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"Letter of Sorrow" - Ind3cisiv3 - Feedback Plz!
« on: January 04, 2003, 02:57:14 PM »
I wanna take some time out, to just say this........

Im sorry for having you all listen to my dealings of pain//
Im sorry for depressing the community with my feelings being slain//
Im sorry if you think im pure mr negative, and my lifes meaning is vein//
It's all just fallen into place like a jigsaw, now i wont hit the ceiling again//
Im just sorry, it all happened this way, just wanna say thanx for being a good friend..//

This dedicated to all my friends that have been there, while my life fell apart! Thanx!
 
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Re:"Letter of Sorrow" - Ind3cisiv3 - Feedback Plz!
« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2003, 02:58:49 PM »
Nice, simplistic, but the message got across!
 

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Re:"Letter of Sorrow" - Ind3cisiv3 - Feedback Plz!
« Reply #2 on: January 04, 2003, 03:10:12 PM »
Thnx! After all its dedicated to you and all my other mates! :)



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Re:"Letter of Sorrow" - Ind3cisiv3 - Feedback Plz!
« Reply #3 on: January 05, 2003, 11:16:00 AM »
Nice, simplistic, but the message got across!
 

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Re:"Letter of Sorrow" - Ind3cisiv3 - Feedback Plz!
« Reply #4 on: January 05, 2003, 12:27:07 PM »
kinda small thought u couldve added more to this pieace.. but over all it was hot.. keep spittin cuz..one hunnd

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