Author Topic: Quick 10 Bars (Feedback) (Read 125 times)

Xearo · « **on:** December 08, 2002, 05:38:48 PM »

Haymaker your cerebral cortex, then uppercut the cartilage in your nostril passages/
From amateur to novice, and master to emperor, slashin my advesaries in a way thats savage//
Set up a phalanx in the battlefield like the ancient Spartans and Trojans/
Leave you soakin in a puddle on your own plasma and blood from a Golf Swing from Ben Hogan//
With a Nine Iron or Pitching Wedge, I'll wedge an opening gash in your brain cavity/
Send you 90 million miles to the star in the center of our solar system, now don't you wish you had gravity?//
I'll tear the flesh right off your muscle tissue, tear the muscle tissue off your rock-hard skeleton/
Rip off your nose with a vice grip, and nomore from now on can you ever smell-a-scent// (Couldn't think of anything else)
I'll send you in a decent from the thermosphere to the liquid molten mantle deep beneath the surface/
Similar to the Lion in the Wizard of Oz, to face me...I'll have your retina's searchin for your courage//

A quick 10 bars...

Felt like Keyin...

GhOzT

__kaLipZo__ · « **Reply #1 on:** December 09, 2002, 06:43:34 AM »

burnouts like myself seem to lose themselves reading big words as such that u used, but very nice piece =) =)

@Ss@sSiN · « **Reply #2 on:** December 09, 2002, 07:06:16 AM »

tight ass shit, keep that shit commin

'Illicit' · « **Reply #3 on:** December 09, 2002, 07:30:56 AM »

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With a Nine Iron or Pitching Wedge, I'll wedge an opening gash in your brain cavity/
Send you 90 million miles to the star in the center of our solar system, now don't you wish you had gravity?//

yo lol this was ill