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i laugh at fuckers tryin to go at me then sleep when they start flowin at me no show no flow when they start rappinu livin wit mom and dad i fucks ya mom and slap ya dad when i rap ya moms jaw falls ya dads smacks ya ass sayin "y cant u b good like him?"nik gon get lit up like the 8 candles of hanukkah roc is just a bitch drag queen in rag change ya name to monica im incredible u lost in awu aint even say real shit unless u shit in each others mouth now thats real shit i rip real spit i dont give a fuck ima real spic i still wipe u out like real shitu say u the best? ima snatch ya crown wit ya head still on it put ya head on my necklace shit at least im bein honest got yall hooked like phonics i dominate the new lab niks reminded of hitler he takes his anger out on a female and hits her he aint even on a lil liquori laugh at yall sayin u crackin skulls only crack u see is each others ass yall dull i snatch yall skulls and bowlbest believe its joint tyme ima smoke u quiker then redman does when hes on joint time yall pull a groin tryin to keep up mineit takes 2 heads to try to put me to rest but theres no dick just 2 lez yall wack dumb and stupidthis the start of ya funeral ima take a dump in ya casket just so u wont b the only piece of shit underground my shits above u now yall wonder how im better then u fuckin clowns think bout that now
Quote from: Blunt Tyme [MC Big iLL] on November 04, 2009, 11:21:37 AMi laugh at fuckers tryin to go at me then sleep when they start flowin at me no show no flow when they start rappinu livin wit mom and dad i fucks ya mom and slap ya dad when i rap ya moms jaw falls ya dads smacks ya ass sayin "y cant u b good like him?"nik gon get lit up like the 8 candles of hanukkah roc is just a bitch drag queen in rag change ya name to monica im incredible u lost in awu aint even say real shit unless u shit in each others mouth now thats real shit i rip real spit i dont give a fuck ima real spic i still wipe u out like real shitu say u the best? ima snatch ya crown wit ya head still on it put ya head on my necklace shit at least im bein honest got yall hooked like phonics i dominate the new lab niks reminded of hitler he takes his anger out on a female and hits her he aint even on a lil liquori laugh at yall sayin u crackin skulls only crack u see is each others ass yall dull i snatch yall skulls and bowlbest believe its joint tyme ima smoke u quiker then redman does when hes on joint time yall pull a groin tryin to keep up mineit takes 2 heads to try to put me to rest but theres no dick just 2 lez yall wack dumb and stupidthis the start of ya funeral ima take a dump in ya casket just so u wont b the only piece of shit underground my shits above u now yall wonder how im better then u fuckin clowns think bout that nowUmm.... You SERIOUSLY need help with your rhyme scheme....Bro, Hip-Hop is poetry.... just like Shakespeare... and like the poetry that Shakespeare wrote, there is a particular structure to Hip-Hop.... find it.
Quote from: El the Self Image on November 04, 2009, 05:25:43 PMQuote from: Blunt Tyme [MC Big iLL] on November 04, 2009, 11:21:37 AMi laugh at fuckers tryin to go at me then sleep when they start flowin at me no show no flow when they start rappinu livin wit mom and dad i fucks ya mom and slap ya dad when i rap ya moms jaw falls ya dads smacks ya ass sayin "y cant u b good like him?"nik gon get lit up like the 8 candles of hanukkah roc is just a bitch drag queen in rag change ya name to monica im incredible u lost in awu aint even say real shit unless u shit in each others mouth now thats real shit i rip real spit i dont give a fuck ima real spic i still wipe u out like real shitu say u the best? ima snatch ya crown wit ya head still on it put ya head on my necklace shit at least im bein honest got yall hooked like phonics i dominate the new lab niks reminded of hitler he takes his anger out on a female and hits her he aint even on a lil liquori laugh at yall sayin u crackin skulls only crack u see is each others ass yall dull i snatch yall skulls and bowlbest believe its joint tyme ima smoke u quiker then redman does when hes on joint time yall pull a groin tryin to keep up mineit takes 2 heads to try to put me to rest but theres no dick just 2 lez yall wack dumb and stupidthis the start of ya funeral ima take a dump in ya casket just so u wont b the only piece of shit underground my shits above u now yall wonder how im better then u fuckin clowns think bout that nowUmm.... You SERIOUSLY need help with your rhyme scheme....Bro, Hip-Hop is poetry.... just like Shakespeare... and like the poetry that Shakespeare wrote, there is a particular structure to Hip-Hop.... find it.everyone needs they own style this mine if u dont like it ok thats cool but dont b talkin like everyone in hiphop is shakespeare this too complex for uand lights its cool u side wit ya homieshaha plus i bearly remember writin this bitch i was hiiiiigh was fuck
Quote from: Blunt Tyme [MC Big iLL] on November 04, 2009, 05:51:40 PMQuote from: El the Self Image on November 04, 2009, 05:25:43 PMQuote from: Blunt Tyme [MC Big iLL] on November 04, 2009, 11:21:37 AMi laugh at fuckers tryin to go at me then sleep when they start flowin at me no show no flow when they start rappinu livin wit mom and dad i fucks ya mom and slap ya dad when i rap ya moms jaw falls ya dads smacks ya ass sayin "y cant u b good like him?"nik gon get lit up like the 8 candles of hanukkah roc is just a bitch drag queen in rag change ya name to monica im incredible u lost in awu aint even say real shit unless u shit in each others mouth now thats real shit i rip real spit i dont give a fuck ima real spic i still wipe u out like real shitu say u the best? ima snatch ya crown wit ya head still on it put ya head on my necklace shit at least im bein honest got yall hooked like phonics i dominate the new lab niks reminded of hitler he takes his anger out on a female and hits her he aint even on a lil liquori laugh at yall sayin u crackin skulls only crack u see is each others ass yall dull i snatch yall skulls and bowlbest believe its joint tyme ima smoke u quiker then redman does when hes on joint time yall pull a groin tryin to keep up mineit takes 2 heads to try to put me to rest but theres no dick just 2 lez yall wack dumb and stupidthis the start of ya funeral ima take a dump in ya casket just so u wont b the only piece of shit underground my shits above u now yall wonder how im better then u fuckin clowns think bout that nowUmm.... You SERIOUSLY need help with your rhyme scheme....Bro, Hip-Hop is poetry.... just like Shakespeare... and like the poetry that Shakespeare wrote, there is a particular structure to Hip-Hop.... find it.everyone needs they own style this mine if u dont like it ok thats cool but dont b talkin like everyone in hiphop is shakespeare this too complex for uand lights its cool u side wit ya homieshaha plus i bearly remember writin this bitch i was hiiiiigh was fuckme thinks you misunderstood what I was telling you...You're rhyme scheme is not too complexed, it's too long... it's too long to actually function as a Hip-Hop rhyme.what you may have been trying to write as 16 bars, came out completely differently...actually, were you tryint to write a 16? do you know how to write a 16? (you'd be surprised who does know this stuff)If not, I'm willing to help, I like passing info on... Point is bro, I was tryin to help you out wit some advise, but if you don't want it, that's your perogative...
LOL@Blunt Tyme thinkin he made it better
Quote from: NIKCC on November 05, 2009, 03:31:53 PMLOL@Blunt Tyme thinkin he made it better lol@this bitch comin back cuz he knows im that much better faggot jew
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