Jazzin...

[|JEM|ILL|]

Pero a lo mejor tienes algunos problemas con la pronunciacion ingles (sorry, there's no accents on my keyboard). Porque...

*smartass Kill got nuthin to do and starts to dissect that verse*

Sittin-back-an'-Maxin, To smooth Jazz-sounds...
Rappin-fact-an'-lapsin, Starbux cruisin my veins, passed-out...

Why are you addin "sittin" and "rappin" to your word chains when they don't rhyme at all ? You don't have to make it look longer that way

Unconsiously writin my fingertips tappin-away...
Slappin-my-face, with New Orleans rhythm snappin-my-sway...
Trapped in a trance thinkin of a Women who's-mine...
True-ties with lyrical justice, couldn't compare to her eyes...
Powerhouse trumpets, strummin what is the chillest vibe...
The "realest" listen an cant hide, from Nats way to confide...

Aight, this is where you fuck up ya whole flow...after rhymin the "app"-words with away, face and sway (not really immaculate either) you say "trapped-in-a-TRANCE", which destroys the whole multie-based structure, cause "trapped-in-a-TRACE" wouldn't make much sense, eh ? Then there's no multies no more, all of a sudden, and you rhyme "eyes" with "mine", "ties" and "vibe"...how impressive

Cool and collected, dressin and impressin-This-world...
Sax grazin tracks, even the wax is-checkin-its-whirl

again, how the fuck is that "is" connected with the rest of it ?

Piano comes in, drummin it's own-percussion...
Stirring eyes, Billy Holiday's proned-discussion...
Miles Davis...The best is yet to come, and Wont-it-be-Fly?
Sonnets-derived from louisinna steet's, seasoned cry....

why the fuck do you think does "sonnet" have a DOUBLE-n ? Yes, cause that makes the pronounciation different from what it would be if it was "sonet" with a single n...and no, the way it is it does not rhyme with "won't-it" cause for bthat it'd have to be "sonet"

Fa real, I have to re-rate this...It don't deserve such a high rating. Que puta mierda has escribido, bein merciful I give this a 1.1/10...LOL

good job...Maybe i did underestimate your ability...an the "sonnet" i was looking for is spelt like that...but props to ya for breakin it down...