My New Song. All Opinions Needed !!!!

[yung-g]

check out this new song me and my boy did at the studio bout a week or two ago. i rap first and last. please give me some feedback on this one. i need both negative & positive. go and vote for it at soundclick too. links are below.

"It Aint A Game"
Young-G f/Murderous Mon
Produced by: Killa-J
Recorded @ NEW Studios. Oakland, CA.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/mobbedoutmuzikmusic.htm

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=242319&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=242319&q=Hi

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Pretty cool...I like that beat...Some laid back shit...Ain't feelin the flows too much, but they coo...Yall is hard to understand...Its on some Bay shit though, so it's coo...PeACe

[yung-g]

thankz for your reply folkz.