile
its evident an extent of evidence resents me to be heaven sent
no remorse of course forced me to ignore the source so u end up wit a head spilt in half like a divorce
im legitimate I cut ligaments I was givin the gift to stick my dick in ya bitch I bring damage to ya average savage habits so I take advantage and slam shit and leave u wit fatlips
my lyrical verse bursts the worst curse spiritual church verse word to god
I got ya head straight but the rest of yous gay prey the best of u may lay in a mess of dismay
u aint gotta blast on me cuz all I gotta do is rap and slap half of these fags
this must b the end so I send shoutouts to all of dubcnn   
 

QuietTruth

  • Muthafuckin' Don!
  • *****
  • Posts: 9083
  • Thanked: 3 times
  • Karma: 1181
  • Shoot 'em up bang bang, nigga die slow
Re: short quik verse
« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2009, 03:36:50 PM »
Good drop, please do more in here my homie.
 

bez

  • Guest
Re: short quik verse
« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2009, 07:49:04 AM »
Really liked it, kinda felt like you was forcing it though, trying as much as you can to get as many best, test, blessed, stress, fess, etc etc in one bar, but it was still good.