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CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« on: May 07, 2002, 05:07:02 AM »
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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2002, 02:03:19 PM »
A-P-L destroyin and rippin Melanin Deficient//
R-E-L be sayin, u five bitches on mah dick is sufficient//
And ur pussy actions gimme enough satisfaction//
I be makin lyrical~transactions, 24-7//
In heaven, yall need a bunch of miracle~factions, to brake u off into fractions//
To cause this rhyming reaction and to cause u and ur homies to elope//
Cuz i kno u wanna, and im dope like marijuana//
We r hot like fire, and lignify u foos//
U guys are up for hire, and need to start to dignify mah ability to live as i choose//
KVB is like some pussy~princess//
But ima let u be, uzi~defenseless, cuz u cant run in my game//
And Primo has to block~his~anger//
While Blade is in a lock~chamber, while im tha defender and ranger//

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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2002, 08:48:35 PM »
Mack, personally appointed to sever~you~beggars, blow ya heads off wit seven~berrettas...
my spits wreck~all~ya~peasants 'coz Melanin's known as 'E-Quell' 'coz they'll never~be~better...
i'm bestin'~y'all, squash Primos's genitals wit' immense amounts of hundred-ton wreckin'~balls...
wit' amazin' technicals, i prove ya presence is more unwanted than nazis at Jewish festivals...
'coz Mack's shootin'~domes, carve grooves~in~hos and witness these looserz~blow...
wit' ever-improvin'~flows, i hit Infinite  so hard that i penetrate ya skin and bruise~ya~bones...
so i blaze~brains, instegate~pain, 'coz i morph into Blades mind and fire-bomb ya mainframe...
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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2002, 06:55:19 AM »
DING DING.  FIRST ROUND.

I need a soundcheck, turn my fuckin mic up/
Melanin, a veteran crew with a rep cause we've won/
Battlin against ametuers, who haven't matured- your young/
Your mic skills are like cheap thrills and pills of stimulants/
You throw fits, my dick fits in your mouth like a pacifier in width/

(Who the fuck are these guys anyway? APL? I ain't ever heard of em)

I can't make distinctions from one of your rhymes to the next/
Your fuckin no names, like Black Muslims replacin the last names with the X/
The Melanin Deficient has seperated your head from your fuckin chest/
The rap version of the Lost tribe of Shabazz, while we're fullfillin Yocumb's quest/

(The Melanin Description)

My crew is race blendin, an Indian, Norwegian, some English, mixin in the blackness/
Searchin for one world domination, Melanin expands like the Illuminati from East to West/
Like the US, usin the War on Terrorism to justify imperialism/
Melanin's takin over the whole fuckin battle board and exterminatin 3rd world patrons/
Midgets against giants, the peasants against the Kings your time is wastin/
I'm callin on my Knights of the Round Table all VERBALLY BLESSED/
I pass the fuckin mic so who's NEXT.
 

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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #4 on: May 13, 2002, 06:02:03 AM »
If REL ever come against me, I'll bomb first like terrorists in Atlanta/*1
Wanna be a real pimp but you're only good for "five percenter"/
Fuck the pesky lil APL-rabbits, compared to Melanin you are the 7 dwarfs*2, give me a "Mack" and I'll rip out your heart, pull out your vocal "chords" like strings on a fuckin guitar/
This rhyme is like a poisonus, stinging dart, y'all have "slower starts" than retarded employees at Quckie-Marts/
Even if you give me an old, rusty icepick, I'll still dig REL a brand new "Gravel Pit"/
Plus I came to grab Snow White*3, that means you dwarfs can stay gay savages/
Miracolous, that's why I strike faster than than light-speed African panthers, charging with abusive fear/
Unique rhymes are common, not rare, speaking sincere, your rhymes is unclear like I GEEZY spitting drunk off gallons of Hebrew beer/
Fuck Hannibal Lector, I'm the true Bone Collector, this is a performance of "APL-187's downfall", and I'm the "director"/
I can determine your location cos' I'm a pussy detector, when I step in the door, REL gets a sudden erection/
I control your mind and your spirit, be prepared for a fag-resurrection/
My rhymes is complex like a mathematical equation/
Slice off ya lips, leave you sucking my dick while I stick you five hits with the icepick, keepin' a tight grip around my fingertips, blocking all communication/
Chase you restlessly from Africa to Asia, how can you possibly face me?/
Mack, take care of the basics, you're already wet up from menstruation/


*1 Terrorists dropped a bomb in the 1996 olympic games in Atlanta
*2 Referring to the famous Disney story "Snow White And The Seven Dwarfs"
*3 Also referring to the famous Disney story "Snow White And The Seven Dwarfs"

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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2002, 12:57:17 PM »
APL, gimme a break, yall fake, no real competition/
at the end of this battle got ya wishin you revoked the decision/
cuz we bust with precision, each and every Melanin soldier/
fold ya in bodybags, rip ya skin wit mics we fight to win/
first roun you easy victims, u chickens anxious of spittin/
facin Deficient, R-E-L and Mack should stop trippin/
teardrops and closed caskets is my prediction of my lyrical vision/
APL's initials dont put fear to my mind/
R-E-L's lyrics wouldnt find a way out of wackness if they been polished n shined/
verbally bruise ya pussies til my muthafuckin knuckles bleed/
cuz I was mic-slappin ya so hard over and over repeatedly/
KVB, bLaDe, infinte Primo n me/
5 rough rugged n raw muthafuckaz you'l lyrically never beat/
we stand form, a alliance, strong and immune to pain/
we hand ya whores some tissues to wipe ya eyes, crybabies been put to shame


sorry, had to spit this quickly, definetely aint my best shit.

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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #6 on: May 13, 2002, 08:59:48 PM »
Melaninz's corner is vacant, the comprised escape is blatant//
The fakes are tasting, fiery shells; and inflamed snails cast by Satan//
Hell is infected, as liars and snakes are Injected//
Infinite used some lies to woo the eyes of the prized and well respected//
His effort was met first by the Blade who repped dirt//
A slept purk, from one battle won, but was yet murked//
As the realness emerged, the quote of "feel this" was purged//
As this herb was "touched" along with his crutch of "musing" with words//
A fool persists, though previous spits have left a sightless socket//
Your experienced rip is sewn by this thread to refresh your mind's optics//
Embarassment was the key for your wack rapping at me//
Your yapping is ceased; as a superior Mack "clip" ends an Average "movie"//
We damgage oldiez with crew heat until they're out of site//
Searching for a dot com thats not bomb to up they're mediocre write//
Your chatter smites, anything considered close to a verse//
A deteriorating jerk, ya spit was not anywhere close to your first//
You posed as a curse, with one sick spit you rehearsed//
Now you're at a loss of material, you spittin soggy cereal//
The remains of the first meal, now we break fast to the fury yo//
Its PRIMO how a fake hip hop nuisance could start a crew//
And skip spit in a fight, cutting out the lights; before its through//
A master persuader; crew comprised of tricks and lies//
He picks and pries; through dubccs written rhymes//
Dude managed to Inject a ceeride into a click shady//
he answered "maybe" but he was tricked to see "gold" waiting//
Not knowing that when you Face A.P.L you face scars//
A place tarred with blood and sweat is where we Face Off//
Its late Ma, the A.P.L is rushing with the breaks off//
We take off, tires skiddin; till all your mates gone//

YO CMON WE NEED 2 MO VERSES CMON HOMIEZ
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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #7 on: May 14, 2002, 05:00:20 AM »
yo dis iz shadz verse his computers mashed so im postin it 4 him

Primo when it comes to spittin lyrics you can't touch me, I'm untouchable and way far ahead of a 'wannabe'//
I'm slashin' you to tiny pieces leaving you like debris, I'm sure you'll agree with me to every degree//
You've been beaten with everything you came you might as well pay the fee, soon you'll know quite a bit about agony and suffering that's a guarantee//
You fuckin with the wrong motherfucker son it's more then obvious to see//
You're running last and you're simply being outclassed in every aspect, what are you some fag who came from Tennessee?//
Infinite you're not even in the class of bourgeoisie, you're lower somewhere between the sewer and gutter believe me//
Who do you think you are fuckin with me, I'll beat you to death while your eradicated body hangs lifeless from a tree//
I'll never fade, I'm a lasting impression just like the first crusade//
Illicit gettin played on his own turf, I don't even have to call out the military blockade//
I'm pullin up on the shoulder blade while your marchin in some contemptible parade//
No use for me to invade I'll just sit back and watch you get betrayed//
KVB your bullshit isn't even worth a creative response by any means let alone 'acknowledging'//
It's apparent you have shitty reasoning, your taste is prolly as bad as shitty seasoning//
I'll admit I am mean especially now cuz it's spring, I’m commonly referred to as the 'MC machine'//
I lived to see seventeen, I'll doubt if you live past fourteen//
Infinite just ruptured his spleen, this whole rhyme got you 'bouncin' up and down like a trampoline//
Primo I've had way too much caffeine, but still a victory over you is routine//
It’s obvious you’re dressin' up as yourself for Halloween, my rhymes just sunk you like a submarine//
Blade your name says it all, Oh please I haven't even begun to unload on you let alone fall//
You must be paranoid from all the weed you smoked I think it's time for a curtain call//
Primo must I destroy you in this inconsequential brawl, you're down O 2 in the count of baseball//
I'm knockin you over like a 'bowling ball' then shoving you in a pocket like a 'billiard ball'//
Infinte why yet again do I feel like I have to remind you my mind state is as stable as a one legged table//
I'll beat you to death with my jumper cable while I'm most able, and blow up like a fiber optic cable//
Fuck a fable I'm bringing the truth while your story is fake and completely unstable//
I don’t need any help in the stable, I'm blowin' up by myself I don't need a record label//

 

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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #8 on: May 14, 2002, 05:18:55 AM »
???oh shit itz due 2 day ima hav 2 spit again ???

Imma slainn dudes, and leave their heads with chain grooves/
this lame crew, is led by a judas & i didnt want to name u/
i just wanted to clap my tech to make u'r brain ooze/
but fuck it, Infinite, Primo or whoever your being/
remember when u begged me to join u'r crew in that P.M?/
you have no faith in em, i hope they all readin/
but Blade did the same thing, u know u seen em/
yall are the trick click, PINK, all vaginas/
dont u know it dont take long for da APL to find ya/
we settle duels with metal tools that'll grind ya/
i hope u dont mind the, chrome gat thats buckin/
it'll push u'r dome back if yo ass aint duckin/
yall fuckin, with ghetto mechanics that learn tools/
that'll burn fools and make u'r brain drool/

Jus some quick shit i wrote in case we were a spit short
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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #9 on: May 14, 2002, 02:08:22 PM »
Chapter I - Black Death



Iillin n killin MCz up and down Like the stock exchange, come strapped wid a pack of slugz, aiming at ure cardiacz and givin APL heart attackz//
Till I collapse im spillin these murderious raps, like a soulja, hazardous verbal attacks, slicin their backs with a machete a nd stacking MCz up in rackz//
My rhymes like a plaque, infect and destroy, attack like a cobra,  after the smoke clears out, im the last one standin like pac//
while im drillin in ya skull n spittin an infection penicillin cant stop, cuz i was raised by satanic people//
subliminal-thoughts so deep leave emcees tied in knots and drowin in the abyss-of-my-crebral//
leave u as alive as criminals-shot, Red dot 2 ure head, makin ya death bed-rock, ya diss-is-feeble//
I see ya midgets smiling prolly cuz Ignorance is bliss, tha only thing ya gonna beat is ure dick//
I spit a kiss at APL like double dose of slugs, as your punches miss accept defeat with melanins spits//
xplisit ballastic hits droppin hard bars line boulders, battleground fulla scattered Dead Souljaz with the bombs i inflict//
turning wcc into a barran wasteland, makin APL cry like bitches so they need another tear gland//
when mah lyrical bombs land on emceez, and expand their chest plates, im so hot i even giv tha sun a tan//
bitch i rip fools, like tissues, sprayin shots like a drumroll//
leave APL suckaz screamin fo hay-soos, when mah rhyme unfolds//
I shatter skullz with mah punches like mohaamed ali, even wid fiber optics ya suckaz cant see mee//
leave ya faggots screamin like Hailie, a sikotic on rampage, while dropin ill knowledge like talib kweli//



...R.I.P'ped



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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #10 on: May 15, 2002, 11:34:42 AM »
I Would DQ Melanin Here But Then I See Notorious Mack Spitting More Then 15 Bars So I'll Just Vote.

APL....

REL: 4/5
Da Mack #1: 4.6/5
Da Mack #2: 4.3/5
Da Mack #3: 4.5/5
Da Mack #4: 4.1/5

Average Score: 4.3/5

Melanin.....

Infinite59: 4.39/5
KVB: 4.5/5
Illicit: 4.4/5
bLaDe: 4.65/5

Average Score: 4.485/5

Melanin Win!!
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Re: CREW TOURNY: Melanin Deficient Vs. APL=187
« Reply #11 on: May 15, 2002, 10:06:46 PM »
Dope... Melanin are victorious... let's hope Primo spits a verse in the next round.

Peace
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