Melanin Deficient vs. Devious Assilants (DA Won)

[KVB]

Alright, this is it. The previous (VERSES ONLY) thread became infested with BS so I'm creating a new one. Same rules apply... please, don't reply to this thead with with BS posts/questions etc, VERSES ONLY.
Let's get it crackin.


Rules:
Bar limit = 20
first to 5, 3-0 K.O.
All verses due by Sunday (6 Days), however - minor delays will be accepted.
Voting may start before Sunday, given that all verses are posted.

Judges, you give each member of each crew a ranking between 0 and 5. Add up all the scores you give each crew, and divide by 4, the best average gets your vote. Please judge fairly.

[da_notorious_mack]

{Intro}

D.A like a runaway train how can you stop-it
cus on any topic we drop-legit,yeah we hot-wit-shit

{Main Rhyme}

now imma decimate-the-inactive,dont debate-the-facts-bitch
jus cus yall hate-my-tactics,gettin rolled on like playmates-wit-fat-kids
it the usual-susp3cts,but D.A a fusion-of-tough-sets,wit just-enough-techs
to make blade-run,the decisions been made-dun,you fucked an it hurtin like rough-sex
whose tryin ta bluff-next?im quick ta kill both of brians-persona's
but id rather watch PG choke infinite while M.D cryin-fa-loners
my team ridin-wit-sonars so each lyical missile blows-ya-mind
no timelock so you havent frozen-time,so u not dope no mo,you hoes-behind
this a new-era,we delivered this kru-terror,wit flows-an-rhymes
deliver blows-ta-spines,so people will believe M.D "back"
yall semi-wack,illicit,infinite,and P.G bein the weak-fraction
inactive vets actin like they seek-action,the heat-catch-um[i/]


{Outro}

so now u know the flow-too-sick fuck the vets who blow-ya-dick
ask anyone with less than 200 posts below-their-sig,if they know-ya-kid
as you can see i didnt drop a worthy rhyme-fa-vinal
thats cus im savin them fa cloud nine-in-da-final!!!!!!!
 
 
 

[Entreri117]

INTRO
I'll transform "Melanin Deficient" into pigmented skin cells, the opposite process of "Michael Jackson"/
DA's rhymes come down like a "guillotine" on the head of the "16th Louis", collarbones start crackin//[1]
Dismember your limbs from your bodies like "Alien Discs" in John Carpenters "Ghosts of Mars", blood vessels ignite/[2]
Turnin the most "Inactive Crew of WCC" into panic-filled MC's runnin away like "Carol Anne" from the "light"//[3]

KVB
Ladies and Gentleman, please welcome back KVB, who will be "roasted" and "baked" like a pair or "red-eyes"/
Lyrically "castrate your arm", you need the power of the "Force" to beat DA, KVB is "Return of the Jedi"//
Blazin this "rusty" Disaster of Ceremonies like 20,000 tons of napalm, "Smokey" can't put out my "forest-fire"/[4]
Take this piece of advice like it's your first and last, quietly go back home, then proceed and continue to "retire"//[5]

Pr1mo
The one and only "Pr1mo", who holds the WCC record for shortest title reign...you can't even compare to "Kane"/[6]
Grabbed onto the belt with all you possible could, but couldn't "hold on" like kids playin on MonkeyBars in the rain//
Individually, I couldn't beat you, but the DA attacks in groups like a pack of coyotes and hyenas/
Goin against Devious Assailants is "Ludacris", Pr1mo couldn't "Gossip Folks" if he was "Missy Misdemeana"//

Illicit
"CeeRide's" rhymes are "Illicit", contrary to accepted illness in this crew battle, what the hell you thinkin?/
Goin down like the "Titanic" in the Atlantic, succeeding ya boy "Indy" by slowly and painfully sinking//
My adjectives and synonyms ricochet between your anvil and endoplasmic walls of your head/
How am I supposed to an MC seriously when he keeps a photo of "Kurupt by his bed"?//[7]

bLaDe
A proud born-Sikh is Blade, but my verbal onslaught will change him from a Sikh into an ancient Egyptian/[8]
After Xearo and the rest of Devious is through with Blade, noone will be able to give the faintest description//
A "river" of ribonucleic knives and pitchforks enter your cerebellum, acidically turn him into "Niagra"/
Put you "down" on the ground like bricks facing gravity, to get back "up", you'll need prescription "Viagra"//

EXPLANATIONS[/u]
1 = Louis XVI(16th) was beheaded by guillotine.
2 = The aliens on "Ghosts of Mars" threw metal discs that cut people up and dismembered them.
3 = Carol Anne was the little girl in the TV in Poltergeist.
4 = Smokey The Bear was the park ranger cartoon who taught about forest-fires.
5 = KVB disappeared a while back for a long time...kinda like retiring.
6 = Kane from the WWE had the shortest heavyweight title reign in history...less than 24 hours. (I THINK)
7 = Illicit has had the same Kurupt avatar for a LONG time.
8 = Sikhs are very monotheistic, and the ancient Egyptians were polytheistic.

[KVB]

* walks into thread, sees the petty opposition *

Devious Assilants? What a fuckin' joke...



.::KVB - Back from the dead... to rip DA apart!::.


Aiyyo DA...
These rhymes "suit you" perfectly like a dick up your ass crack/
My lines bruise you eternally, make you pay for your wack raps/
See me the street?, you better bounce bitch, make you panic call LAPD/
Cos' I'll come and "Stompdashitoutu" like CNN and M.O.P./
Your rhymes "lack power" like Marilyn Manson attempting weightlifting/
Dicks you devour come from self-proclaimed "handsome gay siblings!"/
By challenging us, faggot you just signed your death wish/
We'll eat you for breakfast; whether you choose to deny or accept it/
I'll "tear DA pussies up" worse than Tommy Lee did Pamela/
With punches that'll "instill fear" more than Mike Tyson on amateurs/
Behold how I finish this limitless lyrical assassination/
These hoes is soft and innocent like a 5th grade Christmas pageant/
In battle I'm quick to take flight, like, escaped convicts/
I'll shatter slick battle lines, while your rhymes is "shite", like, great nonsense/
You're so petty Patti LaBelle would probably rip you in battle/
Matter of fact... countless dicks have already ripped up your asshole/
That makes this battle worthless, so please, stop debating, stop wasting our time/
Melanin batter wack crews, I understand you've all been patiently waiting in line/
You crossed the line faggot, and now it ain't all gravy/
Naw, shit just ain’t the same G... we're BACK.


R.I.P.

[MasterOfCeremonies]

Master Of Ceremonies representing Devious Assailants

yoooooo

A -devious- -genious-, yall are -weak to us-//
and you couldnt cum hard with your fuckin -urethra clutched-//
-cheeks get touched- with MoC's -heavy right-//
take a 'blade' to the artificial '-wesley snipes-'//
cuz i got a 'sharp' brain and Im known to -mashetti mics-//
the minds a -ready knife-, and MoC is gonna prove  your not -infinite-//
-rippin it- with -ballistic shit- and the -quickest wits-//
its obvious that -illicit's bitch-, and im -sick of it-//
plus, everyone can tell your a team of homos -lickin dicks-//
on some -terrific shit-, -I expand- with -rhymes enhanced-//
you clowns couldnt spit it sick with aids in your -saliva glands-//
fags with cocks in ya -diaphragms-, semen sprays like -krylon cans-//
if you dont want beef motherfuckers, i suggest -tryin spam-//
I -silence lambs- with -violent hands-, theres no -competition-//
your rhymes are as broke as someone who lacks a -pot to piss in-//
so when i -pop it, listen-, a -hot addition- destroying the -opposition-//
MoC passes all tests with flying colors, like if Superman were to -drop a prism-//

MoC

[bLaDe]

~Chapter I - Black Death~

Times~up like Lee in the morning, when my 5~nines~bust, the mines~thrust and I rock~the~fucking~city~/-[1]-
shoot lines~that~rush like adrenalin, dumpin the penicillin but couldnt stop tha illin, cock~back~before~spittin~/
Increasin tha fuckin tempreture like global~warming, leave ya lookin like 'Kanto plain' in 1923 after an earth~quake~/ -[2]-
Droppin bombs like fighter jets, WCC like Chernobyl~transforming, a vocal swarming~fuckin this bitch up like ya dad to ya birth~place~/
The fact~is, I slap ya fags~on~matteresses, smash~the~masks outta ya plastic~actresses~/
my drastic~theatrics, like acrobatic~anal~gastrics, I backflip~ya~wack~shits back into D.As cracked~ship~/
we must be burger~kings cuz mac[k]s gettin burtn~and~flipped; Flow? Yeah when in an urn-he'll-dip, ashes and manuscripts floatin in river Ganges~/ -[3]-
Murder~things with punches dat fling, changin tha current~of~yo~scripts slap ya back with it, with a firm~grip; Talkin bout beef? But I see ya eatin cabbages~/
Aint even gonna waste time on Macks imaganary friend M.O.C, im on a roll like the attendance~sheet~/
Another no~show by these ho~mos with no~flow?; ya'll prayin to false gods gettin burned like doin a sun~dance~in~tha~heat~/
ya'll dont have the balls and I doubt you Grew_some; Witness M.D's transcendence, as I put a magnifying glass over the votes and 'Enhance'~your~defeat~/
Bustin hard? Naw you squeezin-semen, This "LifePhorm", Xearo's name represents the amount of emcees-hes-beaten~/ -[4]-
"Directing this comedy" like Buster Keaton, 'harming-many' while standing tall like wY[a]oMing's Grand Teton~/ -[5]-
You could name~yourself after~chocolates but still wouldnt have words~as~a~weapon~/
Flame~the~best, finalize tha chapter~like iraq bombin~kwuait, these nerds~get~wrecked~when~they steppin/
you rappers should stop glorifying~your~selves ,ya'll aint dope but like the river styx im purifying~ya~deaths~/ -[6]-
spittin with a horrifying~breath, your 'crew's position is tight cuz M.D is mummyfying~ya~set~/
Eliminating~ya~lines like Botox-Injections, our dope Contaminating~rhymes need to be isoilated in detox~sections~/ -[7]-
Dominating~ya~minds like telephatic paradoxial~reflections, "automatickly" makin suckaz dance like jukebox~selections~/
Spittin immaculate and predominating~this~grime like white clothes havin clorox~subjections~/
Illuminating~through~time like the spanish sect; You Recruiting members by puttin up signs in mental aslyms, BE-D.A! But ya'll still cant get deep and note the eqinox~M.Ds~confecting~/ -[8]-

~...R.I.P'ped~

Explanations:-
-[1]- Lee is the real name of TimeLock / Royce the 5'9 had a song called Rock your City
-[2]- On 1 September 1923, one of the worst earthquakes in world history hit the Kanto plain and destroyed Tokyo
-[3]- Ganges is a river in India which is sacred to hindus, the belief is, when people die, their ashes are thrown in it  so they can reach heaven
-[4]- 'LifePhormz' was Xearo's first crew in WCC, it flopped lol.
-[5]- Buster Keaton was an old extreamly famous comedian and director. / Harm-many was Xearo's first nick.  / WyoMing is a state which has a very tall peak called the Grand Teton.  And Yao Ming is a NBA player who is 7"5 feet tall.
-[6]- The Styx is the river of the dead in Greek Mythology
-[7]- Botox Injections are used to eliminate lines/wrinkles on skin
-[8]- 'Beda' was a  historian who noted that the equinox  had slipped three days earlier than the traditional March 21. / The get deep line is inspired by the other meaning of Beda, which is a pickax

If ya'll dont get a line, Jus holla.

  -{bLaDe}

['Illicit']

for this battle skills are required, I jus wish yall fuckin grew-sum//
then this conflict wouldnt be nonsense like homosexual two-somes//
leave ya crew-numb, spittin heat double the weight like I had two-tongues//
su-ccumb or we kidnap ya weakest member but I wouldnt know which to choose-from//
we arrived and notice ya jaws-flap, cats be lovin our raw-raps//
dissin DA aint even funny cuz I jus dont know how to moc(k)-mack//
so yall claim you de-vi-ous, but we aint buyin-ya-lies//
cuz we simply leave-you-chumps standin quiet-like-spies//
step closer and watch my chrome-blast, givin u bitches toe-tags//
Melanin bringin you flows-that,got ya wishin ya woulda grown-phat//
I'm keepin gangsta muthafuckas like I was born-in-tha-west//
fuck wit us and feel tha pain of a blowtorch-in-ya-chest//
I tore-up-ya-set with or without my crew I'm still more-of-a-threat//
whats xearo gonna do besides be the whore-of-ya-set//
got so many battery charges seems like I energize-tha-beef//
diss ma crew you might as well get neutralized-in-ya-sleep//
we symbolize-tha-deep while u suckas should wait til you fertilized-what-ya-speak//

[Primo]

Sha77ers7ar is pissed he says he wants all his recyclables returned\\
Half off on all Sha77ers scriptz, Macks got a coupon and a brouchure\\
Your the kinda cat that trys to look thug by rockin fake velour\\
Midget you used to be 3'10 now u 3'11 you musta Grew some\\
Bust a shot in ya larnyx and out the top of ya head it gave ya a crew cut\\
Bust a freestyle to these new sluts and got there crew stuck\\

I didnt want to no show so freestyled something quick as hell...

[da_notorious_mack]

yo fuck it...im spittin again...if grew spits before dealine forget this verse.......keystyle....


yo KVB first verse was quick-an-cold,had you in "reasonable-doubt"
put this bitch in a wrist-hold,now he screamin-he-out
when we squeezin-he-shout,no mo lines fa you,you jus been played-bitch
and i aint even sprayed-shit,yall going down like ya average when blade-spit
the most bitch portrayed-clique,and cee-ride,get a ride in da trunk ta the sea-side
yall dont gettit do you?only the weak-hide when real gangsta's from the street-ride
yall were only nice when ya speech-lied,yall stayed gassed up like oil-rigs
ask primo i spoil-gigs,immaforma KING you jus a royal-bitch

[Kill]

DEVIOUS ASSAILANTS:

Mack #1: Nice multies and punches, very good flow. Kinda immaculate, nothing innovative and no high vocab but straight up hittin...4.2

Xearo: Great vocab and cleverly thought out punches as always, but as always the rhymes were simple. The flow was aight...4

MOC: I'd already seen shit by you on another board so I wasn't surprised...the verse had a great ass flow and ya shit hit hard and had dope multies...4.3

Mack #2: Nice but definitely too short; you sticked to the same style and punched nicely (again), but there was nuthin outstandin which such a short verse would've needed...3.7


MELANIN DEFICIENT:

KVB: Nice spit, but nothing exciting...no actual multies or personal or in another way creative punches (that "rhymes suit you like a dick up your ass" way of punchin is kinda played)...it was still nice though; the flow was dope...3.8

BlaDe: I read this twice, 1st I couldn't flow it at all, the 2nd time I kinda caught the flow and it turned out to be a dope and hard-hittin verse; the structure wasn't that great but the punches and sum multies made up for it...4.3

Illicit: Typical shit by you, since you used multies it was dope as hell as for rhymes and flow...you didn't come as personal as you could have and there were no REALLY hard punches...4.2

Pr1mo: Wtf lol...if it was straight up keyed it was actually good, but usin such a short and simple verse in a crew battle (no multies, funny punches and all the shit you're actually dope as fuck at) won't help your kru. I know the others prolly took 10x as long for their verses, still that is FAR AS FUCK from your best...which could've killed everything else in here...3.6



Overall I'm pretty surprised. Thinkin of how I left DA cause I considered them dead (and nearly joinin MD) kinda leaves me surprised lookin at this; I really expected MD to win even though I did consider the new DA an underrated crew...

AVERAGES

Devious Assailants = 4.05
Melanin Deficient =  3.975

VOTE = DEVIOUS ASSAILANTS



   

[Maestro Minded]

Mack - the rhyme flowed perfectly, tight disses and dope personals and multies... some of them werent hard enough.... overall - 4.2

Xearo - you really lacked in flow and had no multies.. BUT your rhyme was really "intelligent".. referring to history and knowledge... it upped my points alot.. + alotta personals came correct... - 4.4

MoC - really sick flow and nice punches.. no personals.. couples of multies too.... a couple bars wouldnt hurt being removed,,, - 4.3

Mack - well ..no disrespect, but it lacked of everything.... dope for a freestyle... but this is a crew battle... - 3.3

SCORE: 16.2



KVB - the rhyme was simply basic.. had a couple dope ass punches.. 1 or 2 played out lines... many of the bars didnt rhyme at all... - 3.8

Blade - ima make this one short.... dope,,, - 4.8

Illicit - a really agressive rhyme with a couple dope punches and multies... nice flow on that..lack of personals. - 4.1

Primo - well ..no disrespect, but it lacked of everything.... dope for a freestyle... but this is a crew battle... - 3.4



SCORE: 16.1



WINNER: DA

[M Dogg™]

Judging

DA:
Mack: Very nice flow, was short, but that's all good. Punches weren't really person, like you like, but I can live. A above average verse... 4.1

Xearo: Lovely verse. Didn't mention though that bLaDe is the longest reigning champion... LOL. But the verse was well thought up, and you could see the skillz. I like it... 4.4

MoC: Who the fuck is this boy. Came out and just blew shit up. I like this shit alot, maybe the most refreshing thing to read. This verse flowed well, and hit hard, even without personals... 4.4

Mack #2: Alright, like Pr1mo, was alright, but was kinda simplistic, even for me... LOL. Was alright, but I couldn't finish it with stopping. Did finish it though... 3.4

MD:
KVB: Very nice verse, had great word play, and it seemed like a pure keystyle but with mad skillz. I think that it jumped from time to time, but that's the beauty of str8 keystyle... 4.1

bLaDe: God damn, gave it to them, showed why he was champ for so long. bLaDe's flow was average, but the word play, and personals were great. I think the best verse in the battle... 4.6

Illicit: Alright, just a straight hard hitting battle verse. Had cleaver lines, but was more for hitting. I gots to give it props... 4.25

Pr1mo: alright, the little line you used were pretty nice. I like the dissing Mack, 'cause it's true. With what you got, it's not too bad, not the great former champion, but not bad... 3.6

Alright, I'm posting my numbers, so my calulations are done yet, but this way people know I ain't fucking with numbers.

[M Dogg™]

DA total: 16.3
average: 4.07

MD total: 16.55
average: 4.13

vote... Melanin Deficient... damn close though, especially for such a great crew again an upstart crew. Imagion if Kill was still DA.

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

~Devious Assailants~

Mack-Pretty good shit. good multis, pretty good flow too. Sum decent punches, not alotta metas, but the few in there were good. Overall, a pretty good verse. 4.3

Xearo-Typical Zearo verse really. Pretty good. U had strong vocab, and sum good punches as well as personals. Also some decent word play. Tha only thing REALLY lackin, was the flow. It was way off, very hard to read. But other then that, tha rest was strong. 4.4

MOC-Good shit, very good multis. Good punches and wordplay. Not alot of personals. U also had very good flow. Good verse. 4.3

Mack#2-Not bad. Kinda like Pr1mo, it was short so difficult to judge. A few good personals, good multis. Flow was good. Not a bad keystyle. 4.0

~Melinan Deficiant~

KVB-Good attacking verse. Very good flow, i woulda liked more personals tho. But u flowed real well, and threw in sum good punches, and a couple good metas also. 4.2

Blade-Very good verse. Good wordplay, and punches. Creative verse. Sum multis were off tho. Had sum decent personals, and ok flow. Good shit tho man. 4.4

Illicit-Tight verse. Good multis and flow. Very good punches. Not as many personals as i like, but tha verse was put together real good. Decent word play also. Good verse. 4.3

Pr1mo-Well, damn. For tha 6 short bars u spit it was aiight. Couple good personalz, decent punches. I cant judge it based on the fact it was just a quik keystyle tho, i gotta jus take the verse as a whole. 4.0



DA~17.0 total points
MD~16.9 total points


i aint gotta calculator lol but there were 4 verses by each, DA had SLIGHTLY more points, that makes them winner.

good shit yall.


vote=DA

[__kaLipZo__]

Devious Assilants


[shadow=red,left,300]Mack[/shadow]: Nice verse, didnt use the great amount of multis as usual but had some better punches then your old verses, the flow was dope as usual n had a few personals.

4.1

[shadow=red,left,300]Xearo[/shadow]: Your getting better w/ your vocab "meaning your not using those huge ass words like you used to" but still had a couple big ones..=) the flow was off at times to me, but the punches hit hard and had the quite amount of personals.

4.2

[shadow=red,left,300]MOC[/shadow]: Nice verse, not to many personals but some nice punches that I liked, flow was dope, went well and was feelin this one.

4.4

[shadow=red,left,300]Mack[/shadow]"2nd Verse": This wasnt near as good as your 1st verse, but filled in for ya homie so its all good...flow was dope of course but the wordplay kinda blew..

3.1


Melanin Deficient


[shadow=blue,left,300]KVB[/shadow]: Nice verse..attacked well and flowed well to..could of used more personals..Imo, ubt decent verse, hit hard.

4.2

[shadow=blue,left,300]Blade[/shadow]: By far the best verse in this battle, wordplay was hard hitting, punches, metaz, had it all.

4.7

[shadow=blue,left,300]Illicit[/shadow]: Decent verse, typical Illicit verse, liked the MULTIS, =) flowed well to, some nice punches.

4.0

[shadow=blue,left,300]Pr1mo[/shadow]: Could of put forth more effort for your crew...6 bars dont cut it, but they were some nice ones, if Primo would of spit more....could drastically changed the outcome of this battle..

3.6



Devious Assilants

15.8


Melanin Deficient

15.5