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Jazzin...
« on: March 01, 2003, 08:30:25 AM »
Just sitn sippin starbux and listenin to Jazz..


Sittin-back-an'-Maxin, To smooth Jazz-sounds...
Rappin-fact-an'-lapsin, Starbux cruisin my veins, passed-out...
Unconsiously writin my fingertips tappin-away...
Slappin-my-face, with New Orleans rhythm snappin-my-sway...
Trapped in a trance thinkin of a Women who's-mine...
True-ties with lyrical justice, couldn't compare to her eyes...
Powerhouse trumpets, strummin what is the chillest vibe...
The "realest" listen an cant hide, from Nats way to confide...
Cool and collected, dressin and impressin-This-world...
Sax grazin tracks, even the wax is-checkin-its-whirl...
Piano comes in, drummin it's own-percussion...
Stirring eyes, Billy Holiday's proned-discussion...
Miles Davis...The best is yet to come, and Wont-it-be-Fly?
Sonnets-derived from louisinna steet's, seasoned cry....
Sax Dies down...low piano roll to Natalie Coles-voice...
With out choise the human body lobbies to the slow-noise...

holla ;D
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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2003, 08:39:02 AM »
sum nice shit, keep it up
 

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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #2 on: March 01, 2003, 09:53:24 AM »
usin your way of judgn like a 1.6/5...
 

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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #3 on: March 01, 2003, 10:15:56 AM »
lol   nice comment Kill. ida came up with a smartass one if u hadnt.

but yeh, niiiice piece man,  really.
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« Reply #4 on: March 01, 2003, 01:41:22 PM »
usin your way of judgn like a 1.6/5...

It ant my fault he ripped you... Your flow sucked anyway, I was bein polite...
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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #5 on: March 01, 2003, 02:03:09 PM »
lol
 

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« Reply #6 on: March 01, 2003, 02:20:19 PM »
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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #7 on: March 01, 2003, 02:26:40 PM »
i was laughing at you dissing kill

it was a nice piece, i liked the multis, keep it up
 

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« Reply #8 on: March 01, 2003, 02:30:40 PM »
i was laughing at you dissing kill

it was a nice piece, i liked the multis, keep it up

aright. Thankyou
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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #9 on: March 01, 2003, 03:27:54 PM »
some real nice shit homie.. keep spittin
 

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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #10 on: March 01, 2003, 03:52:09 PM »
^^ this some nice shit dawg.. some dope newbies. entarin this board....

~ 1 ~ nice keep flowin...
 

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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #11 on: March 01, 2003, 05:19:30 PM »
usin your way of judgn like a 1.6/5...

It ant my fault he ripped you... Your flow sucked anyway, I was bein polite...

My flow sucked ? Most people will agree with me on Rippa's havin been harder to flow, but fuck that. Look man, sayin I'm wack you're a lil too late. 2 of the 3 heavyweight champs in WCC history labeled me a heavyweight, all of them wanted me in their crews, I've been holdin the middleweight belt since 09/27/02, defending it 4 times, KO'in a hall of famer etc...point is, I'm not braggin and nuthin but all that is kinda more important to my self-confidence than sum newbie who dropped shit on a level I consider at least 10 MC's on this board (including myself) capable of writin on comin up callin me wack. Sorry

And yes, he did rip me accordin to you but his verse got a 2.5/5, hence it was pretty bad too. And i'm sorry to say that (naw, actually I'm not), goin from what you've shown you are not better. Think I couldn't rhyme "vibe" with "eyes" ? C'mon, it ain't even a rhyme really

I won't contradict myself; your shit was nice. That's it. Nice. Not sum dope ass heat, nice

 
 

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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #12 on: March 01, 2003, 05:45:54 PM »
Pero a lo mejor tienes algunos problemas con la pronunciacion ingles (sorry, there's no accents on my keyboard). Porque...

*smartass Kill got nuthin to do and starts to dissect that verse*

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Sittin-back-an'-Maxin, To smooth Jazz-sounds...
Rappin-fact-an'-lapsin, Starbux cruisin my veins, passed-out...
Why are you addin "sittin" and "rappin" to your word chains when they don't rhyme at all ? You don't have to make it look longer that way

Quote
Unconsiously writin my fingertips tappin-away...
Slappin-my-face, with New Orleans rhythm snappin-my-sway...
Trapped in a trance thinkin of a Women who's-mine...
True-ties with lyrical justice, couldn't compare to her eyes...
Powerhouse trumpets, strummin what is the chillest vibe...
The "realest" listen an cant hide, from Nats way to confide...
Aight, this is where you fuck up ya whole flow...after rhymin the "app"-words with away, face and sway (not really immaculate either) you say "trapped-in-a-TRANCE", which destroys the whole multie-based structure, cause "trapped-in-a-TRACE" wouldn't make much sense, eh ? Then there's no multies no more, all of a sudden, and you rhyme "eyes" with "mine", "ties" and "vibe"...how impressive

Quote
Cool and collected, dressin and impressin-This-world...
Sax grazin tracks, even the wax is-checkin-its-whirl
again, how the fuck is that "is" connected with the rest of it ?

Quote
Piano comes in, drummin it's own-percussion...
Stirring eyes, Billy Holiday's proned-discussion...
Miles Davis...The best is yet to come, and Wont-it-be-Fly?
Sonnets-derived from louisinna steet's, seasoned cry....
why the fuck do you think does "sonnet" have a DOUBLE-n ? Yes, cause that makes the pronounciation different from what it would be if it was "sonet" with a single n...and no, the way it is it does not rhyme with "won't-it" cause for bthat it'd have to be "sonet"

Fa real, I have to re-rate this...It don't deserve such a high rating. Que puta mierda has escribido, bein merciful I give this a 1.1/10...LOL



 

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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #13 on: March 01, 2003, 09:24:34 PM »
Pero a lo mejor tienes algunos problemas con la pronunciacion ingles (sorry, there's no accents on my keyboard). Porque...

*smartass Kill got nuthin to do and starts to dissect that verse*

Quote
Sittin-back-an'-Maxin, To smooth Jazz-sounds...
Rappin-fact-an'-lapsin, Starbux cruisin my veins, passed-out...
Why are you addin "sittin" and "rappin" to your word chains when they don't rhyme at all ? You don't have to make it look longer that way

Quote
Unconsiously writin my fingertips tappin-away...
Slappin-my-face, with New Orleans rhythm snappin-my-sway...
Trapped in a trance thinkin of a Women who's-mine...
True-ties with lyrical justice, couldn't compare to her eyes...
Powerhouse trumpets, strummin what is the chillest vibe...
The "realest" listen an cant hide, from Nats way to confide...
Aight, this is where you fuck up ya whole flow...after rhymin the "app"-words with away, face and sway (not really immaculate either) you say "trapped-in-a-TRANCE", which destroys the whole multie-based structure, cause "trapped-in-a-TRACE" wouldn't make much sense, eh ? Then there's no multies no more, all of a sudden, and you rhyme "eyes" with "mine", "ties" and "vibe"...how impressive

Quote
Cool and collected, dressin and impressin-This-world...
Sax grazin tracks, even the wax is-checkin-its-whirl
again, how the fuck is that "is" connected with the rest of it ?

Quote
Piano comes in, drummin it's own-percussion...
Stirring eyes, Billy Holiday's proned-discussion...
Miles Davis...The best is yet to come, and Wont-it-be-Fly?
Sonnets-derived from louisinna steet's, seasoned cry....
why the fuck do you think does "sonnet" have a DOUBLE-n ? Yes, cause that makes the pronounciation different from what it would be if it was "sonet" with a single n...and no, the way it is it does not rhyme with "won't-it" cause for bthat it'd have to be "sonet"

Fa real, I have to re-rate this...It don't deserve such a high rating. Que puta mierda has escribido, bein merciful I give this a 1.1/10...LOL





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Re:Jazzin...
« Reply #14 on: March 02, 2003, 04:44:03 AM »
LOL this is funny.
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« Reply #15 on: March 02, 2003, 12:24:10 PM »
Pero a lo mejor tienes algunos problemas con la pronunciacion ingles (sorry, there's no accents on my keyboard). Porque...

*smartass Kill got nuthin to do and starts to dissect that verse*

Quote
Sittin-back-an'-Maxin, To smooth Jazz-sounds...
Rappin-fact-an'-lapsin, Starbux cruisin my veins, passed-out...
Why are you addin "sittin" and "rappin" to your word chains when they don't rhyme at all ? You don't have to make it look longer that way

Quote
Unconsiously writin my fingertips tappin-away...
Slappin-my-face, with New Orleans rhythm snappin-my-sway...
Trapped in a trance thinkin of a Women who's-mine...
True-ties with lyrical justice, couldn't compare to her eyes...
Powerhouse trumpets, strummin what is the chillest vibe...
The "realest" listen an cant hide, from Nats way to confide...
Aight, this is where you fuck up ya whole flow...after rhymin the "app"-words with away, face and sway (not really immaculate either) you say "trapped-in-a-TRANCE", which destroys the whole multie-based structure, cause "trapped-in-a-TRACE" wouldn't make much sense, eh ? Then there's no multies no more, all of a sudden, and you rhyme "eyes" with "mine", "ties" and "vibe"...how impressive

Quote
Cool and collected, dressin and impressin-This-world...
Sax grazin tracks, even the wax is-checkin-its-whirl
again, how the fuck is that "is" connected with the rest of it ?

Quote
Piano comes in, drummin it's own-percussion...
Stirring eyes, Billy Holiday's proned-discussion...
Miles Davis...The best is yet to come, and Wont-it-be-Fly?
Sonnets-derived from louisinna steet's, seasoned cry....
why the fuck do you think does "sonnet" have a DOUBLE-n ? Yes, cause that makes the pronounciation different from what it would be if it was "sonet" with a single n...and no, the way it is it does not rhyme with "won't-it" cause for bthat it'd have to be "sonet"

Fa real, I have to re-rate this...It don't deserve such a high rating. Que puta mierda has escribido, bein merciful I give this a 1.1/10...LOL





good job...Maybe i did underestimate your ability...an the "sonnet" i was looking for is spelt like that...but props to ya for breakin it down...
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