Author Topic: KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----  (Read 556 times)

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Re: KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----
« Reply #30 on: June 09, 2002, 12:41:07 AM »
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there really is nothing to agree on. he set the rules, he broke his own shit, so it dont count, hands down. 2-1 ^^


whatever bitch... 2-2 then
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Re: KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----
« Reply #31 on: June 09, 2002, 12:52:06 AM »
alrite u 2 calm down
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Re: KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----
« Reply #32 on: June 09, 2002, 04:43:12 AM »
TinMan"z shit looks like a first draft of a battle rhyme...there r some nice ideas reflected like some nice punches and flowes, but the structure is very,very blured and some of the lines don"t even rhyme, it could"ve been better but there might be a hidden potensial in it.


KVB"z waz not only complex and poetic, his rhyming structure was much better crafted, there was proper use of  the internal rhyme-in-rhyme tactic... the only flaw is tha usual one in overlly poetic battle rhymes and it"z the thematic focus,but other than that itz an excelent rhyme...

this one belongs by far to KVB.
vote: KVB
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KVB

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Re: KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----
« Reply #33 on: June 09, 2002, 04:46:46 AM »
Thanks for voting I GEEZY...

3-2, keep voting.
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Re: KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----
« Reply #34 on: June 09, 2002, 11:11:14 AM »
pretty close battle yall. Tin had sum pretty good punches, but lacked in his rhyming and flow. KVB's punches IMO were pretty much equal to tins. But he had a much better rhyme scheme and overall flow to his verse. The closing line had me crackin up "bizzy bone" lol good battle yall...peace

vote=KVB
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KVB

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Re: KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----
« Reply #35 on: June 09, 2002, 07:35:36 PM »
4-2, I am victorious.

Thanks to everybody 4 voting... appreciated. :D
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Re: KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----
« Reply #36 on: June 09, 2002, 08:41:21 PM »
yo good battle.......you whinned like a bitch.........lol......but good battle homie
peace

..::TinMaN::..
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