Fuck Augustus Gloop (open challenge)

[TheSheriff]

I'm like straw weight, so you may wanna go easy on me. I'm trying to get back to 100%. By the way, whoever answers the challenge is Augustus Gloop.

My name's Charlie, like cocaine, or Vietnamese,
I won a ticket, golden one, cause I asked God "please?"
But when I went to the factory that was my right,
I met this fat german kid whose ass was so tight...
I guess I better demonstrate in rap.

Fuck Augustus Gloop, what a fucking fruit,
Trying to rape me, kick him with my boot..

Nah, that doesn't demonstrate how much I hate Augustus Gloop. I guess I have to go completely hardcore.

I once said "I'm a verbal four-four, you won't challenge me cause I'm so hardcore";
No time to rest on laurels, gotta make sure all you biters borrow
Is some Master P, so don't copy me, or follow,
In my footsteps, my rude skips, my ill slips,
You're all fuckin biters, off the old classics,
Get back to basics, how to construct a rhyme,
Put some fuckin time into how you drop a "dime";
Cute new phrase, your head is up in space,
You're just a waste of air, I'ma taste your blood,
Before we're through, drag your name through the mud,
I'm like a scud; poisonous! You're scabby pus,
A real late bus, useless, you copy us;
Fuck you, Augustus Gloop, newbie boy,
Jumpin through hoops, a fuckin fruit,
Stealin all the loot, but look, I'm runnin out of time,
Before some ese shots me with a five nine,
So, in short, put you into court, verdict's guilty,
Cause I'm filty, and you're a little she, just a little girl,
Head's in a twirl, you're fighting the best,
But you're not even a test, so fuck you, your German fruit, you killed Mr Wu,
Fuck Augustus Gloop!

[__kaLipZo__]

I didnt really feel this verse...but yea...=)

[Koncept]

i'll battle you

[TheSheriff]

me vs an elite? You'll rip me, but sure thang...drop a verse wheever, then peeps can vote on it

Same length as mine
Nada personal, general rhyming and wordplay battle shit
3-0 KO,, first to 5

[Koncept]

what do you mean same length as yours? your not gunna write a new one

[Koncept]

i'll start a thread in the battle section and drop tonight or tommarow

[TheSheriff]

Aight, I'll write a new one.

15-20 bars