WCC Cup round 2 - R?E?L vs. Tin Man (wild card)

[M Dogg™]

Alright, this is round two, competion is getting better, and we are going to crack down on how good you are. In this battle, each NetCee will have to tell a story about the other NetCee, doesn't have to be real, but like other great EmCees do in battles, i.e. Nas to Jay-Z in Ether. Again, as many lines as it takes, no bonus or deduction for more or less lines. Due June 21, midnight Westcoast time.

[.:R-E-L:.]

Yo i wrote this like im talking 2 my opponent....

Eating and Beating

*Introduction*

Tinman, or should i just say, thin man//
Hittin tha Kali land put shame to tha name//
Lets tell them tha story of when u tryed 2 gain fame//
When u went out 2 c Horry (and tha lakers)//
Aggrevation and fornication were present one night//
Your motivation was shown when you decided to fuck fo quarters//
Horrors arrived when a client of yours decided to give you orders//
Then you jus took it up tha anus//Fuck, man, dats da lamest//
Now u CANT b tha greatest//

*Getting Into It*

From hittin tha Hollywood~Streets//We c wat kind food~u faggets~eat//
I woulda neva thought, Kali woulda make u hit~tha~meat//
You bit~tha~sheets, from all tha agony?//
Jus let it be....u sunk down 2 that degree//
And ur ruined ur whole male anatomy//
Is this incident tha first time u decided to play ball?//
I dont think this is lagidament at all//

*Conclusion (Wrapping it up)*

Blinking.....semen leaking//
And wat u were eating, all led up 2 an anal beating//
I cant believe u didnt even try retreating or leaving//
You jus kept eating and beating//

No beef!!

[.:R-E-L:.]

^^jus had 2 edit tha title^^

[M Dogg™]

That's cool.

[Pillow]

yo check it............

i mma put a diabolic spell on this fo REL//
look at his battle verse, the motha fucka cant even spell//
when i cap u, you goin st8 ta hell//
just like ACDC, hells bells is what u ll hear//
In Paranoid Situation U Better Keep Calm, I Dynamite Every Verse I Spit So When It Explode U Know That It’ll Be The Bomb//
I’m Elevating Why REL Spitting Out Dirt Like Maggots, I Aint Got Time For Your Jokes You Can Go Show Them Shit To Bob Sagget//
You Fucking Wit The Gods Child So Call Me The Don, Cause That Excalibur Will Leave You Leaking More Blood Then Tampons//
Dropping Bombs On REL Like a  Nuclear Missile, Why Front Like u Want War When U Step On In The Battle Grounds Wit Led Pencil//
I’m Blazing More Clips Then The L.A Clippers, The Day That U Beat Me Will Be The Day Michael Jackson Become A Go Go Stripper//
Bullets Is Like Anchors Cause They Will Sink In Your Chest, Snatch Out Your Lungs And Hand Them 2 You Now You Really Holding Your Breath//
You Not A Storm I’ll Call That Shit A Cloudy Day, You The Type That Will Go 2 Penitentiary And Act Hard And Get Fucked Anyway//
Timan Leaving His Enemies Soul Torment, Fuck A Camera Pose In Front Of These Gun And Make It A Casket Moment//
My Brothers Keeper & That’s A Promise I’m a Keep, I’ll Rip Out Your Heart And Make An Track Using Your Heart Beat//
You Can Live Off Your Opinion But Shyt Right Here Is A Fact, I’m a Carry Final Scriptures 2 The Top Of The Chart’s Like Amtrak//
Motha Fucka//

BIOTCH..........
(no beef)

..::TinMaN::..

[.:R-E-L:.]

Yo Mdogg.....can we get an early ruling?

[.:R-E-L:.]

[ROCCY]

 lmao@ tin man saying BIOTCH and under it saying no beef ahahahahahahahahha

[M Dogg™]

Sorry R.E.L. my sister has been on the net since 5:30 Cali time, and it's now 11, so I couldn't. But anyways, heres the vote.

Both came out pretty good, REL was telling me about Tin Man and his L.A. experence...LOL. And Tin was leading up to REL's death, hard. I like REL's ability to tell a story, it allowed me to follow through and not zone out...   Tin Man had a very hard nose style, that was very lyrical, and had many punchlines. Had to go over a few times to catch everything. In the end, well REL was easier to follow, Tin Man was more hard hitting, and such. Not so much the story I wanted though, but I thought it was slightly better. Tin Man goes on.

[.:R-E-L:.]

good battle

[.:R-E-L:.]

but hold up.....

MDOGG- u said Tinman didnt have the style of rhyming u wanted....so y is he moving on??

U gave certain specifications n he didnt follow them

can i jus understand this.....i aint tryna start beef or nuttin

[M Dogg™]

He sort of did, sort of didn't. I wanted something, he gave me what he did. I can't knock it, so I should have said that I judged it as I wanted it. He came close enough to give him credit, but not to run away with anything.