Author Topic: 15 bar keystyle (Read 133 times)

gods saviour · « **on:** February 19, 2003, 04:51:19 PM »

despite my rank i still drop ill writes/
discriminate the government I elminate your legal rights/1
keep dyin and i'll keep trying to progress above gawds gift/
babies crying, guns shrieking, is the man in the sky sleeping? uh oh god slipped/2
i wont hesitate to complete lifes decisions made by the ancient gods visions/
god put me on earth to complete and meet the required missions/3
klips and nyvillian are continuosly filling with the empty clip rounds/
i drop bomb verses which leave ya'll resting in hearses,fragmenting and nesting on wartime explosion mounds/4
lost temptations keep the black white and the asians unity ignite/
dis rap game is my life, my ever so guiding light/5
your bullets be richoteing aimlessly and namelessly elimante the weak/
evil juggalos ruing slims life- wit they faces painting like clown freaks/6
50 cent dissing wu tang when he knew they was iller/
thinkin he the main show-talent seat filler/7
noobs rhymes are microwavable and come with a removable lid/
they heat up quikly but cool down like a temper tantrum little kid/8
noobs living by reputation but when the frontation occures they hit the ground running/
gawds the #1 contestant for jutin timberlakes mtv becoming/9
he doesnt pack guns- he packs bubble gum/
going after seeds the helpless and the troubled ones/10
he has cotton mouth cuz all he spits is pure white/
he couldnt get lifted if hes was in a mid air collision flight/11
dese noobs get cold off the heat when they retreat/
when they loose they turn to booze and cant admit defeat/12\
im sick of these dik ryding fake fighting rappers/
slacking off even when they jacking off- nuthin but slackers/13
caliming they blowing brains on pavment when they have trouble growing fame
all together/
they punches hitting soft, feeling light as a feather/14
my rhymes come straight up like an erectional spit/
ya'll cummin at me not havning a directional hit

KVB · « **Reply #1 on:** February 20, 2003, 02:41:39 AM »

That was tight as hell homie. One of the deepest+best verses I have heard in a while... props

Kill · « **Reply #2 on:** February 20, 2003, 03:35:40 AM »

damn, that was alot better than that 4 bar shit you dropped sum time ago

Inspectah · « **Reply #3 on:** February 20, 2003, 06:23:22 AM »

1 word for it.. ILL.. the hole concept of your writing is shown in ya flow and techniques to get it accross... lol well ryhmed.. keep spittin acid..

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