||| ~~ I-BO ~vS~ M-Dogg ~~ ||| VOOOOOTE !!!!

[Maestro Minded]

max 12 bars
crew votes allowed
no bitch votes
48 hours to reply (countning from the hour this thread is posted)

[M Dogg™]

You claim it I play it, chess master a name more than a saying/
See, I am the king; you're just the pawn with no arms drawn/
I-Bo equals Do-Do, dumb and extinct with style that's obsolete/
Maestro? I got the touch of Midas well you pick up Ind3siv3/
You take ToNe's command well the Elite was the promise land/
ToNe set you up and you were to cocky to admit you fucked/
Now you spit cum I spit fire, that's why you're multiple retired/
Lyrical terrorist rhyming ill like the Lox, so watch for Small Pox/
In a lab, my lyrics were created to destroy the immunity you had/
'Cause though you try to diss but you ain't mastered the science/
Those rhyme injects made you rhymes bigger but you dick smaller/
I'm done now, so go back to ToNe, your wannabe male caller/*

*male callers, for those that don't know, is just an old school term for a man trying to get at a women.

[Maestro Minded]

~~{Takin This Old-School}~~
u must have amnesia, how else could you even "challenge-me"?//
if i was fighting the whole Elite, yall still woudnt "manage-me"//
like a sorcerer, i trick your "visionz-with-magic"&  damage your mentality//
I-BO bein like them suicide~bombers when it comez to civilian brutality//
punchin M-Dogg 8 timez before he notice the effect of the "first-hit"//
knockin him out, likea boxer in the ring, witout even tuching my "curse-kit"// *

but it aint over yet fool.....

..reloading 20%.......reloading 80% .... done

~{Takin This With Metaphors}~
its like fightin a kid, this battle is "stric-tly-un-balanced" | how much needed in handicap for you to be able to "give-me-a-challenge"//
like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious | claimin to be dope when u aint? fool, dont "fire-contra-dictionz"//
spectacular movez "when-i-swing" like Tyson with an "upper-cut" | emprisonin & leavin you lonely like another "sucker-stuck"//
call me "abstract", cuz no way for you to "tuch" my level | your biggets achievment would be: loosin this game without KO//
i could be half the man i am and still make 10 of you | M-Dogg is your nick? kid, you should choose a "cuter-name",
i could throw a wack verse and still steal the show | I-BO eazly "finishin~you~off" like the first level of a "computer~game"//



* i havent cussed a single time in the rhyme

[.:TimeLock:.]

lol@ M-Dogg calling I-Bo playground names like "Do-Do" lmao
i found soe other shit that seems kindergardenish but i'll save u soe embarestment
here is some personal shit that was kinda hard hiting from m-dogg:

You take ToNe's command well the Elite was the promise land/
ToNe set you up and you were to cocky to admit you fucked/
Now you spit cum I spit fire, that's why you're multiple retired/

nice try M...if u had brung some more of that u would have had a better chance

I-BO's vesre was on point he to down M line by line and even took a brake to reload lol

on a whole i bout just came what more lyrically dope with his disses and verse over all...

vote=I-BO

[Maestro Minded]

btw.. normal rules..


first to 5 votes.. (3-0, KO)

[.:R-E-L:.]

MDOGG...great flow, hard hits n punches, impressive metaphors


I-BO...AMAZING metaphors n similies, good intro, good multis


Close..but gotta give it to I-BO

[Primo]

Alright..Here we go...First off i'm not the type to vote for someone because of slashes and complicated words..
If you have shit it has to make sense..And no offence very few of I-bos verse made sense.

I-bo's verse..
u must have amnesia, how else could you even "challenge-me"?//
if i was fighting the whole Elite, yall still woudnt "manage-me"//
 Since when do challenge and manage rhyme?

knockin him out, likea boxer in the ring, witout even tuching my "curse-kit"//
  And this means??
Im not dissing cuz i liked some of the multis..
its like fightin a kid, this battle is "stric-tly-un-balanced" | how much needed in handicap for you to be able to "give-me-a-challenge"//
I liked this line..Flowed good, nice multi..

like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious | claimin to be dope when u aint? fool, dont "fire-contra-dictionz"//

Another example of Not rhyming.. This line aint bad if u put like "like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious visions" it would of made sense and rhymed well with the other multis and second bar.

call me "abstract", cuz no way for you to "tuch" my level | your biggets achievment would be: loosin this game without KO//
BTW T-O-U-C-H....and another example of non-sense..

Now critiquing M-doggs verse..

I felt his shit was a bit simplistic but it flow very well..
And honestly half this rhyme did not rhyme..

You take ToNe's command well the Elite was the promise land/
ToNe set you up and you were to cocky to admit you fucked/
Now you spit cum I spit fire, that's why you're multiple retired/

You got the rhyme going in One bar..The thing is you need to work on the rhyme pattern...You need like 3 Bars to rhyme..It often throws people off.

Those rhyme injects made you rhymes bigger but you dick smaller/
I'm done now, so go back to ToNe, your wannabe male caller/*
 See you did it here..U changed up the rhyme pattern and instead of rhyming a bar u rhymed two bars...

But since PERSONALS are what makes an entire battle..And is the Essense of battling M dogg Gets my vote...Good Match..Damn i feel like Judge Judy or someshit

[Maestro Minded]

Alright..Here we go...First off i'm not the type to vote for someone because of slashes and complicated words..
If you have shit it has to make sense..And no offence very few of I-bos verse made sense.

I-bo's verse..
u must have amnesia, how else could you even "challenge-me"?//
if i was fighting the whole Elite, yall still woudnt "manage-me"//
 Since when do challenge and manage rhyme?

knockin him out, likea boxer in the ring, witout even tuching my "curse-kit"//
  And this means??
Im not dissing cuz i liked some of the multis..
its like fightin a kid, this battle is "stric-tly-un-balanced" | how much needed in handicap for you to be able to "give-me-a-challenge"//
I liked this line..Flowed good, nice multi..

like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious | claimin to be dope when u aint? fool, dont "fire-contra-dictionz"//

Another example of Not rhyming.. This line aint bad if u put like "like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious visions" it would of made sense and rhymed well with the other multis and second bar.

call me "abstract", cuz no way for you to "tuch" my level | your biggets achievment would be: loosin this game without KO//
BTW T-O-U-C-H....and another example of non-sense..

i accept your vote and all.. i just need to say couple things...


1. all word does NOT need to rhyme... if it sound similar, its actually enough

if i check your battle against blade for example you rhymed "Action movie" with "Singh"~it~to~me" and   "Sunoco~Anti~Freeze~Herb" with "Written~Police~Words"... not much diffrent from the rhymes i wrote when it comes to rhyming

2. an abstract thing is something you cant touch... and yes.. sometimes i spell it "tuch" .. sometimes i spell "rhymez, barz, illa', thangz.. etc etc...." ... its not all about correct grammatics




like i said... M-Dogg got his point.. but i just wanted to show you that your response aint legit




2-1...

keep voting

[M Dogg™]

lol@ M-Dogg calling I-Bo playground names like "Do-Do" lmao

LOL... actually, I messed up say Doe-Doe, which of course I'm talking about the actual bird, that went extinct because of it's stupitity more than anything. My bad.

[Pillow]

This was a very good battle, i was very pleased. both came hard and nice but in tha end IBO took this one. IMO his overall verse was better. had harder punches and it flowed way nicer then M doggs, very nice battle, tha both u.
vote=IBO

[Kill]

Nice battle y'all, not easy to vote on. I think I-Bo could've won it but sum of the shit Craig said was on point, plus I really couldn't flow it whereas M Dogg's flowed pretty well. Only I didn't like it when all rhymes were included in one bar. The reason I give it to M Dogg for are the personals though cause they seemed to hit I-Bo pretty nicely

VOTE = M DOGG

[Primo]

I bo i understand what ya sayin its also hard because What rhymes to you might not neccesseraly rhyme to me..You have an different accent than me which throws some words off.

[M Dogg™]

2-2... uppin'

[Maestro Minded]

2-2... uppin'

3-2

[bLaDe]

Very close battle, but I have to give this to mdogg, he won by jus a lil ... I found mdogg had more personals, flowed well and made a lotta sense.  Ibo had a nice verse too, but sumtimes i found his flow was really off, and shit like dat.

vote - mdogg

  -{bLaDe}