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Inspectah

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I:// Girlfriend...
« on: February 28, 2003, 09:05:04 AM »
You spend more time with them than you ever see me//
Fuckin' spend more time dealing with they problems, you'd might aswell be family//
Your around 10 doors away, not far for you to travel i suppose//
But its a fuckin' life crisis to catch a bus that my direction, its company chose// (buses)
If i walked in the rain, an awaited recognition for effort, i wouldnt get it//
I might as well of said, i'll always make the commitment, if i said that you would of left it//
Then when alone, you'd still query they whereabouts, no matter what were doing//
Quick, txt, then a phone call from yur answer, satisified that out they aint going//
I push feelings aside, and deal with yours, you dont see what ive been lumbered with//
Gots no more options, you have 1 choice, sort out ya priorities, coz ya days numbered with//
Coz it feels like when im with you im in heaven, but soon theres a change//
When surrounded by friends, im equal to them, seems your personality got n exchange//
I get the same respect, but hardly any in return, i've decided to say fuk it, your turn//
Your gonna feel like the day i was made to believe you wanted me to take you//
But it was a joke, i was so gutted i choked, my emotions overloaded how could you//
Im meant to take a joke, that fucks around with feelings//
Thinking now i dont want a part of it no more, that what we do as no meaning//
You run around telling your friends like they care//
But you envy em, coz they changed you, even dyed your pink hair//
When i was in turmoil, with my fa-m-ily there was no support, no you jus' me//
You talk sometimes like i do everything wrong, i even become ashamed of me//
But fuck it, this love shit, had enough of it, but to be honest, can you blame me?//

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« Last Edit: February 28, 2003, 09:43:25 AM by []nspekta »
 

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Re:I:// Girlfriend...
« Reply #1 on: February 28, 2003, 09:08:18 AM »
Nice verse man.. Deep.. I was feelin it. The flow was  a little off but it doesnt really matter
« Last Edit: February 28, 2003, 09:43:23 AM by Gareefa »
 

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Re:I:// Girlfriend...
« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2003, 09:16:14 AM »
Thnx dawg.. that was all built up!

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Re:I:// Girlfriend...
« Reply #3 on: March 01, 2003, 02:49:12 PM »
*bump* need more feedback... please this means so much to me...

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Re:I:// Girlfriend...
« Reply #4 on: March 01, 2003, 03:00:00 PM »
*bump* need more feedback...

Prolly wont get it thou man.,.!
 

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Re:I:// Girlfriend...
« Reply #5 on: March 02, 2003, 03:18:39 AM »
I think it's good
props man



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Re:I:// Girlfriend...
« Reply #6 on: March 02, 2003, 04:20:57 AM »
yeah its good
the flow was a bit off like he said, but still good

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Re:I:// Girlfriend...
« Reply #7 on: March 02, 2003, 09:59:34 AM »
Reply don't talk shit Inspekta
Cuz I need more feedback too



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Re:I:// Girlfriend...
« Reply #8 on: March 02, 2003, 01:40:23 PM »
Reply don't talk shit Inspekta
Cuz I need more feedback too

^^ WTF?  :o What i do?