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Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« on: February 12, 2003, 04:36:21 AM »
Rules
20 max, as there's a lot of rhymes to read
first to 5, 3-0 K.O.
All verses due by Valentines Day
Judges, you give each member of each crew a ranking between 0 and 5. Add up all the scores you give each crew, and divid by 4, the best average gets your vote. Please judge fairly.
 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #1 on: February 12, 2003, 02:21:49 PM »
{Intro}

D.A like a runaway train how can you stop-it
cus on any topic we drop-legit,yeah we hot-wit-shit

{Main Rhyme}

now imma decimate-the-inactive,dont debate-the-facts-bitch
jus cus yall hate-my-tactics,gettin rolled on like playmates-wit-fat-kids
it the usual-susp3cts,but D.A a fusion-of-tough-sets,wit just-enough-techs
to make blade-run,the decisions been made-dun,you fucked an it hurtin like rough-sex
whose tryin ta bluff-next?im quick ta kill both of brians-persona's
but id rather watch PG choke infinite while M.D cryin-fa-loners
my team ridin-wit-sonars so each lyical missile blows-ya-mind
no timelock so you havent frozen-time,so u not dope no mo,you hoes-behind
this a new-era,we delivered this kru-terror,wit flows-an-rhymes
deliver blows-ta-spines,so people will believe M.D "back"
yall semi-wack,illicit,infinite,and P.G bein the weak-fraction
inactive vets actin like they seek-action,the heat-catch-um[i/]


{Outro}

so now u know the flow-too-sick fuck the vets who blow-ya-dick
ask anyone with less than 200 posts below-their-sig,if they know-ya-kid
as you can see i didnt drop a worthy rhyme-fa-vinal
thats cus im savin them fa cloud nine-in-da-final!!!!!!!

 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #2 on: February 14, 2003, 11:22:18 AM »
shit this is due today...I will try to spit by 12 am...I am real busy..
 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #3 on: February 14, 2003, 06:55:21 PM »
INTRO
I'll transform "Melanin Deficient" into pigmented skin cells, the opposite process of "Michael Jackson"/
DA's rhymes come down like a "guillotine" on the head of the "16th Louis", collarbones start crackin//[1]
Dismember your limbs from your bodies like "Alien Discs" in John Carpenters "Ghosts of Mars", blood vessels ignite/[2]
Turnin the most "Inactive Crew of WCC" into panic-filled MC's runnin away like "Carol Anne" from the "light"//[3]

KVB
Ladies and Gentleman, please welcome back KVB, who will be "roasted" and "baked" like a pair or "red-eyes"/
Lyrically "castrate your arm", you need the power of the "Force" to beat DA, KVB is "Return of the Jedi"//
Blazin this "rusty" Disaster of Ceremonies like 20,000 tons of napalm, "Smokey" can't put out my "forest-fire"/[4]
Take this piece of advice like it's your first and last, quietly go back home, then proceed and continue to "retire"//[5]

Pr1mo
The one and only "Pr1mo", who holds the WCC record for shortest title reign...you can't even compare to "Kane"/[6]
Grabbed onto the belt with all you possible could, but couldn't "hold on" like kids playin on MonkeyBars in the rain//
Individually, I couldn't beat you, but the DA attacks in groups like a pack of coyotes and hyenas/
Goin against Devious Assailants is "Ludacris", Pr1mo couldn't "Gossip Folks" if he was "Missy Misdemeana"//

Illicit
"CeeRide's" rhymes are "Illicit", contrary to accepted illness in this crew battle, what the hell you thinkin?/
Goin down like the "Titanic" in the Atlantic, succeeding ya boy "Indy" by slowly and painfully sinking//
My adjectives and synonyms ricochet between your anvil and endoplasmic walls of your head/
How am I supposed to an MC seriously when he keeps a photo of "Kurupt by his bed"?//[7]

bLaDe
A proud born-Sikh is Blade, but my verbal onslaught will change him from a Sikh into an ancient Egyptian/[8]
After Xearo and the rest of Devious is through with Blade, noone will be able to give the faintest description//
A "river" of ribonucleic knives and pitchforks enter your cerebellum, acidically turn him into "Niagra"/
Put you "down" on the ground like bricks facing gravity, to get back "up", you'll need prescription "Viagra"//

EXPLANATIONS
1 = Louis XVI(16th) was beheaded by guillotine.
2 = The aliens on "Ghosts of Mars" threw metal discs that cut people up and dismembered them.
3 = Carol Anne was the little girl in the TV in Poltergeist.
4 = Smokey The Bear was the park ranger cartoon who taught about forest-fires.
5 = KVB disappeared a while back for a long time...kinda like retiring.
6 = Kane from the WWE had the shortest heavyweight title reign in history...less than 24 hours.
7 = Illicit has had the same Kurupt avatar for a LONG time.
8 = Sikhs are very monotheistic, and the ancient Egyptians were polytheistic.
 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #4 on: February 14, 2003, 08:57:50 PM »
gimme 10 hours from the time this post shows...dunno what time it will be wherever yall are at. I'll have my shit up.   hope my cohorts dont forget...
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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #5 on: February 14, 2003, 10:13:32 PM »
We should extend this to tomarrow night...

Only 2 verses up...
 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #6 on: February 14, 2003, 10:15:39 PM »
uhm.. no disrespect.. but i remember that Melanin won last crew championship cuz my old crew Elite posted like 1 hour to late...

giving extra time would just not be fair... would it?
 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #7 on: February 14, 2003, 10:19:03 PM »
Hmmm I'm not sure if this is gonna be extended or not  :-\  So i'll post up a verse I juz keyed in a few min, peace

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #8 on: February 14, 2003, 10:38:11 PM »
;)

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« Last Edit: February 15, 2003, 11:53:20 PM by .:[b L a D e]:. »
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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #9 on: February 14, 2003, 10:57:11 PM »
Hella tight verse, Blade...props

PS: Everyone mentions lifephorms!

PSS: "dumpin the penicillin but couldnt stop tha illin".  That sounds real familiar to me.  Canibus?  Eminem?
 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #10 on: February 14, 2003, 10:59:27 PM »
uhm.. no disrespect.. but i remember that Melanin won last crew championship cuz my old crew Elite posted like 1 hour to late...

giving extra time would just not be fair... would it?

I think it's fair...only 3 out of 8 people have dropped so far...and I ain't about to let my verse be a waste for a double DQ.  Besides, this ain't a crew tourny...well...technically it's not.
 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #11 on: February 14, 2003, 11:31:50 PM »
Hella tight verse, Blade...props

PS: Everyone mentions lifephorms!

PSS: "dumpin the penicillin but couldnt stop tha illin".  That sounds real familiar to me.  Canibus?  Eminem?

Thanks, yours was tight too

Yeah, my bro Apoc was in Lifephormz as well so I couldnt forget

I dont know, since I wrote the verse quick I recycled that line from a year old Audio song of mine feat.  NIK and many other rappers.


And I also thing the extra time should be fair since hardly anybody dropped.

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« Last Edit: February 14, 2003, 11:32:40 PM by .:[b L a D e]:. »
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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #12 on: February 15, 2003, 12:16:36 AM »
Hella tight verse, Blade...props

PS: Everyone mentions lifephorms!

PSS: "dumpin the penicillin but couldnt stop tha illin".  That sounds real familiar to me.  Canibus?  Eminem?

Thanks, yours was tight too

Yeah, my bro Apoc was in Lifephormz as well so I couldnt forget

I dont know, since I wrote the verse quick I recycled that line from a year old Audio song of mine feat.  NIK and many other rappers.


And I also thing the extra time should be fair since hardly anybody dropped.

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this had a due date... EVERYBODY knew about it... therefore, yall should get DSqued, just like Elite when we posted to late back in days...

im sorry but i cant treat yall in another way..
 

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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #13 on: February 15, 2003, 04:05:09 AM »
lol wheres the prob?  i mean its not like cloud 9 gotta be scared of facin us, lets be reasonable, I believe in my crews abilities...but its still gonna be hard beating tone AND I-BO AND Timelock AND Kill..... whatever happened back in the day is irrelevant.  but I dont care so whatever,  if we get dqued I'd like to ask DA if we could still finish this, just for ourselves so we at least didnt do this shit for nuthin
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Re:Devious Assailants VS Melanin Defficient (VERSES ONLY)
« Reply #14 on: February 15, 2003, 05:52:20 AM »
I-Bo's right.

At tha same time, Elite didnt get all their verses up against us...and THEY created the deadline. lol *shakin mah head*
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