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"Relative Relations" - Ind3cisiv3 - (Peep Ya'll)
« on: December 20, 2002, 11:05:38 AM »
*Ind3cisiv3 walks up to take the spotlight on the empty stage, with only a mic as his only weapon... Looks at the croud, which only be the family who he is at war with*

*Takes a look to the lights, one swift deep breathe and then......*

Muderous lyrics only make me feel rage//
Outta the darkness of my concealed emotions do i feel caged//
The only true friend i gots to understand is my fuckin' conscience//
Even then, he only tells me to let go, enjoy life, stop fillin' ya head with nonsense//
This aint my destiny? enclosed within 4 walls, and a bed to put rest-in-me//
Ima speak outloud, know mutha'fucka gone refuse to hear me now//
This is where i make a stand, an individual statement, to show im not afraid//
To put fear into those you approach, and test, bout to get whipped up n slayed//
Every night, alone, the darkness which upon i gazed, i sit, closed eyes, n prayed//
This a family dispute where emotions are spread throughout, torn apart from parents//
Only memories which make me smile now, only a once loved child, now a careless essence//

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« Last Edit: December 20, 2002, 11:10:22 AM by Ind3cisiv3 »
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Re:"Relative Relations" - Ind3cisiv3 - (Peep Ya'll)
« Reply #1 on: December 20, 2002, 11:26:59 AM »
I felt it dogg, flowed well and the last 2 lines where dope.
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Re:"Relative Relations" - Ind3cisiv3 - (Peep Ya'll)
« Reply #2 on: December 20, 2002, 11:28:38 AM »
damn...its been a while since i enjoyed a verse in this forum

props and good work!
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Re:"Relative Relations" - Ind3cisiv3 - (Peep Ya'll)
« Reply #3 on: December 20, 2002, 05:33:49 PM »
word, no doubt. nice piece homie
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Re:"Relative Relations" - Ind3cisiv3 - (Peep Ya'll)
« Reply #4 on: December 20, 2002, 09:09:08 PM »
deep.....flowed very well...nice piece bro, keep it comin
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Re:"Relative Relations" - Ind3cisiv3 - (Peep Ya'll)
« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2002, 01:42:08 PM »
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Re:"Relative Relations" - Ind3cisiv3 - (Peep Ya'll)
« Reply #6 on: December 22, 2002, 01:43:59 PM »
Quote from: Bizzez on December 20, 2002, 11:26:59 AM
I felt it dogg, flowed well and the last 2 lines where dope.

YUP...

Nice piece...
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