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!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« on: March 20, 2003, 06:11:53 PM »
This is the beat which won me my beat-battle against Playa Tay...I want some feedback on it, so I'm posting it here...Check:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/singlemusic.htm (First Beat on the page titled "Now_I_Know - Premo")
 

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2003, 10:07:42 PM »
you like lookin at ass pics dont ya?


thaz a cool beat tho.. it mite be a little too repative sample wise maybe take ya favorite notes and chop with them and take out the little sound int he background  but still good diggin nice sample good drumz props for this.

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #2 on: March 20, 2003, 10:14:44 PM »
you like lookin at ass pics dont ya?




LMAO...Naah, I have an "ass of the week" thing going on in my sig if you didn't notice...LoL


Thanks for the feedback though...I appreciate it...PeACe
 

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2003, 11:49:39 AM »
Yeah its a pretty tight beat, i like the sample you used and stuff. The drums were pretty cool although I thought you could have prehaps only used the brush between the kick and snare like very 2 bars or something cause it did get a bit annoying having it every bar. Also, i'm not quite sure about the bleeping sound effect, I thought it could have been turned down a bit volume wise so that it blended in better with the sample and drums instead of sounding isolated. Dope beat though man, keep this shit up.

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #4 on: March 25, 2003, 01:11:27 PM »
damn the sample is sooo tight, but i feel you failed on capitalizing on it...damn that shit could be classic...i think you should go back and start from scratch with the sample and build on it again...maybe throw in some classic premo beats to guide you along...if you can hook up some nice shit, i'd definately rock to it if i got the chance, peace.
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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #5 on: March 25, 2003, 04:29:06 PM »
damn the sample is sooo tight, but i feel you failed on capitalizing on it...damn that shit could be classic...i think you should go back and start from scratch with the sample and build on it again...maybe throw in some classic premo beats to guide you along...if you can hook up some nice shit, i'd definately rock to it if i got the chance, peace.


U mean you didn't like the drums or what? I don't exactly get what you're saying...Holla back and tell me what to fix up...PeACe
 

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2003, 07:09:59 AM »
well first off there is no bassline...this sample needs a tight bassline...maybe have i-bo or phiasko co-produce this a have them hook up a bassline...ssecond the sound effect that you have come in at the 50 second mark sound way to computerized, the sample leads me to believe this is pure hip-hop and then that computer future type sound kicks in...also, i don't think it's necessary to play the sample throughout the track, it loses it's hype...take it out here and there...also, you should have j-steez hook up some scratches here and there, expecially when the drums kick in at the start of the song...the drum beat is different and it's creative but repetitive...

this is what i meant when i said start from scratch with this because this sample is sooo tight, like some M.O.P. shit and it should not go to waste...holler if you change it at all, peace.
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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2003, 05:54:42 AM »
Yeah its a pretty tight beat, i like the sample you used and stuff. The drums were pretty cool although I thought you could have prehaps only used the brush between the kick and snare like very 2 bars or something cause it did get a bit annoying having it every bar. Also, i'm not quite sure about the bleeping sound effect, I thought it could have been turned down a bit volume wise so that it blended in better with the sample and drums instead of sounding isolated. Dope beat though man, keep this shit up.


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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #8 on: April 21, 2003, 02:04:02 AM »
damn the sample is sooo tight, but i feel you failed on capitalizing on it...damn that shit could be classic...i think you should go back and start from scratch with the sample and build on it again...maybe throw in some classic premo beats to guide you along...if you can hook up some nice shit, i'd definately rock to it if i got the chance, peace.


U mean you didn't like the drums or what? I don't exactly get what you're saying...Holla back and tell me what to fix up...PeACe


hes sayin u lame, try being less repetetive, its fuckin boring
 

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #9 on: April 21, 2003, 07:50:16 AM »
i quite liked the beat. could have used some better bass tho.

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #10 on: April 21, 2003, 04:00:03 PM »
damn the sample is sooo tight, but i feel you failed on capitalizing on it...damn that shit could be classic...i think you should go back and start from scratch with the sample and build on it again...maybe throw in some classic premo beats to guide you along...if you can hook up some nice shit, i'd definately rock to it if i got the chance, peace.


U mean you didn't like the drums or what? I don't exactly get what you're saying...Holla back and tell me what to fix up...PeACe


hes sayin u lame, try being less repetetive, its fuckin boring



Please...You've been making beats for 6 years, I've been making beats for 6 months, and I'm 6 times better than you...Do the math, Indiot...
 

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #11 on: April 22, 2003, 12:45:34 AM »
damn the sample is sooo tight, but i feel you failed on capitalizing on it...damn that shit could be classic...i think you should go back and start from scratch with the sample and build on it again...maybe throw in some classic premo beats to guide you along...if you can hook up some nice shit, i'd definately rock to it if i got the chance, peace.


U mean you didn't like the drums or what? I don't exactly get what you're saying...Holla back and tell me what to fix up...PeACe


hes sayin u lame, try being less repetetive, its fuckin boring



Please...You've been making beats for 6 years, I've been making beats for 6 months, and I'm 6 times better than you...Do the math, Indiot...


Suuuuure, hey mate, d'ya fancy a audio beat battle in a months time brotha? I gotsto go sip some tea now and eat my crumpetts and drain the mucus frmo my huge nose  ::)


*and LOL@ 6 years hahahahahahaa, I didnt even listen to rap 6 years ago, I'm a Whore
« Last Edit: April 22, 2003, 05:51:49 PM by Now_I_Know »
 

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #12 on: April 22, 2003, 04:08:13 AM »
really dope sample u used.... imo you couod completly remove the computer sounds.... the drums are cool, but the beat needs a bass

check my beat
http://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php?board=10;action=display;threadid=32362

 

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #13 on: April 22, 2003, 05:53:45 PM »
damn the sample is sooo tight, but i feel you failed on capitalizing on it...damn that shit could be classic...i think you should go back and start from scratch with the sample and build on it again...maybe throw in some classic premo beats to guide you along...if you can hook up some nice shit, i'd definately rock to it if i got the chance, peace.


U mean you didn't like the drums or what? I don't exactly get what you're saying...Holla back and tell me what to fix up...PeACe


hes sayin u lame, try being less repetetive, its fuckin boring



Please...You've been making beats for 6 years, I've been making beats for 6 months, and I'm 6 times better than you...Do the math, Indiot...


Suuuuure, hey mate, d'ya fancy a audio beat battle in a months time brotha? I gotsto go sip some tea now and eat my crumpetts and drain the mucus frmo my huge nose  ::)


*and LOL@ 6 years hahahahahahaa, I didnt even listen to rap 6 years ago, I'm a Whore



Kunal, what ever happened to your battle with Minority? LMAO...Pussy'd out?...Anyways, I'd be glad to beat you in a battle...Set a date and make a thread in the Audio Battle section...PeACe
 

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Re:!!!!!!New SCCIT Beat!!!!!!!...Doin it Premo style...
« Reply #14 on: April 23, 2003, 11:38:54 AM »
damn the sample is sooo tight, but i feel you failed on capitalizing on it...damn that shit could be classic...i think you should go back and start from scratch with the sample and build on it again...maybe throw in some classic premo beats to guide you along...if you can hook up some nice shit, i'd definately rock to it if i got the chance, peace.


U mean you didn't like the drums or what? I don't exactly get what you're saying...Holla back and tell me what to fix up...PeACe


hes sayin u lame, try being less repetetive, its fuckin boring



Please...You've been making beats for 6 years, I've been making beats for 6 months, and I'm 6 times better than you...Do the math, Indiot...


Suuuuure, hey mate, d'ya fancy a audio beat battle in a months time brotha? I gotsto go sip some tea now and eat my crumpetts and drain the mucus frmo my huge nose  ::)


*and LOL@ 6 years hahahahahahaa, I didnt even listen to rap 6 years ago, I'm a Whore



Kunal, what ever happened to your battle with Minority? LMAO...Pussy'd out?...Anyways, I'd be glad to beat you in a battle...Set a date and make a thread in the Audio Battle section...PeACe

Dont be modifying my thread...

and the Minority battle wasnt woprth a audio made by me, so I just posted up da lyrics and my lyrics itself murdered his wack lil "audio"