Fill Them Shoes..

[Reef]

ya know most times in this life i just think everythin is pointless/
im always in distress, always dialing 999/
everything in everyone else's life is fine, so why does god always fuck wit mine?/
im tryin to live, not harming anyone/
so to repay that you take the one thing away from me that makes me my grandad's grandson/
you take him when he didnt do anything wrong/
what i wouldnt give, to bring him back, back to where he belongs/
the funeral was the hardest man, watchin you being lowered into the earth/
from death to birth, you'll never know how much you meant to any of us/
we loved you with all our hearts, how did it start? now this may not be smart/
but im gettin a tattoo, its an eagle.. to represent you/
so i will never forget your face and your laugh/
when this life changes pace, i'll look at my arm and relaise where my roots start/
cause im a younger version of you/
but im clueless.. how can i fill them shoes?/

[Inspectah]

ya know most times in this life i just think everythin is pointless/
im always in distress, always dialing 999/
everything in everyone else's life is fine, so why does god always fuck wit mine?/
im tryin to live, not harming anyone/
so to repay that you take the one thing away from me that makes me my grandad's grandson/
you take him when he didnt do anything wrong/
what i wouldnt give, to bring him back, back to where he belongs/
the funeral was the hardest man, watchin you being lowered into the earth/
from death to birth, you'll never know how much you meant to any of us/
we loved you with all our hearts, how did it start? now this may not be smart/
but im gettin a tattoo, its an eagle.. to represent you/
so i will never forget your face and your laugh/
when this life changes pace, i'll look at my arm and relaise where my roots start/
cause im a younger version of you/
but im clueless.. how can i fill them shoes?/

^^ Deep.. i thought this was the most indepth feeling/emotion filled keystyle i seen from you!

The lines i liked the most, and touched me were:

so to repay that you take the one thing away from me that makes me my grandad's grandson/
you take him when he didnt do anything wrong/

^^ man, i know how you feel, my grandad pulled us all together, when they gone, you realise how much you loved, cared, and adored them!

from death to birth, you'll never know how much you meant to any of us/

^^ That was very creative, and went well with the hole scheme, well thought!

Overall.. your key was tight, in terms of you showed your feelings, and i understood them!

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[e_gyp]

step one
step two
step..

nothing's lost

[Reef]

Uppin 4 feedback

[Entreri117]

Real nice piece here.  Was deep as hell, and I was feelin all of it...

PROPS Reef

[da_notorious_mack]

damn holmes that was deep as hell....when im readin ya shit...it sounds like eminems flow...and thats a big compliment right there....

[TheSheriff]

Beautiful

[__kaLipZo__]

Word, this shit was mad deep, flow was real dope, one of your finer pieces i must say.