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soul_assassin

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'notha freestyle
« on: January 21, 2003, 04:18:03 AM »
The court gave this latina a sepina to testify against me
Evidently i was not guilty
I remain silent to any acquisations you say about me
I have the right to remain violent and to fuck you up mentally
You have so much paranoia, you look over your shoulder
The apeal didnt work, coz nigga I thought I told ya
Two words, Not Guilty. I'm rich but not filthy
I stay so fresh and so clean, with my SPG lean
Everyboy understands and knows what i mean
As I walk down the street, every girl stares
I'm so much apart of rap that to a drum, I'm tha snare
With all the shit I've been through you would think I'd drop out
Driving through my hood all the homies just shout (SPG!)
Yeah I'm Straight Pimp Gangster, but its all from respect
I always take care of my hoes and homies and never ever neglect.
So show some respect! (Bow Down)

Some feed back

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and anotha one

I was the bomb once but i dropped like a shell
I fell from the sky and blew the fuck outta hell
They said i lost my taste in rap and my music was crap
Everytime i just said fuck off go suck on my dick sap
Who likes to be dissed by a nobody who thinks he knows best
Saying he knows everything about rap and I needed a rest
But fuck that, I'm still writing these rhymes, composing beats at the same time
I guess I'm addicted to this lime light, but imma put up a good fight, dont matter if your black or white, I'll smack ya in the mouth til you say my shits tight
I still have my friends and they support me in anything I do
They knew i would have an affect in music, yes me and my crew
Not yous, punk ass pop rock cock suckas, who put together a simple beat and sing together with your brother or sister, now that your gone nobody missed ya
Coz im saying to you what they said to me
Your crap, you suck and we have to set you free from the music game
You see i walk into a club and people still holla my name
But I guess my 15 minutes of fame are OVER!
But I'm not gonna drink imma stay SOBER!


i was thinking of calling that last one "Hate you Haters" and im just waiting for my brother to write a verse.

some feed back
K~10
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Re:'notha freestyle
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2003, 05:52:09 AM »
nice werse, flowed well, lacked the multis
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Re:'notha freestyle
« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2003, 06:34:59 AM »
Not bad, you had some nice lines
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Re:'notha freestyle
« Reply #3 on: January 21, 2003, 11:18:14 AM »
nice verse but it lack something
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