Author Topic: my life now keystyle.  (Read 41 times)

abstruse

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my life now keystyle.
« on: March 07, 2003, 06:34:56 PM »
thought i had a friend/
dawg understand i'm just trying to amend/
juss tryin to better myself/
you dont know how i felt/
when you broke my health/
i'm pourin my life out through my mouth/
battlin everyday struggles in my house/
its gettin hard tho/
not knowin whether my parents love any mo/
trying to improve not bein the average joe/
damn its hard to try to express myself with words in a flow/

its short, simple, but if you guys could only understand WTF i'm going through. my bones are startin to crack day by day.
« Last Edit: March 07, 2003, 06:36:15 PM by abstruse »


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Re:my life now keystyle.
« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2003, 10:28:59 PM »
Nice piece, simplistic, but nice, very deep, find it good to let your emotions out in a rhyme..makes ya feel kinda, well better, keep droppin some mo homie
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Re:my life now keystyle...stretch
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2003, 04:39:47 AM »
dog
just borrowing your topic
because some things need to go on
continue
's logic
special of the day never on the menu
stop think Run &then you
begin to begin too
wrap'em tight
movin..right
no food..so your head is light
&still you a dog..so you bite
so so you
runnin over the fences
rippin  pants
knowin you been caught
witha glance
no chance
down &OFFPlank
just keep on..
whatever