My Night (a true freestyle story)

[CodeCaine]

i had a bag of weed but i forgot tha cigar
so i grab my keys and go hop in my car
i start up tha car and drive to tha store
park in tha spot and walk thru tha door
i grab a drink for cottonmouth i'll get after tha blunt
i grab a lil snack and now i head to tha front
this ugly chick smiles but fuck it i walk past her
i head up to tha counter and ask for a dutchmaster
i pay for my stuff and now i head back home
no one else is there so im chillin all alone
so i roll up tha and tha shit is nice and tight
i lost my matches but i finally find a light
so i head oustside with tha blunt and my drink
i take my sweatshirt off cuz i dont want it to stink
i light up tha blunt hit it real hard and choke
i get paranoid and go tha backyard to smoke
im halfway thru but im feelin real fine
i decide to finish tha blunt cuz after all its all mine
well i burnt 2 fingers tryin to smoke it all
then i try to go in tha house but i slip and fall
i get up and think its good im not driving high
just then i see blue lights and a cop flying by
he wasnt after me but it almost ruined my nite
so i go open tha fridge but it's got a broken light
then tha phone rings and its this girl named amy
seems she's in a bad mood and she wants to blame me
but i dont wanna hear it so i slam tha phone down
then she calls back and says dont come around
i ask her why and she says "cuz u got in that fight"
i said u trippin bout that and she says "your fuckin right"
i said hes a pussy and deserved to be hit
she said "why you act so tough, like your tha shit"
i tell her i didnt get beat didnt get stomped in my chest
she says ''im tired ill call you tommorow i need some rest"
i say hang up tha phone cuz you know that i'm right
so we both hung up and that was my nite



i was in tha story tellin mood so i did this about what happened last nite...peace

[funkstylz]

Heh this is a pretty kewl topic , i'ma reply with my night freestyle

[funkstylz]

cruisin round town in my 240sx
people wavin at me n showin they respect
i get a call on my cellula phone
it's my boy r clay n he chillin at home
he says he wanna go hit up the club and see choclair
i say ya sure whatever i don't care
so we hitten up 'area 51'
the bouncers search me up an don't find a gun
now we chillin inside
and i'm dissin the openin band n they swallowin they pride
30 minutes later and up comes the star
rappin bout his money sex and his car
now i'm all up on the dance floor
c-walkin, doin the crazy vatos and so much more
gettin niggaz flippin the brows
most've them hatin cuz they don't know how
so the show's over and now i'm leavin
cruisin down the street and i see a pig creepin
on go the red and blue
so i pull on over right on cue
the guy comes up says i was drivin on the line
had anything to drink? naw sir i'm perfectly fine
pulls me outta the car and puts me on the curb
gets me doin some tests and says i been smokin some herb
man this sunabitch got me doin nothin wrong
repeatedly tellin me i'm takin hits from the bong
i tell the man none tonight but maybe yesterday
the pig slaps me around and says not to play
tells me to sit in my car and wait
20 minutes pass and now i'm late
comes back and knocks on my window
i open the door and he asks u been smokin any endo?
he tells me i can be charged if i lie and even lose my car
told the man i ain't don nothin just DDin my friend back from the bar
then he throws up some laser and tells me to follow
taps it on my nose and tells me not to wallow
gives me my papers and says i'm prohibited for 24 hours
walks away and i call him a coward
so now i gotta walk home
pissed off n too much shit goin thru my dome
walked by some thugs and they started talkin
didn't want no more shit so i kept on walkin
what a gay night
these kids keep talkin and they gonna have a fight
but i did waht's right and did nothin outta strife
2 hours later and i finally got to bed
took me twenty minutes and i rest my head


//

kinda sux but whatever

['Illicit']

Kane, yo that shit was real man, simplistic but dope, nice flow, comfortably readable. nice story.  

funk, it didnt suck, the story seems unrealistic, but it was a nice piece. good transformation of a story into a rhyme.

[Reef]

Nice shit from both of ya.. Thought Kane's was a little better thou!

[funkstylz]

unrealistic? but that's actually what happened lol

[bez]

tight shit.  What a night hey. lol

[funkstylz]

ye it was quite the night,  i was real pissed off

[@Ss@sSiN]

i liked this shit, stayed on topic

[C-Bizz]

damn man

that shitz carazy