Author Topic: -CLaSsMoRe: I Dominate (see how you like it compared to Bishop's and Dre's)  (Read 291 times)

thisisclassmore

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See how you like it compared to Bishop's and Dre's.




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Triple OG Rapsodie

It's much better than that crap.

You've definitely got talent. One criticism though is that some lines it feels like you're rhyming words just to create multi-syllable rhymes when they don't always go together. I dig this.
« Last Edit: August 23, 2011, 01:02:07 AM by Spice 2 sees the bitch in you »
 

thisisclassmore

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Thanks for your feedback man
 

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Yeah pretty good dude.

Positive feedback: The sound quality on the vocals is great. Almost no sibilance, popping or clicks, everything is clear, no background noise. You did a really good job mixing those vocals.

Critical feedback: It feels like you almost have too much structure in the way you enunciate everything. Like trying too hard to ride the beat so that your words sound somewhat stilted and the flow is impeded.

Overall though good job, when do we hear more?

Oh and let me know if you need beats and/or mixing.
 

thisisclassmore

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Thanks for your feedback as well, I do really appreciate it. I am definitely going to work on those little tweaks that will totally smooth my music out. This is only my second song release, so I will post my first one shortly. I'm currently re-recording it to make it sound studio quality.