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« on: April 15, 2009, 05:34:36 PM »
I don't like you, but i don't wanna fight you
I just wanna stab you in the face and then bite you
-Cause im a cannibal, i'll rip off your mandible
For all that whack spitting you ass is what im handing you
-I'll keep it light, cause i don't want you to bite
My hot lines hoping that your career would take flight
You can judge me based on my flow, but what do you know?
Im rippin yah hoe an then i gotta go exit through the door
-A lotta people i see look executable
For me its suitable to jab knives through yah cuticle
-I'm really trying hard not to lose it though
So i'll be locked in this cage, up too the usual...


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Re: VENT
« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2009, 05:48:36 PM »
-Just because you got a lot of karma an posts
-Doesn't give you a reason to brag an boast
I bag on most, don't make me grab the toast
This spot is full of gays so this's my faggot roast
Don't waste your time challenging me im as hot as the devil
-I'm battling myself cause ain't nobody on my level
You don't wanna fuck with me when im in a bad mood
Your girl cheated on you, naw i aint that dude
-I'm the reason that your parents aint together
Fuck it, im the reason for all of this warm weather
I swear that i'm better so if you still thinkin you clever
You should show up to the battle with a bulletproof sweater you bitches


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Re: VENT
« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2009, 05:54:25 PM »
haha this ones dope



-Just because you got a lot of karma an posts
-Doesn't give you a reason to brag an boast
I bag on most, don't make me grab the toast
This spot is full of gays so this's my faggot roast
Don't waste your time challenging me im as hot as the devil
-I'm battling myself cause ain't nobody on my level
You don't wanna fuck with me when im in a bad mood
Your girl cheated on you, naw i aint that dude
-I'm the reason that your parents aint together
Fuck it, im the reason for all of this warm weather
I swear that i'm better so if you still thinkin you clever
You should show up to the battle with a bulletproof sweater you bitches


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damn u still havent logged off...ur hurting everyone with all this wack shit u drop, it hurts more then getting the swine flu
Tue, Mar 16, 2010 at 8:15 AM By: Ice Cube
Me and Mack 10 together again? I never say never, but he has the kiss the ring first.
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gbee:@ Petey: you sound like a broken record, time to grow up.
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #3 on: April 15, 2009, 06:04:16 PM »
Im constantly clappin heat, like this little smiley  :scarface:
Bet you like it in the butt like raven riley  :sombrero:
You young minded compared to me, like your named was miley, syrus  :poke:
You can see that im real through my iris  :drool:
A keystyle? Fuck it its a freestyle  :stir:
A lotta people is whack, and i don't really see how  ???
It could happen, maybe im just the mastermind of rappin  :yikes:
Pass the 9, i clap your spine, its casket time  :cheers:
Im that divine, that i have a shrine people pray to me  :rubeyes:
Heres what they say to me....nothing  :halo:
A good judge of character i can tell you bluffin  :nawty:
I hope your feedback, says this is wiggy whack  :raisetheroof:
The worlds on my shoulders im carrying it piggyback  :firedevil:
Should i go on, or should i just stop  :-\
My next album that drop, will prolly just flop  :puke:
Because im followed around by the hip hop cop  :rant:
Naw, not rick ross, im a real big boss  :bandit:
This aint hockey but im checkin you with a hip toss  :nahnah:
I got knocked yeah ya boy took a big loss  ::)
But i'm not yah boy, im yah worst enemy  :argue:
My inbox is full, so you can stop sendin me  :loser:
All that pussy shit about be friending me  :laugh:
I've had a hater fanbase..its not the end of me  :stop:
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #4 on: April 15, 2009, 06:12:51 PM »
haha you got some dopelines
dope work
you a rapper or anythin of that nature?
damn u still havent logged off...ur hurting everyone with all this wack shit u drop, it hurts more then getting the swine flu
Tue, Mar 16, 2010 at 8:15 AM By: Ice Cube
Me and Mack 10 together again? I never say never, but he has the kiss the ring first.
Cube
gbee:@ Petey: you sound like a broken record, time to grow up.
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #5 on: April 15, 2009, 06:23:47 PM »
I challenge you, throw on a hot beat an try to flow this
I handle you, I'm a verbal savage and you know this
I grow this, lotus an bubble often if you didn't notice
-I reach quotas, an chop shit like outboard motors
Like a time bomb they trying to defuse me
Ladies grab my arm they all trying to use me
-They see me rhyming an shinning with diamonds
They don't, see me runnin round crazy bustin them llamas
-This life, I don't, think i can hack it
Age 15 had me in a straight jacket
-Now i'm 21 i'm packing a gun
Having my fun, i bust it so them bastards a run
I dash with my son i get cash i swear i'm the one
Withdrawl time, i know its scary but fuck it i'm done
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #6 on: April 15, 2009, 06:25:39 PM »
haha not bad
damn u still havent logged off...ur hurting everyone with all this wack shit u drop, it hurts more then getting the swine flu
Tue, Mar 16, 2010 at 8:15 AM By: Ice Cube
Me and Mack 10 together again? I never say never, but he has the kiss the ring first.
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gbee:@ Petey: you sound like a broken record, time to grow up.
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #7 on: April 15, 2009, 06:26:49 PM »
Yeah, i guess. I don't like to say that i am a "rapper" cause retards automatically go "O.K. hes a white rapper he must be some wigger who goes around saying yo yo and trying to be black"

But i have been writing/rapping for 6 years. I don't really do it that much, its only a hobbie for me.

Thanks for the feedback though, didn't expect anyone to butt in this early..i was gonna go OFF. Still, just fucking around though. This place seems like a biters paradise so i can't say anything TOO hot.
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #8 on: April 15, 2009, 06:34:00 PM »
haha i rarely check this section but a couple heads got some skillz
Ive learned by bein humble and and jus doin you, your work will show what its worth
instead of runnin round, talkin bout im the best rapper etc...and then you jus average or jus another wanna be...and there are gang of them
damn u still havent logged off...ur hurting everyone with all this wack shit u drop, it hurts more then getting the swine flu
Tue, Mar 16, 2010 at 8:15 AM By: Ice Cube
Me and Mack 10 together again? I never say never, but he has the kiss the ring first.
Cube
gbee:@ Petey: you sound like a broken record, time to grow up.
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #9 on: April 15, 2009, 06:36:50 PM »
Everyone i work with hates me because i am never satisfied with my stuff. I am worse than Dr. Dre.
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #10 on: April 23, 2009, 06:51:59 AM »
it was aight
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #11 on: April 23, 2009, 09:51:16 AM »
This place seems like a biters paradise so i can't say anything TOO hot.

please DO say something hot...  maybe somebody will bite somethin... your drops were decent at best, considering you've been doing this for 6 years.. 
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Re: VENT
« Reply #12 on: April 30, 2009, 08:55:35 AM »
Yeah, i guess. I don't like to say that i am a "rapper" cause retards automatically go "O.K. hes a white rapper he must be some wigger who goes around saying yo yo and trying to be black"

But i have been writing/rapping for 6 years. I don't really do it that much, its only a hobbie for me.

Thanks for the feedback though, didn't expect anyone to butt in this early..i was gonna go OFF. Still, just fucking around though. This place seems like a biters paradise so i can't say anything TOO hot.

hey hommie definately props you got some good shit to say...
you got a lottsa info at your fingertips...
 

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Re: VENT
« Reply #13 on: May 04, 2009, 10:44:04 AM »
This place seems like a biters paradise so i can't say anything TOO hot.

please DO say something hot...  maybe somebody will bite somethin... your drops were decent at best, considering you've been doing this for 6 years.. 


Why bother? Hip hop is fucking gay. And writing some faggot text shit to no beat is also fucking gay. I don't even like rapping, its not my thing. I have been writing hip hop lyrics on and off for 6 years, i just do it to show other hip hop artists how i can not try at all and still be better than them. So if you think i suck, thats great. I hope you continue living in your fantasy world where you are going to become some big hip hop star.