WCC Cup round 1 - Pr1mo vs. TinMan

[M Dogg™]

This is the first round for the WCC Cup. Last time Skillz won the Cup and gained greater respect. I'm judging this tournarment, and all verses are due at midnight California time Friday June 14. Good Luck.  

[ROCCY]

Give Primo The win, because I stopped Keystyling homies..Im retired..im in audio thats about it..sorry about that I signed up awhile back..Peace..

[M Dogg™]

Insert joke about Roccy having a chance here.  

[ROCCY]

Insert joke about Roccy having a chance here.  

LoL..Trust me....I could..

[ToNe1904]

Insert joke about Roccy having a chance here.  

lol ay, fuk all these DQ's cus people are retired n what not. Why not find out if anybody else wants to take theyre place?

[Pillow]

lol@ roccy being retired

[M Dogg™]

He wasn't DQed, he forefitted. Oh well, TinMan, you want a shot at Primo. Anyone... open shot at a hall of famer.

[Pillow]

HELL YA i ll take shot...........set it up

[Pillow]

well aiight here go my shit, i posted early, cause i prolly would have 4 got so...............

Today's agenda, leave Primo in a state of dementia//
With a mirror, and a rambo knife to deal with his schitzoprenia//
My apathy's the driving component behind my distorted reality//
It's blasphemy, Primo got the audacity to wanna battle me//
My microphone mastery make me losing an abnormality//
Must be some illegality in the way I rip rappers raggedly//
I Actually thought that this would be a battle well fought//
But my verbal onlslaught made Primo more of an afterthought//
I'm a juggernaut of jargon with openly omenous origins//
Type of MC you dont see every day like green oranges//

peace.............

..::TinMaN::..

[Tecknine]

We're off to see the Wizard in drastic Blizzard conditions\\
Flow spontainiously 'CUMbusts' ,like Magnesium fucked Oxygen in the poopshoot in prison\\
Listen,my rhyme structures glisten, writtens are artifacts of superstition\\
Drastic uppercuts, knock emcees perpendicular ass- backwards on Sealy's Postrapedic Matress\\
I bring 'ill delivery' like 'agent orange flanged upon your cinnasticks'\\
All of Primo's freestyles after a great while turn classic\\
Decibal factorization of my mic de-evolves herbs into RIBO-NUCLEIC-ACIDS\\
Tin-Man lacks the creativity and the intensity\\
Dare you to mention-me, smash your appendix-lean with my sentencing\\
Spits nothing but dribbles crowd under a water retentive screen\\

10 bars

[M Dogg™]

What we have here is hard lyrics with big words, against great lyrical word play. When done correctly, big words can be very well used, and Tin Man did so. But on the second line, I question what schitzoprenia has to do with a Rocky knife, unless one of his vocies thinks his Rocky. Primo spit a near perfect verse using good metaphors and such. With a final score of 4.8-4.75, the winner by spit dession, Primo