Author Topic: Fuck Friends (Feedback Please)  (Read 232 times)

2euce 7even

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Fuck Friends (Feedback Please)
« on: May 20, 2010, 02:40:17 PM »
DEDICATED TO MY SO CALLED HOMIES AND EVERYBODY HOW TRIED TO PLAY YOUNG HOMIE LIKE THIS
FUCK Y`ALL!!!

My Life´s Like A Movie, Believe It Or Not
Everyday Is A Test, Gotta Stay On Top
Haters Tryin´2 Dirty Up My Name, Jelousy´s Tha Enemy
Don´t Get Caught Up In The Dirty Game
Fuck Friends, I Got Enemies That I´m Chillin Wit´
They Know I´m A Nut And Will Start A Killin´Spree
Quick 2 Bust Ya Head Cus Chronic Got Me Paranoid
Can´t Trust No Man, I´m On Tha Darkside Like Pink Floyd
Ain´t No Luv Lost But Fuck Y´all Foes
You Know Who´s Tha Boss Kiss My Muthafuckin Toes
I´m Tha Reason Why Y´all Punks Keep Thuggin´
Gave Y´all Too Much Luv But All I Get Is Mean-Muggin
Cuz Y´all Envy Me, Keep Talkin Shit On Young MVP
Never Been On My Level And U Will Never Be
Spread Rumours Like Hoes, Smilin´In My Face
Put Friendship Over Weed, I Wish That Shit Was Laced
I See Thru Y´all, Psycho Player Can Be Played
Like That
Pass Tha Mac And Let Me Get My Manson On
Keep Screamin´Y´all Correct But You Know It´s Wrong
I´m Not Tryin To Prove Anything, My Soul Is Bulletproof
Been Dealin´Wit Fakes And Snakes Since My Homie Jumped Off Tha Roof
Went Thru All Tha Drama, I Thought I Had Friends But
Things Change As Soon As You Punks Hit Tha Dope Spot
My Own Blood Exploit Me, Now Tell Me How Can I Trust?
Bust If I Must, Go Eye For An Eye But Do You Snake Ass Muthafuckas Really Want To Die?
I Can Put Y´all In Check But As Soon As I See Y´all Kiss My Ass Like Fags
Test Me Again And I Put Your Bloody Headsless Body In A Body Bag
Who Taught Y´all Cunts How To Act?How To Talk And How To Check Fools?
Ain´t No Luv In This Streetz, Ain´t No Muthafuckin´Rules
No Justice, No Peace U Gotta Be A Beast, To All My Homies
                                   REST IN PEACE
 

Muhfukka

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Re: Fuck Friends (Feedback Please)
« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2010, 09:04:01 PM »
You Should Probably Be Fluent In English Before You Try To Rap In It
 

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Re: Fuck Friends (Feedback Please)
« Reply #2 on: May 22, 2010, 01:19:29 PM »
Its not bad. The flows a lil choppy at times tho...especially at the end. Seems like u spittin a ton of venom and somebody...but its hard to know wtf youre talkin about. Just seems like generic anger rather than anything specific yah know?
"...and these niggas gettin tattoo tears...industry Bloods that show fear, when the authentics are near"