Keystyle Feedbak plz

[ILLPrOpHeCy]

The untouchable delivery is like that of a thunderbolt
Cats monitor my moves to forecast under the scope
Advice in battling dont seek refuge under trees
Cuz when I strike niggas leave with a temp of 400 degrees
How I warned you you aint hear the sirens going off?
But you decided to play it cool not really knowing the cost the dominant force
One of nature biggest threats my chemical verbal warfare scientists aint figured yet
Destinations tall buildings igloos and small children
Burned down a rain forest unable to be blamed for it
My rhymes are flame throwers and your whacks is gasoline
Cause enough damage to ambulance on half the scene
The sad part is that you actually have some dreams
But Im electrically charged and these cats is whack
Get crunk or get ghost Im jumping off the ropes
Elbow drop like "Randy Savage" fucking around with third most talk back and get smack aint cut no slack
Cause I got more dirty gats than they got in "iraq"
Hit "hitler" brick splitter with a fifty round spitter
You better duck when I buck cause I aint no quitter
Talk down and get popped fuck with us and get dropped
"Ill P" is on top aint no taking bitch im ready for that!

[Inspectah]

Hi, the flow was good, had me feeling it all the way, i think you need to use some multis' i mean you dont ave to, coz its a good ryhme, but nowadays, unless you literally dope, then you gotta use 1 or 2 multi's to get these cats dropping feedback, just a suggestion, i liked ya ryhme, peace dawg!

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BTW: can i ave some more feedback on my other keys i did.. thnx!