YALL NEED TO PEEP THIS SHIT

[GfUnKLBC]

I NEED FEEDBACK YALL, NEGATIVE OR POSITIVE...KEEP IN MIND IMA FIRST TIME USER OF FRUITYLOOPS, I JUST GOT IT, AND OUR MIC AINT THE BEST QUALITY, BUT PEEP NE WAY AND TELL ME WHAT U THINK

[2DaMtHrOwEd]

wheres yo shit at nigga

[Smooth]

Woooord... you need a link negro!... hook it up

Peace

[GfUnKLBC]

haha my bad yall....here it is...
 
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=145771&q=Hi

[2DaMtHrOwEd]

yer shits tight those beats r hella tight for fruity loops

[2DaMtHrOwEd]

yer shits tight those beats r hella tight for fruity loops

[Trauma-san]

HAHAH, this stuff is coo.  I like flow like a river, nice beat.

wode skit.  Have no idea.  

 Gun Shots: Ain't feelin' it too much, sounds too synthetic (I know you ain't got much to work with, though)

I ain't stoppin, I like, if it was my beat, I'd stable the drums up a little bit, make them a little less jumpy, but it's all you.  Pretty good stuff.  Nice flow too.  

Westcoastin It, LOL I like the 2001 intro, haha.  You tried to go with that open dr. dre style, where everything's kinda spacy, kinda a open beat without much goin' on... that stuff's hard to pull off.  It's pretty decent, though, you did decent for not using this stuff too long.  

It's Jroc I like this beat, I'd probably add a little more drums too it though, (move it towards mannie fresh a lil bit).  Nice concept for the song, too, but man, add some reverb and echo to that chorus, or have somebody else do it (so it's kinda like introducing you).  Peace~

Beat Snippet : the synth is a little overbearing, but the drums are nice, and I hear bells and stuff you should add in my head.  

Beat Snippet 2: This is more like it.  That bass is crazy, though, lol.  Again, though, I'd layer it a little more, maybe after 30 seconds of the beat, have some synth strings come in and take it away somewhere else.  Peace~

[GfUnKLBC]

thanks alot dvs and king trauma, i appreciate this. and i think ima take some of ur advie trauma on some of those beats. and about "its jroc" i wanted to try and get someone else to say it, but we were limited, but were gonna re-do it most prolly and get someone else to do it.

ne one else feel free to post some feedback, we need all the feedback we can get, negative or positive, since were first-timers at this. thanks, and peace

[GfUnKLBC]

yoooo...we need some more feedback...post up your thoughts

[bez]

Yo the flow like a river beat is so goooooooooood.  But it kind of drows out your flow some time.

I am totally in love with the beat to gun shots, oh my goodness it sounds so good.  But the flow dont really seem to fit the song for my liking, dont get me wrong its good but like your mouth seems to close to the mike and its hurting my ears a bit. But the beat is off the heezy.

Beat snippet 2 is ok not your best tho.  

Didnt feel BEat Snippet as much as the other to.

West Coastin it beat sounds dope as fuck to.  But as yer said yourself the mic aint to good.

I aint stoppin is dope tooo.

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I tell you what tho mate you carry on makin them dope beats.  I tell yer I have downloaded fruity loops 3 times and I am always detirmed to get the hang of it and make dope beats.  I have deleted it the 3 times.  I can never get the hang of it.  But your beats are dope and actually sound they have been done professionally.  I have got a bit of business for you man.  Truth is I want your help.  Get at me over PM if you can. Bez

[GfUnKLBC]

yo thanks bez for the feedback, i aint got PM but i got AIM...if u wanna kno the sn IM me at shizzelistic213@hotmail.com ...if u dont have AIM just email me

[GfUnKLBC]

yo my bad bez i forgot what PM meant there for a minute..ill get at u

[KonSICKwence]

pretty tight shit for just startin producin .  ya flow is cool too .

you just got a shitty mic  and your vocals are too loud  but your on beat so i suggest keep flowin keep makin beats  and save up some money and get a new mic or buy some studio time where you can work with a professional  engineer and your results will be that much better. but with what your workin wiht shit is MAAAAAD TIGHT. i mean you could make better beats in time and have better flow in time dont get me wrong but i was surprised wiht your lyrical content compared to what i have heard on here that these kids called "TIGHT" lyrics  you actually have real topics when you spit whiuch is  the msot improtant trait of MC'in.

pz

Ineffable

go  peep my new 7 beat snippet and drop ya feed pleez its in the lab under "Ineffable-SEVEN BEAT SNIPPET" or osme shit like that i cant remember.

pz

[GfUnKLBC]

thanks man ima go peep that shit right now

[//:in-DIJI-nouz..]

yo i peeped two of the songs and both the beats were tyte as hell for your first time usin' fruityloops... i know people who use FL who couldn't make that kinda shit after a month or more!

The craziest part is that you don't even talk shit and you aint cocky... Sccit tried usin' fruityloops and after a couple months of tryin' his shit wasn't nearly as tite as these, and hes the biggest shit talker of all!