Yo, this Blade newbie is aiiiight

[TheSheriff]

Dont take everthing as it seems to be/
the inner truth lies within, looks can decieve/
a rabbit, revealing the tru for mof a cobra/
with every bite, venom thrustin into your veins making yo blood colder/ (freeze)
creepin into your brain, in your own blood u drown/
paralysing yo mouth, so u cant talk trash, not utter a sound/
anger, hate, jealousy/
is that whats fueling you to turn against me?/
Lifes hard when all yo homies, turn into enimies/
Now bitch you will suffer for back stabbin me/
blastin you to oblivion, is your chosen destiny/
on da back of milk cartons, "lost, maby dead"/
6pm news, "body found with MCC written on his chest"
In the courtroom, "how do u plead"? me= "not guilty"/
"for killin punkass bitches, I consider it my duty"/
Spreadin my knowledge all across the world/
Planting seeds of wisdome widin every boy and girl/
I got my mind on my pen/
for thats the only weapon i use as my mack-10/
wirtin shit deeper then da pasific, blastin you to hell\

Like y'all said, he got promise.