HEAVYWEIGHT TITLE ---WHITE CRAIG vs. TONE [NEED VOTES!!!]

[Primo]

You lets get this over with so i can beat you..
Im not gonna drop till weds or so..This is official if i dont drop i will forfeit my title.

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

You lets get this over with so i can beat you..
Im not gonna drop till weds or so..This is official if i dont drop i will forfeit my title.

lol!

getcha prewrites tahgetha homie...


oh yah, u got sum rulez fah me?

if not...

15-20 bars
5 votes winz
No KO's
Crew votez...optional,  dont give a shit eitha way


lemme know wussup, but...im checkin in on thiz shit!!!!

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

...shortest title reign eva, Pr1mo's thru!!

Finally Pr1mo'z back, but tha rust-iz-evident, am I battlin Sha77erS7ar again? Ill dust-fah-evidence/
What i bust-iz-heaven-sent, while yur flowz-get-"demonized", yur just-irrelevent tah buyers like hoez-wit-gleamin-eyez/ (1)
Wit wordz like "meteor-showers", tha Earth getz 'deeper-when-i-spit', I strait defeated-yah-power n put thiz sleeper-on-you-bitch!/
You causin less vibrationz then tha speakers-in-yur-pic, shit, mah flowz are 'Nine'ty degreez cuz im 'steeper-wit-tha-pitch'/ (2)
I could be described az seismic, but yur talent-has-"flatlined", Pr1mo'z hearts bigger then his brain, that means yur "galant-wit-wack-rhymez"/
On Election ballots-n-tax-crimez, "Dont 'vote' for Pr1mo, hez tryna 'cheat-you'", but if yah win by bogus voters, then homie ill jus impeach-you/
'Saran', yur newest name, cuz thiz rapper's (wrapper's) fukin "see-thru"/ (3)
Said u jack off 3 times a week, but u only come (cum) hard like twice-a-year, now tha champ iz gettin 'scared', and tha Title's tha price-of-fear/ (4)
Lips only meant to entice-tha-queers, guess thas why u were 'bleedin-from-tha-mouth', if yur throat was yur fukin home, then ill plant mah seeds-up-in-yah-house/ (5)
Now u can finally "spit-my-flava", Pr1mo known fah bitch-behaviors, man my influence is so apparent ill make thiz Patriot switch-to-Raiders!/ (6)
Itz Craig tha fukin Rhyme Slayer, cuz yah multis "kill-yah-flow", yah u were tha host at tha beggining but I came tah steal-tha-show/
Crew Name, M.D.? That stands for Muscular-Dystrophy, verbal shotz that "rot" yur verse so deep im 'bustin-yah-history'/ (7)
Dont worry, itz just-antihistamines, "cure yah sick-ness", Im tha Doctor-of-Medicine (M.D.), i cant 'stop eatin u up on this' if i was poppin-amphetemines/ (
Lyrikal Chemist on tha board and Pr1mo'z 'copyin-Elementz', u couldnt 'buy yurself sum talent' if u shopped-at-mah-residence/
Itz ToNe stoppin-yah-relevance, u no longer 'matter'-to-tha-board, if yur height reflects yah mic skillz, u needa ladder-to-record/
Member Name, "White-Craig", frum trailor parkz and huntin-groundz(lol), but i come frum Killa Kali and on thiz hick im dumpin-roundz/ (9)
Yur krewz sexin at Barnum n Bailey, cuz yur "all jus 'fuckin'-klowns"/ (10)
'Melinan Deficiant' iz yah verse, and im tha 'Sun', so cover-up, mah rhymez run thru yah 'family tree' so far ill make yah mother-nut!/
One more title won, Pr1mo raped like gutter-slutz, yur verse described as 'hooker quotes'......"itz just anotha-FUCKED!"/



(sorry bout all these yall, but this is for Heavyweight, so jus wanna make sure, everybody undastand thiz shit...especially tha personalz.)

Explainations:

(1) Nobody pays attention to a ho's eyes
(2) Peep his avator
(3) SaranWrap is a plastic, see-thru sheet used to wrap up food
(4) Pr1mo posted in Train of Though, that he jacks off like 3 times a week
(5) He used to have an avator with a pic of himself, and blood drippin frum his mouth
(6) He's a Patriots fan *shakin mah head* lol
(7) Muscular Dystrophy is a condition that basically rots yur muscles.
( Amphetimines, sumtimes used to decrease appetite.
(9) I think Pr1mo live inna trailor park, not sure tho lol
(10) Barnum n Bailey is a circus.


no beef Pr1mo...

[Primo]

Flips on the radio……Bzzzzz….'When the moon is up and the stars are bright! and what ever comes. Its gonna be alright. tonight u will be mineeee. up in cloud number nineee'..
That was Bryan Adams with Cloud Number Nine……*Turns radio off*




Fuck fancy shit ,bitch slap you Rugged....



Ya low skin~tone is doubting~melanin,  Phillipino kid grew up in predominatly white housing~developments\\*1
Shit I Got Asian~relatives, I jack off but your faggot ass cant Ever ‘cum hard’ cuz ya remain ~celebet\\
Bullets desperce~nine and the first~five leave u with a Burst~thigh\\
Its like Snortin’ 120 milligrams of Oxy-Contin “You Dead After The First~Line”\\
Make~A~decision, face my deadly~intuitions, havin’ fake~double~visions and straight~preminitions\\
Can’t Relate~to~Esquisit, Your punches hurt so “fuckin little” Its like you “Raping~a~Midget”\\
Re~Lace~stitches ,Blast the torso, express agonizin’ Face~twitches\\
I’m like “Female K-9 Parkinsons Disease” the way I "Shake~Bitches"\\
Flamed~up in napalm~clumps, “Blood” pouring out orfices in MonoTONEous~Thumps\\*2
Fry the organs of them clamin~thugz,demonstrate the commercial this is ya Brain~on Drugz\\
Stick to Rice~N~Salads, ‘1904’ Fat Grams a day, u expect a Nice~Equal~Balance\\*3
U get Ridin~dick~Ballots, If I wanted to see “Slanted Eyes” I’d do my “Scripts~in~Italics”\\4*
You’re just like “Reduced calorie coffee creamer” your ethnicity is “Half and Half”\\5*
Get ya cortex~stabbed, Vexed~fag , easily get perplexed~fast, “Ahead of your time” like “Jet~Lag”\\
Kills suddenly in, the leadership re~routes, “Where 'D.A Go'~ now?” (Daygo)\\6*
Rockin a gay~trolls~shroud, got so many “Nicks” u makin the 'pay~tolls'~proud\\7*
Kids got dick riders non~stop, My lyrics “Sprint” make your ‘dime~drop’\\
U like a “X-rated Rosie O’Donnell flick”  “Nobody wanna see you on~top”\\
Glimpse from ya corneas , clapped~quick,Practice~drastic~gymnastics~on~Faggots~matress\\
Creating a Fast~win, Fat~Bitch, Don’t take a seat, I’d hit up “Bayer” if I wanted an “ASS~PRINT”(asphrin)\\8*
Im 'Coke' and you’re 'Pepsi',”Your just a watered down version~of~me”\\
Terrorise u like Persian~TV, Net bangers aint immerging~Emcees\\*9
Disbursing nuclei, tongue force mega-tons of an atom~bomb, What kinda faggot names his battle~squad after a Bryan Adams~song\\10*
Yo “im endin this TONE” like an “All-Night tanning~salon”\\

T.K.O   Paaaaaace

explanations
1. Hes White-Phillipino
2. Hes a fake blood and he said he stays Flamed up.
3. Blade told me tone was overweight.
4. Slanted Eyes..this is a diss on asians..
5. Same as number 1
6. kill joined cloud 9 and is better than tone
7. Hes had mad Nicknames
8. Same as number 3
9. same as number 2
10. LMAO There is a bryan adams song named Cloud Number Nine..


No beef Tone

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

2. Hes a fake blood and he said he stays Flamed up.

like u said, no beef....but i aint never claimed i was a blood in mah life lol.

[Primo]

oh well   votes.

[__kaLipZo__]

both came hard, but i think craig took this, ill explain my vote indepth more on monday when im at school due to my comp seizes when i type a lot at home,,, "no clue why", but till then, vote - craig

['Illicit']

this is hard. but if yall want me to vote here i go lol

ToNe:

flow/multis: the flow was like usual, tight, and those multis, straight up ToNe style.
I'd rate em 4.6

punches/personals:

Now u can finally "spit-my-flava", Pr1mo known fah bitch-behaviors, man my influence is so apparent ill make thiz Patriot switch-to-Raiders!/ (6)
Itz Craig tha fukin Rhyme Slayer, cuz yah multis "kill-yah-flow", yah u were tha host at tha beggining but I came tah steal-tha-show/
Crew Name, M.D.? That stands for Muscular-Dystrophy, verbal shotz that "rot" yur verse so deep im 'bustin-yah-history'/ (7)

these were my favs, str8 killa lines
overall a 4.6 verse imo


Rating: 9.2

Craig:

flow/multis: the multis were ill, and this time the flow was tight too, not like sometimes were certain sentences grow a lil long.

I'd say 4.6


punches/personals:

Can’t Relate~to~Esquisit, Your punches hurt so “fuckin little” Its like you “Raping~a~Midget”\\

Get ya cortex~stabbed, Vexed~fag , easily get perplexed~fast, “Ahead of your time” like “Jet~Lag”\\
Kills suddenly in, the leadership re~routes, “Where 'D.A Go'~ now?” (Daygo)\\6*


Glimpse from ya corneas , clapped~quick,Practice~drastic~gymnastics~on~Faggots~matress\\
Creating a Fast~win, Fat~Bitch, Don’t take a seat, I’d hit up “Bayer” if I wanted an “ASS~PRINT”(asphrin)\\8*
Im 'Coke' and you’re 'Pepsi',”Your just a watered down version~of~me”\\
Terrorise u like Persian~TV, Net bangers aint immerging~Emcees\\*9
Disbursing nuclei, tongue force mega-tons of an atom~bomb, What kinda faggot names his battle~squad after a Bryan Adams~song\\10*
Yo “im endin this TONE” like an “All-Night tanning~salon”\\

ill, str8 up.  
overall 4.9

(but i dont think kill is better than tone tho, no offense towards kill tho)

Rating: 9.5


Vote: Craig

[bLaDe]

Damn this is a hard one, illicit is on point though.  Tone had good multies, good flow, and sum hella dope lines no doubt.  Primos verse I loved, hella interesting, great personals, wordplay and multies.  He really hit tone hard personaly, and brought sum humor too.  Some of his lines were just straight up ill, and every line was very creative  ...

Great battle ya'll ..

vote - White~Craig

  -{bLaDe}

[Kill]

No KO's

...shit ain't over, still no time to vote now, unfortunately I ain't the only person to use this comp...

I AIN'T BETTER THAN TONE ? WHAT ?? HELL YEAH I AM !! naw lol, I was surprised bout Primo sayin that too, I don't think I am either, but I'm gettin better...he in this for much longer than me so you never know...but right now he better IMO...we kinda similiar actually (as for style)

[Kill]

Ok, this is mad difficult, but I said I was gonna vote so I will try to

Tone:
Shit was hot. You came off combinin great multis with hard-hittin punches and that's what your whole verse was like; great rhymes and not too difficult to flow, even though the length of the bars varied remarkably. You got pretty personal and you had some really funny lines. The vocab was (comparatively) "normal", but you had some big words too and didn't get repetitive, so I can't complain about that either

SCORE = 4.8/5

Pr1mo:[/u]
With that verse Tone would've easily killed most MC's on WCC, I already thought that when I read it before you dropped. But you definitely proved yourself a worthy opponent; some of your punches were even a bit harder than Tone's, also you had more of them lines one could really laugh about. Your vocab was a bit bigger too. Structurally his shit was better though. Some of your (really ill) multis had a different number of syllables and sometimes I expected the next multie to rhyme with another multie than it actually rhymed with...in other words it was harder to flow (to me). I could give this to Tone but you punched him harder than he punched you, so...

SCORE = 4.8/5

VOTE = DRAW (FOR NOW)

If y'all want me to I can come back later and decide (which will be hard as fuck cause I tried, believe me), but for now I'll leave it at that; you both packed heat, ill azz battle, whoever is going to take this deserves the title...peace

[bLaDe]

funny, even a battle like this one takes ages to be voted on

Fa real, people voting more on newbie/lightweight battles than this.  Well then again I'm sure Craig and Tone only want heavyweights/vets to vote ..

  -{bLaDe}

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

230 views though...more than any other battle on page 1 of this board. Mothafuckas just too lazy to vote...if you want me to re-read and decide holla

u might as well man. U usually got good reviews on the shit anywayz....

[Kill]

Aight, sorry for takin so long, board was down and shit. After readin it again twice I decided to give it to Tone, cause after all, even though Primo punched the shit outta him, his verse was kinda...immaculate. The rhyme structure was very good and unlike Primo's I could flow it nicely. That's basically what made the difference. Since Tone also had great punches he made up for Primo hittin way harder. But damn, this shit was hella close. Both of y'all deserve the title, for real

VOTE = DAYGOSTYLZ

[Primo]

its a shame.People need to vote